高考英语 语法专题复习17 作文常用关联词精品课件.ppt

17 作文常用关联词 表示时间关系 first second then finally atlast intheend soonimmediately suddenly atthesametime meanwhile recently表示对称顺序关系 foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand aboveall firstofall firstly secondly next finally theformer thelatter 表示递进关系 whatismore aswell moreover besides furthermore inaddition what sworse表示换一种方式表达 inotherwords thatistosay 表示举例说明 forexample like suchas forinstance表示陈述事实 infact actually asamatteroffact totellyouthetruth表示总结 onthewhole inaword tosumup inshort inconclusion fromwhatihavesaidabove表示因果关系 asaresult thus therefore sothat as because consequently 表示转折 but however while instead although differentfrom notonly butalso表达自己的观点 inmyopinion personally asfarasiknow ibelieve ithink asweallknow itisknowntousallthat 范例1 假如你事实李华 你班同学最近开长了一场讨论 主题是 高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼 请根据下面所提供的信息 写一篇短文 介绍讨论的情况 并发表自己的观点 1 关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤 takeexercisesdomorningexercisesbuildupthebodyreducethediseasehaveareststudymoreeffectivelyawasteoftimepayattentiontostudybehurt 2 作文结构 1 havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofsenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises asweknow everycoinhastwocoins differentstudentshavedifferentideas 2 55 ofthestudentsthink suchas 举例 原因 3 ontheotherhand 45 ofthestudentsbelieve 原因 4 inmyopinion ipreferto 3 范文 recently wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherhavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofsenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises asweknow everycoinhastwocoins 55 ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryday suchasdoingmorningexercises playingtabletennisandplayingbasketball butnotspendtoomuchtimeonthem asaproverbsays allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy exercisebuildsuptheirbodyandreducelotsofdiseases sportsletthemhaveagoodrestsothattheirstudywillbemoreeffective ontheotherhand 45 ofthestudentsbelievetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandtiring aftertakingexercise theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons andit spossibletobehurtinsports inmyopinion iprefertotakeproperexercisesinmysparetime 练习 你们班会的讨论主题是 上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗 请根据下面提供的信息 写一偏短文 客观的介绍下讨论的情况 并发表自己的观点 关键词语 widenknowledge improvequalities hightuition seniorstudents关键句子 ofusconsideritnecessarytogotocollege10 ofstudentsthinkitnousegoingtocollege30 believe allroadsleadtorome 范例 某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为 youngteachersorelderlyteachers whichdoyouprefer 请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文 向该报社投稿 注意 1 词数100左右 开头语已为你写好 不计入总数 2 短文必须包含表格的全部内容 要求观点明确 结构合理 紧凑连贯 学生作品1 comparewithyoungteachers ipreferelderlyteachers therearesomereasonsbelow foronething mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents butalsogiveclassescarefully theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent whatgoodteachers foranotherthing elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience thisisalsothemostimportant especiallyforusseniorstudents thisisonlymyopinion ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood 点评 亮点 1 观点鲜明 词汇句型的运用比较灵活2 过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯 条理清楚 2 审题不全面 忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理 这一点是比较大的失误 1 2 3 1 compared 2 more 3 trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting 不足之处 1 个别地方的表达需要改进 学生作品2 opinionsaredividedonthisquestion somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience however theothershaveadifferentopinion theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy besides theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas well inmyopinion ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot 点评 亮点 1 段落清楚 要点齐全 句式表达比较灵活 能适当运用复句 2 过渡词运用也比较熟练 需要改进的地方 1 2 3 4 1 prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones 2 withexplanations 3 the去掉 4 theyoungteachers onepossibleversion opinionsaredividedonthisquestion somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations however iprefertobetaughtbyyoungteachers firstly westudentshavemuchincommonwiththem sotheyareourfriendsaswellasourteachers secondly theyaremore energeticandenthusiastic usuallytheycanmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting besides theyaremorereadytoacceptorcreatenewideas includingteaching thirdly mostyoungteachersdevotethemselvestotheirwork makingthemteachcreativelyandeffectively inaword ipreferyoungteacherstoelderlyt