【3年高考2年模拟1年原创】最新2013版高考英语 专题24 新题型 短文改错.doc

3年高考2年模拟1年原创专题24 新题型短文改错（教师版）【考点定位】 2014考纲解读和近几年考点分布短文改错高考英语试题中,短文改错题是众多考生得分较低的一项.短文改错不仅要求学生要有较高的阅读理解能力,还要求学生有深厚的语法知识,善于分析英语基本句型和句子结构.它主要是考查学生辨析并改正语言知识在运用时常出现的各种错误的能力。从近几年高考命题短文改错考查的知识点来看,短文改错主要考查:考生运用基本语法知识识别短文中不合乎内容逻辑的错误和语法结构上的各种错误,综合使用英语各项基础知识进行快速阅读理解,掌握短文的内容和内容上的前后逻辑关系,进行相应的纠错.因此短文改错与完形填空.阅读理解一样注重强调整体理解,从宏观上把握。【考点pk】 名师考点透析高考短文改错的错误类型概括起来主要是语法错误、逻辑错误和搭配等方面的错误。.语法错误包括动词、名词、代词、主谓一致、非谓语动词及情态动词等方面的错误。1.名词:名词错误主要考查名词单复数错误，可数与不可数名词的混用。确定名词单复数有以下几种方法:看修饰语；看主谓语的一致性；可数名词前无单数修饰语一定要用复数；看其他限制。2.动词:时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语；需要接 ing形式的接了to，或相反等。对于这一类错误可根据上下文语境或者句子的平行结构确定动词时态。3.形容词、副词:常在需要形容词的地方用了副词或相反；关系副词where,when,why等的缺失或错用。根据形容词、副词的基本用法或句意确定错误。4.介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用。5.主谓一致:主语为单数，动词用了复数；而主语为复数，动词却用了单数形式。再就是就近原则对主语的影响。6.冠词:主要考查表示特指和泛指时冠词的使用情况。定冠词the的多余或缺失，如季节、月份、星期、球类及三餐活动、称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the，或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏掉了the；a,an的混用等。7.数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等，基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of，几千thousands of漏掉了s，或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数，如seven hundred，写作seven hundreds。8.连词:不符合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so)，或相反等等。三、短文改错的应试要点1.粗看全文，不要一上来就改动;2.一行看三行，就某一行做判断时，要顾及上下两行或整句;3.一行想全文，单句中合理还不够，要全文合理;4.一行只能动一个词;5.别忘了在错词下画线;6.多词处要在原文中划掉此词，在抄完此词后也用斜线划掉;7.弄清句子结构有利于判断;8.如感觉一行有两处错，应将最有把握处改正;9.复核，做完题重看全文。【三年高考】 10、11 、12高考试题及其解析2013全国大纲版短文改错 hardworking but goes to work in the field every day. 76. _He isnt good at talk but he gets on well with other 77. _people. My mother is very much kind and is 78. _friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 79. _I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 80. _When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 81. _Ill think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 82. _Father often thinks Im silly. He said if I decide 83. _To do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 84. _This is how I need to improve in the future. 85. _2013辽宁短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜钱（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.1.with改为on 2.so去掉 3.have 改为had 4.healthy改为health 5.which改为what 6.visit前加a 7.her 改为his 8.step改为stepped 9.picture 改为pictures 10.many 改为much2013四川第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的工方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?1.【答案】difficulty-difficult2.【答案】hardly-hard3.【答案】asking-asked4.【答案】去to5.【答案】think-thinking6.【答案】all-both7.【答案】same前加the8.【答案】tests-test9.【答案】so-or10.【答案】does-did2013课标II第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.1.【答案】去掉of【解析】第一行的Im reading是定语从句修饰the book，read为及物动词，故去掉of。2.【答案】第三句have改为having【解析】做主语的应为动名词。3.【答案】that改为which【解析】考查非限制性定语从句。根据前面逗号可知为非限制性定语从句，不能用that引导。4.【答案】becomes改为became【解析】考查时态。根据后文可知为一般过去时。5.【答案】day前加the【解析】这里特指那天，故用the day。6.【答案】interesting改为interestingly【解析】考查形容词和副词辨析。修饰整个句子用副词。7.【答案】by改为with/ to【解析】考查介词。固定短语：have a connection with/ to8.【答案】drank改为drink【解析】drink既可以作名词也可作动词，作名词意为“饮料”，此处用名词。9.【答案】cup改为cups。【解析】考查名词单复数。此处cup为可数名词，应用复数形式。10.【答案】grow改为growth【解析】for介词后用名词形式。2013课标I第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and singold songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard well shouldersthatturned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set hadhimselfapart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In afact, him and ahe even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework whenwith me. However, he was the gentlest man I have neverknown. ever【解析】错误1：本题考查固定用法used to do something，表示“过去常常”。holding改为hold。【解析】错误2：本题考查时态。该句描述的是过去的事实，应用过去时，passes改为passed。【解析】错误3：本题考查副词。very much 很多；一般修饰数量多少；very well 很好；一般修饰动词。此句是对remember这个动词的修饰，应用very well。【解析】错误4：本题考查名词单复数。shoulder此处指的是双肩，所以shoulder改为复数shoulders。【解析】错误5：本题考查时态。该句描述的是过去某段时间内的事实变化，应用过去完成时。turned前面加上had。【解析】错误6：本题考查代词。该句为非限制性定语从句，主语是which，指a deep voice，谓语动词为set，宾语可直接用名词的宾格，不存在反射或强调关系，因而不需要用反身代词来himself，应用him。【解析】错误7：本题考查并列连词。该句由两个单句构成，前一个单句中带有非限制性定语从句。两个单句需要用并列连词连接，此处根据句意应用and。【解析】错误8：本题考查固定用法。in fact 事实上，实际上。【解析】错误9：本题考查从属连词。when 当时候；during 在期间；由句义可知，此处应用when。【解析】错误10：本题考查副词。never 意为从未有过；ever意为曾经，在任何时候。由句义可知，应用ever。I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only holdfour when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.passedI remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black well / clearlyshoulderstoward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was to / into him andstrong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do whenhomework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. ever2013浙江第一节短文改错（共10小题；毎小题1分，满分10分）下面短文有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）.并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉， 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. LuckilytheI was completely free then, so Ill to say yes. Ill arrive in Bristol at moid 8 : 00 p. m.amin Friday evening.onDear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.1.去掉far 2.move改为moved 3.other改为another 4.classmate改为classmates 5.or 改为and 6.bad改为worse 7.first前加the 或my8.tiring 改为tired 9.sleep 改为asleep 10 is 改为are2012高考英语试题 2012四川卷 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Mom，Mothers Day is coming.Im sorry that I am abroad66_and cant send your flowers，so Im writing to you.67_Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you68_ before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell69_you loudly：I love you ，Mom! Thank you so much by not70_only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good71_person.Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom，though72_I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your73_part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you.74_Hope you good health and much happiness every day!75_ Your little girl， Jennifer解析 2012全国卷 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Editor，Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely，Li Hua77. animalanimalsanimal是一个单数可数名词不能单独使用，这里表示类别，用复数。78. ornor与前面的neither呼应，构成固定搭配neithernor既不也不。79. seemedseems全篇文章都是以一般现在时为主，再根据后面的is，可知用现在时。 2012课标全国卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.解析 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things di wrong, I got angry and broke i. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whic was happening. When I tea apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys t you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus make my toys tolast. My attitude changed from then on.1. littleless考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。2. toytoys考查名词的单复数形式。根据each of 可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。3. didwent或者did 后加go考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语go wrong意为：出错。2012浙江卷 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.答案 Two years befor， I traveled to Brazil and I rented fora car. Unfortunat， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee. I called my parents, s I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil be worried about mysel because I was so farthe away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them intereste stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. 2011陕西卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to Beijing.1visitvisited根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。2butand/so前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and或so。3to去掉anywhere是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。4comfortablycomfortable修饰名词doubleroom应用形容词。2012辽宁卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.解析 Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we hav with you. It was so kind fo you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunat， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles the road was clear. In the car park her Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. The finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home. 2012重庆卷 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。Dear Grandpa， How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76._much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 77._the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I 78._was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79._till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant 80._view there. You told me the name of different plants and their 81._characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82._and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now 83._my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84._and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since 85._well do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then. Yours， Daisy 答案 Dear Grandpa，How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76.thesemuch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 【要点综述】该段材料叙述“我”小时候在爷爷家的幸福生活和近期回老家的安排。写作内容和水平符合高中生写作的特点。所设计的改错试题涵盖了重庆历年来常见的题型，且错误是学生在日常写作中常犯的典型错误。76. 改those为these。写信问及最近的情况，用these或this，用those或that询问较远时段的情况。77. after改为since。该句主句用现在完成时，状语从句连词