高中英语 高考写作分类掌握 23观点对比复习课件 新人教版.ppt

23 观点对比 主题 说说人们对幸福的理解 引出不同观点 opinionsaredividedonthefeelingofhappiness 观点一 somepeoplebelievethatiftheyhavemuchmoneyormanythings theywillbehappy withgreatwealth theywillbeabletodoeverythingtheywant withwhichtheywillbehappy 晨读狂背语篇模板 观点二 ontheotherhand somepeopleregardtheirintelligence ortheirhealthastheirgreathappiness 观点三 stillothersmaintainthathappinessiscloselytiedtotheirfamily fortheybelievethattheyfeelhappywhenallmembersoftheirfamilyarehappyandhealthy 一 句式模板 1 differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionson somepeoplethink because however othersthink forthereasonthat 2 opinionsarevariousforthis somebelievethat whileothersarguethat stillothersmaintainthat 灵活运用超级模仿 3 therearedifferentopinionsonhowto manypeopletake seriously whilefewtreat as 4 opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson themajorityofthepeopleareinfavourof therestofthemareagainst 5 whenitcomesto somepeoplethinkthat ontheotherhand othersarguethat 1 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影 有人选择看电影 有人则喜欢读原著 请你以 filmorbook whichdoyouprefer 为题 按照下列要点写一篇英语短文 1 看电影 省时 有趣 易懂 2 读原著 细节更多 语言优美 3 我的看法及理由参考词汇 原著originalwork someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory besides thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal meanwhile thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful personally iagreewiththesecondview actuallyihavemorereasonsforit ithinkicanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown andwhat smore iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor sideas inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit 2 读写任务阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 whenyouaskpeoplewhatitmeanstorelax mostwillanswerthatrelaxingissomethingyouplaytodolater youdoitonvacation whenyouretire orwhenyougeteverythingdone thismeans ofcourse thatmostothertime 95 ofyourlife shouldbespentnervous restless rushed andmad couldthisexplainwhysomanyofusoperateasiflifewereonegreatbigemergency mostofusputoffrelaxationuntilour in basket isempty ofcourse itneveris itisusefultothinkofrelaxationasaqualityofheartthatyoucanownonaregularbasisratherthansomethingreservedforsomelatertime youcanrelaxnow it shelpfultorememberthatrelaxedpeoplecanstillbesuperachieversand infact thatrelaxationandcreativitygohandinhand wheni mfeelingtired forexample idon teventrytowrite butwhenifeelrelaxed mywritingflowsquicklyandeasily beingmorerelaxedincludestrainingyourselftoreactdifferentlytothedramaoflife itcomes inpart fromremindingyourselfoverandoveragain withlovingkindnessandpatience thatyouhaveachoiceinhowyourespondtolife youcanlearntorelatetoyourthinkingaswellasyoursituationinnewways 写作内容 1 以约30个词概括短文的主要内容 2 然后以约120个词就 中学生的周末该不该放松休息 的主题发表看法 内容包括 1 同学们对周末补课的不同看法 2 老师和家长对你校周末上课情况的看法 3 你持什么态度 写作要求 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 fromthepassage i velearntthatrelaxationplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife peoplewhofeelrelaxed aremorewillingtodotheirjobanddobetterinworkorstudy comparedwiththetiredpeople butformostofus onlywhenwehavegoteverythingdonedowerealizeweshouldtakearest inmyschool studentsarerequiredtogotoschoolonsaturdays especiallystudentsofseniorgradethree sotheyhavetheirowndifferentopinionsonit somestudentsthinkthattakingclassesatweekendsmakesthemmuchtiredandbored leavingthemlittletimetodotheirownthings however othersholdtheoppositeopinionthatasstudentsofseniorthree theyshouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetotakeinmoretopreparefortheentranceexamination andmostoftheteachersandparentsarefortheideathatstudentsshouldhaveclassesonsaturdays theyhopethatthestudentscanlearnmorebyhavingclassesatweekends someoftheparentsareworriedthatiftheirchildrendon tneedtohaveclassesatweekends theywillspendmostoftheirtimeplayingcomputergamesordoingthingswhicharenotgoodforthem asfarasi mconcerned nomatterhowbusyweare weshouldhavesuitablerelaxation forexample wecanstudyintheeveningandatnightwhileplayingortakingsomeexerciseintheafternoonoratweekends inthisway wewillneitherloseth