2020届高考英语二轮复习写作中的高级表达妙记3如何筛选靓丽词汇学案.docx

妙记3 如何筛选靓丽词汇书面表达在英语高考中，担负着区分考生、选拔人才的功能。对于学优生来说，作文拿到四档分数仅是一个“平庸分”，很有可能与名校失之交臂，但五档分数又是把大多数考生挡在门外的一道槛。其实，四档与五档的差别是微小的，仅仅是一些细节的美化而已(参见下表对比展示)。在平时的训练中，考生应注重抓一些细节，杜绝一些瑕疵，就可以实现由“完成”到“完美”的蜕变、由“四档”到“五档”的晋升。因为本书针对学优生而编写，所以其编写定位起点高(重点讲如何打造亮点)，目标高(直指五档作文)。让学优生吃好吃饱、省时高效是本书的编写定位。四档作文与五档作文评定对比表第四档(1620分)第五档(2125分)考纲表述完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有。应用的语法结构和词汇能。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或。应用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖要点。应用了的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或；具备较强的语言运用能力。使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。了预期的写作目的。名师解读1.如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”，就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题，确保要点“全而不漏”，要点全面是书面表达得高分的必要条件。2.如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。3.如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。4.如何理解“具备较强的语言运用能力”评分标准中对考生所要求的语言得体，就是要求考生在表达时应根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等选择使用恰当的英语语言，尤其是不同体裁和题材的文章对用语方面有着不同的要求。5.如何理解“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分”一篇优秀的书面表达应该能做到段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，在文章与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，能迅速激起阅卷老师的兴奋点，赢得阅卷老师的好感，这是作文得高分的必备点。熟记四组靓点词汇让表达更鲜更靓本部分英汉对照，主要是便于背诵。使用时先把右列的词汇、例句等反复读熟，然后把右列遮住，看着左边的汉语提示来翻译背诵。第一组名词及名词短语1.例句现在你们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。Now you have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.2.例句有4个基本的选项，简述如下。There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.3.例句所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。All the schools have music and dancing classes as parts of the curriculum.4.例句他们称他们预期这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。They say they expect the meeting to have a marked impact on the future of the country.5.例句如果气候变化继续下去，我们将自食其果。If climate changes continue, we will suffer the consequences.6.例句这种方法的缺点之一是必须把单词预先存储在系统中。One drawback of this approach is that the words must be registered in the system beforehand.7.例句我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。We will be exploring different approaches to gathering information.8.例句在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions are held by women.9.例句家庭中的每个成员都会互相帮助，特别是照顾好年轻人和老年人。Members of a family help one another, with particular care for the very young and the elderly.10.例句激发这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的担心。These youngsters are motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.第二组动词及动词短语1.例句他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。对痴迷例句我对那里发生的事情都非常感兴趣。He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite.be crazy aboutIm crazy about everything that goes on there.2.例句就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.3.例句许多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性。我深知这是一份艰难的工作。Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.I am well aware that this is a tough job.4.例句请告诉我那边的情况。Please keep me informed of whats going on there.5.例句几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。I purchased a cellphone at your store the other day.6.例句更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。导致结果例句紧张和疲劳常导致失眠。Whats worse, violent video games can lead to aggressive behaviours, which is more harmful than violent movies.result inStress and tiredness often result in sleeplessness.7.例句所有的游客被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。All the visitors were requested not to throw litter about in the park.8.例句我主张我们人人都应该尽力帮助那些需要帮助的人。指出例句许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。I argue that every one of us (should) try our best to help those in need.point outMany experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.9.例句或许我们能想到这个问题的更好的解决办法。Maybe we can come up with a better solution to the problem.10.例句我真诚地感激您所做的一切。因为某事向你表达我的感激之情例句对您的好意我谨表示我的谢意。感激(某人)做例句我非常感谢你花这么多时间帮助我。我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。I am truly grateful to you for what you have done.express my gratitude to you for .Id like to express my gratitude for your kindness.appreciate (ones) doing/that/sth.I appreciate your giving me so much of your time.I really appreciate what youve done for my family and me.11.例句希望全班同学参加讨论。参与，热衷于例句你应当参与各种各样的活动。Everyone in the class is expected to participate in the discussion.get involved in (an activity)You should get involved in various activities.12.例句将有20名学生参加英语演讲比赛。There will be twenty students to compete in the English speech contest.13.例句我们将竭尽全力以赶上发达的工业国家。Well spare no effort to catch up with the developed industrial countries.14.例句他把业余时间都用在读书上。He devotes all his spare time to reading.15.例句我们应该做出努力来彻底解决这个问题。We should make an attempt to thoroughly solve this problem.16.例句我决心要不惜一切代价来实现自己的目标。下定决心做某事例句听了他的报告后，我想了很多，反思了以前我所做的事情。我已经下定决心从以下几个方面来提高自己。Im determined to achieve my goal at any cost.make up ones mind to do sth.Having heard his report, I thought a lot and reflected on what I did before. I have made up my mind to improve myself in the following ways.17.例句他们用水只能依靠这条河。相信我会全心全意地帮助你。They have to rely on the river for their water.You can count on me to help you heart and soul.18.例句我在生人面前总是不知要说什么。I am always at a loss what to say in front of strangers.19.例句就我所知，他们每一个人都想成为一名模范学生。So far as I know, every one of them intends to be a model student.第三组形容词及形容词性短语1.例句体育运动有益于增强我们的体质。有益的；值得做的例句众所周知，学好英语是有好处的。Sports are beneficial to building our bodies.rewardingAs is known to us all, learning English well is very rewarding.2.例句他是一位杰出的科学家，对我国做出了巨大贡献。例句你的发音很完美，这令人羡慕。极好的例句“你要来么？”他激动地说：“那太好了！简直难以置信！”He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.Your pronunciation is perfect, which is admirable.fantastic“Youre coming？” he said excitedly. “Thats fantastic! Thats incredible！”3.例句他是一个普通的学生，但是做了许多好事。He is an average student, but he did many good deeds.4.例句每年成千上万的游客都会涌入这个景区来欣赏这里美丽的风景。Hundreds of thousands of tourists pour into this scenic spot to admire the amazing scenery every year.5.例句听到这个好消息后我非常兴奋。I was thrilled when I heard the good news.6.例句我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的女孩。My deskmate is a charming and elegant girl7.例句我的薪水不够维持一家的生活。My salary is not adequate to support our family.8.例句改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.9.例句她是一个勤奋的老师，她工作非常勤奋。She is a diligent teacher and she is diligent in her work.10.例句老师的鼓励对他/她的学生具有重要意义。对至关重要，关键的例句学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance/importance to his/her students.be critical/vital toLearning English well is critical/vital to your future employment.11.例句这本书对你会有很大用处。This book will be of great use to you.12.例句所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。The experience gained will be of great value to us.13.例句这项工程对每个人都大有好处。This project is of great benefit to everyone.14.例句你的建议对我很有帮助。Your suggestions are of great help to me.15.例句他来自一个偏远的村庄。He is from a distant/remote village.16.例句这是一个要求极严的、具有挑战性的工作。Its a demanding and challenging job.17.例句越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。许多例句许多学生反对这个主意。很多，非常多例句这个图书馆有相当多英语书。An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.many aMany a student is against the idea.a good manyThere are a good many English books in the library.18.例句自然保护区里有许多不同种类的珍稀动植物。范围广的，种类多的例句你有很大的选择余地。There are a wide variety of rare animals and plants in the nature reserve.a wide range ofThere is a wide range of choices open to you.19.例句学习了一天，我都累坏了。筋疲力尽的；疲惫不堪的例句夜里没有休息好，课堂上我感到筋疲力尽。I was worn out after a day of studying.exhaustedNot sleeping well, I always feel exhausted in class.20.例句她精力充沛，聪明活泼。She is energetic, intelligent and lively.第四组副词、连词及其他1.例句我的手机非常有用。特别地例句约翰似乎特别喜欢她。苏珊和约翰对于获得这个奖项感到兴奋不已。My mobile phone is extremely useful.especially/particularlyJohn seems to be particularly fond of her.Susan and John were especially thrilled with this award.2.例句如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意帮忙。If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.3.例句我们偶尔去田野里散步。偶尔，有时候例句他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。We go for walks in the fields occasionally.once in a whileHe comes to our room for a chat every once in a while.4.例句不用说它对我们的健康是有好处的。It goes without saying that it will do us a lot of good.5.例句面积大概有一百平方千米。The area is approximately 100 square kilometers.6.也例句我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。I like playing football and I enjoy swimming as well.7.例句我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。他很忙，因此他不能来。We have a growing population and therefore we need more food.He was busy; therefore he could not come. (therefore前要用分号)8.例句抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance, otherwise/or else youll regret it.9.例句第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。假如不下雨我就去。Thirdly, you say that there is a discount provided/providing (that) I pay in advance.I shall go providing/provided (that) it doesnt rai