高中英语 高考写作分类掌握 31经历感受复习课件 新人教版.ppt

31 经历感受 主题 叙述你或你的朋友类似 揠苗助长 的经历和感受thestoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceofmyfriend hewasoncebadlyillandwenttoseethedoctor thedoctorgavehimsomepills tellinghimtotakethemthreetimesaday 晨读狂背语篇模板 however hefailedtofollowthedoctor sadviceandtookthem6timesaday tohisgreatsurprise hebecameworse justastheoldsayinggoes morehastelessspeed nomatterwhatwedo weshouldobeythelawofnature itisthesamewithourstudies onlybylearningstepbystepcanweachievesomething 一 写作技巧经历感受通常只需包含 谁 干了什么事 结果如何 等 然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的看法及感受或是从这次经历中得出了什么经验教训 写经历时 可用借鉴原文法 因为写经历就是写记叙文 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了 但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致 如 原材料是一个女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑 但她通过努力最终取得了成功 我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不起 但他通过努力取得了成功 灵活运用超级模仿 二 句式模板引出经历 1 thestoryremindsmeofmyexperience 这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历 2 thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceofmyfriend 这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历 3 ialsohadanunforgettableexperience 我也曾有一次难忘的经历 4 takemypersonalexperienceinlearningenglishforexample threeyearsago i 就以我的亲身经历为例吧 三年前 我 5 afterreadingalan sstory irecalltheexperienceofmyfriend 看了alan的故事后 我回想起我朋友的那段经历 感受启示 1 fromthisexperienceirealizethatit snoteasybutmeaningfultobeajournalist 通过这次经历 我意识到做记者是不容易但又有意义的 2 onlybylearningstepbystepcanweachievesomething 只有通过循序渐进地学习 我们才能有所成就 3 ibenefitalotfromthisexperienceandrealizedthatitishonestythatwinsustherespectfromothersandbringsusrealhappiness 这次经历让我受益匪浅 我意识到正是诚实才让我们赢得他人的尊重 也给我们带来快乐 4 therefore ilearnedtocultivatemyselftobestrong minded 因此 我学会了要将自己培养成意志坚强的人 asimilarexamplejumpsintomymind lastyear myfriendlilywasadmittedtoafamousuniversityinbeijing 三 超级仿写1 以你自己或他人成长的某次经历 说明父母过度照顾子女的影响 havingbeenunderthecompleteprotectionofherparentsformanyyears shefeltlostwhendealingwithsomecomplexsituationsandfoundithardtogoonwithherstudywithoutherparents care inthiscase beingoverlovedgaverisetogreatharmandmadeitdifficultforthechildtoachievesuccess 2 以你的经历说明合作的重要性 ithinkthestorycanteachusthatwhenweworktogetherwecanachievemorethanwhenwecompete thestoryremindsmeofmyexperiencewhenifirstcametothisschool myclassmates michaelshowedgreattalentinsciencestudieswhileiwasprettygoodathistoryandeconomics ifearedthatmichaelwouldoutperformmeintheexamssoiavoidedhelpinghimandviewedhimasmycompetitor itwasnotuntilmichaelsuggestedthatweworktogetherthatiunderstoodtheimportanceandbenefitofcooperation wesharedlearningmethodsandhelpedeachother asaresult webothmadeprogressinourstudiesandbecametop tenstudents inaword workingtogetherisawin winmethod 3 叙述你或你的亲友通过勤奋创造奇迹的一次真实或虚构的经历 thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceofmycousin hewasnothingbutafootballfan soyoucanimaginehowangryanddisappointedmyuncleandauntwereeverytimetheresultofanexamcameout hehadbeenthelastinthelistofthewholegrade everybodyaroundmycousinthoughthimhopeless however whenhebecameastudentofseniorthree forsomereason hebegantostudyveryhard orrather dayandnight inspiteofthefactthathewasquiteoftenlaughedat hekeptonstudying toeverybody ssurprise hewasfinallyadmittedintoafamousuniversity fromthisstory wecanseethatnothingisimpossibleandthathardworkcreatesmiracles 4 读写任务阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 shareyourjourneywithsomeoneandhalfyourfuelcosts thehighpriceoffuelmaybepersuadingtensofthousandsmorepeopletochangetheirtriptowork bysharingthedrivingduties thosewhodoshareliftswithotherpeoplearebeingtoldtheycansaveupto2 000ayearinfuelcostsandhelppreventpollution forthosewhopersevere therecanbegreatsocialbenefits lift sharersjaneandsteven forexample itisnotonlyliftstheyaresharingnow butahouseaswell sharebooks mr smithhasmadeitahabitinthepastyearorsotopassonbooksafterhe sreadthem asheisreading hethinksofsomeonewhomightenjoythebooknext sohehandsiton notonlydoesitsharetheloveofreading itletsthatpersonknowi mthinkingofthem shareanything manyfamousfilmsstarsshareexperiencesofjoysorsorrowsbywritingblogs ordinarypeoplealsosharetheirfamilyphotosoropinionsaboutwork studies healthcare friendsandsoon 写作内容 1 以约30词概括短文的主要内容 2 然后以约120个词就 分享 的主题发表看法 内容包括 1 你愿意与人分享吗 为什么 2 说说某一次分享的经历 3 分享的利弊 thepassageencouragesustosharewithothersbecausepeoplegetlotsofbenefitsbysharingcars houses booksandexperiences peoplecansavemoneyandspreadhappinessandlove personally iamtoowillingtosharewithothers asastudent inotonlysharethegoodmomentsbutalsoallthedifficultmomentswithmyclassmates justasthesayinggoes shareyourhappinesswithothers happinessdoubles shareyoursadnesswithothers sadnesshalves shareyourlovewithothers lovespreads sosharingplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife once myclassmatetomforgottobringhismoneyforlunchsoisharedmyservingwithhim weenjoyedthemeal talkingandlaughing thesharedmealoftenremindsusofthefriendshipbetweenusinlaterlifeandwewillneverforgetthehappytime itissharingthatstrengthensthefriendship