英文写作方法.ppt

英文写作enjoyyourwriting 高分作文的五大特性 1 条理性 段落完整 层次分明2 准确性 语法准确 用词精当3 流畅性 层次清晰 行文连贯4 简洁 多样性 语言简洁 不重复5 思想性 文章立意高 表达个人观点内容积极向上 英语写作方法六大原则 1 高级词汇原则2 状语提前原则3 短语优先原则4 并列句 复合句和特殊句式原则5 长短句交替原则6 短文分段分层原则 其他注意事项 1 字迹清楚 书写流利 2 审题认真 符合要求 文章观点明确 3 句子既要生动 又要简明扼要 4 尽量避免重复使用相同句型 词汇和短语 使用分词 Onceitisheld itwillbringalotofchancestoBeijingandmakeitmoreprosperousandmodern Onceheld itwillbringalotofchancestoBeijing makingitmoreprosperousandmodern 学会使用丰富的句式 使用定语从句 Manypollutionproblemscanbemoreserious anditcaneventuallydodamagetooursurroundings Manypollutionproblemscanbemoreserious whichcaneventuallydodamagetooursurroundings MorevisitorsfromallovertheworldwillfloodintoChina whichfinanciallybenefitBeijing What smore morepeoplewillbeattractedtoBeijing whichwillcontributetothedevelopmentoftourismtoagreatextent 使用with结构 Whenthenumberoftouristsisincreasing trafficwillbecomemorecrowded Withthenumberoftouristsincreasing trafficwillbecomemorecrowded WithmoreandmorevisitorsgoingtoBeijing tourismwillbeflourishing Witheveryonedoinghisbit thegamewillbeagreatsuccess 使用被动句 Measuresshouldbetakentoavoidthebadeffectmentionedabove OnlyinthiswaycanweholdasuccessfulOlympicGames 使用倒装结构 二 学会使用较高级词汇 用词准确 得体是写作的前提 在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语 既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力 又有助于获得高分 Howtouseadvancedexpressions Inmyopinion itisdifficulttoholdtheOlympics Inmyopinion itischallengingtoholdtheOlympics ItwillhaveagreateffectonthedevelopmentofBeijing far reaching profound significant Tourismisbecomingaboomingindustrywiththedevelopmentofthecity Chinawillenjoyaboomineconomy 促进 繁荣经济 旅游发展 Somestudentsseeitasagoodopportunitytoboosteconomyandacceleratethepaceoftheconstructionofourmodernsociety HoldingtheOlympicGameswillpromotethedevelopmentofeconomy makingthecitymoreboomingandmodern 中国位于太平洋西岸 地大物博 历史悠久 面积960万平方公里 ChinaliesonthewestbankofthePacificOcean Itisverybigandhasalotofthings Itshistoryisverylong anditsareais9 6millionsquarekilometers Practicetochallengeyourself China whichliesonthewestofthePacificOcean isrichinnaturalresources Itisagreatcountrywithalonghistory coveringanareaof9 6millionsquarekilometers China alargecountrywithalonghistory liesonthewestofthePacificOcean Itisabundantinnaturalresources coveringanareaof9 6millionsquarekilometers Replacetheunderlinedexpressions Amongallthepeoplegoingtowork cardriversmakeup18 2 TheInternetcanhelpusfinishmanytasks 3 Thelibraryisimportanttous 4 Onecanonlybecomeaskilledoneaftermanyfailures 5 Lastyearsawamoreandmorefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket 6 Hetriedtopasstheexam butfailed complete accomplish fulfill vital essential endless countless numerous witnessed attemptedto amountto accountfor getthrough 7 Somestudentsdon tvaluetheirmoneyatall 8 Itisalsoessentialthatyougetsomeskillsfortakingexams treasure cherish acquire obtain gain 9 Itwouldtakemeagreatdealoftime whichwouldsurelyinvitenumerousinconveniencestome undoubtedly unquestionably 10 Moreandmorepeoplecometobigcities whichcausesserioushousingproblems floodinto crowdinto pourinto definitely practice 随着家庭收入的增加 越来越多的人们能买起个人电脑 空调 手提电脑和数码相机等等 新旧变化 Withthefamilyincomeraised moreandmorepeoplecanaffordtobuypersonalcomputers air conditioners portablecomputers digitalcamerasandsoon 为了使得生态平衡 我们要保护野生动物 新旧变化 Inordertokeepbalanceofnature weshouldprotectwildanimals wildlife 多达百分之四十的男孩喜欢在网上打游戏 观点讨论 Asmanyas40percentoftheboyslikeplayinggamesonline 我写这封信 申请你们在报纸广告中招聘的职位 我认为我适合这工作 求职 Iwritethisletter applyingforthepostyouoffered offered ontheadsinthenewspaper IthinkIamfit suitableforthisposition 为了丰富学生的课外生活 学生会将组织一次邮票展览 格式套用语 Inordertoenrichthestudents out of classlife thestudents unionwillheldthisstampshow Toenrichthestudents sout of classlife thestudents unionwillheldthestampshow 如果我被接受 我一定会尽力干好工作 人物介绍 IfIamaccepted I llsurelytrymyeveryefforttodothejobwell 过去 人们过着贫困而简单的生活 新旧变化 4 Inthepast peopleled livedapoorandsimplelife Theylivedpoorlyandsimply 绝大部分的学生上网只是聊天 打游戏或者看电影 只有少数学生是我为了搜索信息或者国内外新闻 观点讨论 Mostofthestudentswhoareonnetarejusttohaveachat playgamesorseefilms Onlyafewstudentsonnetarejusttoseekinformationorlearnaboutnewsbothathomeandabroad 最近 我在200个学生中作了一个关于他们未来工作的调查 其中一半是男生 一半是女生 观点讨论 Recently Ihavemadeasurveyamong200studentsabouttheirfuturejobs Halfofthemareboysandhalfofthemaregirls Ihavesurveyedamong200studentsabout Halfofthem andtherest 随着中国经济的发展和中国的进入WTO 越来越多的轿车将进入普通家庭 WiththedevelopmentoftheChineseeconomyandChina sentryintoWTO moreandmorecarswillenter gointoordinaryfamilies 过渡词的使用 过渡词是一种关系指引词 一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担 此外 代词 连词 上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词 过渡词犹如 桥梁 在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用 学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑 启 承 转 合 过渡自然 融会贯通 连成一体 1 表并列关系的过渡词 and also aswell aswellas or too notonly butalso both and either or neither nor等 2 表递进关系的过渡词 besides inaddition 加之 除 之外 moreover 此外 而且 what smore what sworse等 3 表转折对比的过渡词 but however yet instead ontheotherhand onthecontrary although differentfrom despite inspiteof whereas unlike nevertheless notonly butalso here there yearsago today this that theformer thelatter then now thefirst whereasthesecond once now ontheonehand ontheotherhand some others 等 4 表原因的过渡词 because becauseof since as for nowthat thanksto dueto 由于 forthisreason owingto asfaras consideringthat seeingthat等 5 表结果的过渡词 so thus therefore asaresult sothat then thereby hence so that such that accordingly等 6 表条件的过渡词 if unless onconditionthat as solongas等 7 表时间的过渡词 when while after before until assoonas later afterwards soon lately recently since fromthenon eventually inthemeantime then suddenly atthesametime next earlythismorning year century afterawhile inafewdays now presently finally atlast allofasudden formnowon atpresent immediately themoment等 8 表特定的顺序关系的过渡词 first firstly second secondly third thirdly aboveall firstofall then next finally intheend atlast afterwards 后来 meanwhile 几乎同时 thereafter 在那以后 last finally eventually 终于 等 9 表换一种方式表达的过渡词 inotherwords thatistosay toputitanotherway等 10 表进行举例说明的过渡词 forinstance forexample take asanexample namely suchas like inotherwords thatistosay thatis等 11 表陈述事实的过渡词 infact actually asamatteroffact totellyouthetruth等 12 表强调的过渡词 certainly indeed aboveall surely mostimportant infact nodoubt withoutanydoubt truly obviously ofcourse actually asamatteroffact chiefly especially primarily inparticular undoubtedly absolutely等 13 表比较 对比的过渡词 like unlike inthesameway similarly besimilarto ratherthan onthecontrary bycontrast oneonehand ontheotherhand otherwise等 14 表目的的过渡词 forthisreason forthispurpose sothat inorderto soasto等 15 表总结的过渡词 inaword 总之 简言之 ingeneral inshort 总之 aboveall afterall generallyspeaking tosumup finally inconclusion toconclude atlast insummary onthewhole等 16 表增补的过渡词 inaddition furthermore again also besides moreover what smore similarly next finally等 2 文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成 在修辞中称为启 承 转 合 启 就是开头 承 是承接 转 是转折 合 是综合或总结 1 启 用于表示 启 的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头 过渡词 first firstofall atfirst inthefirstplace firstly tobeingwith tostartwith recently now atpresent inrecentyears ingeneral generallyspeaking atpresent lately currently 过渡句 Itisoftensaidthat Astheproverbsays Itgoeswithoutsayingthat Itisclear obviousthat Manypeopleoftenask 过渡词 second similarly inaddition besides then furthermore moreover whatismore whatisworse forexample forinstance certainly surely obviously inotherwords especially particularly inparticular indeed still third truly infact atthesametime nodoubt 2 承 表示 承 的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个句中 2 承 表示 承 的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个句中 过渡句 Itistruethat Everybodyknowsthat Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat Noonecandenythat Thereasonwhy isthat Thereisnodoubtthat Totake foranexample instance Weknowthat Whatismoreseriousisthat 3 转 用于 转 的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个句中 过渡词 but however ontheotherhand onthecontrary incontrast inanycase atanyrate 无论如何 nevertheless 虽然如此 otherwise or orelse while whereas but despite inspiteof yet instead 过渡句 Idonotbelievethat Perhapsyou llaskwhy Thismaybetrue butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto Thoughweareinbasicagreementwith yetdifferenceswillbefound That swhyifeelthat 4 合 用于 合 的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中 过渡词 inaword ingeneral inshort aboveall afterall generallyspeaking tosumup