（试题 试卷 真题）专题23短文改错（解析版）

专题23 短文改错【2013高考真题精选】（2013新课标I卷）第一节2013新课标I 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 1.【答案】holding-hold 【解析】此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号。故用动词原形。【考点定位】考查连词的用法。【考点定位】考查状语从句的连接词。（2013新课标卷) 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.【小题10】make for是介词短语，后加名词，故把grow改为名词growth。（2013浙江）短文改错（共10小题， 每小题1分， 满分10分）下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Diary，Here I am in the middle of a city，350miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,”He was lucky to find other one ”. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world . To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you , dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. Yours, Rosemary（2013大纲卷）短文改错In my family，there are three people，My father is hardworking But goes to work in the field every day. 76. _He isnt good at talk But he gets on well with other 77. _people. My mother is very much kind and is 78. _friendly to everyBody. So when I have the proBlem 79. _I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 80. _When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 81. _Ill think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 82. _Father often thinks Im silly. He said if I decide 83. _To do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 84. _This is how I need to improve in the future. 85. _（2013四川)第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的工方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?【答案】 asking改为asked（2013辽宁卷) 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Mr. Johnson is a hard working teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with hiswork. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.Hardwork have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid a visit to Mr. Johnson. I wasEager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I stepped into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the pictures we hadTaken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.【答案】visit前加a。【2012高考真题精选】（2012课标全国卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（2012浙江卷）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（2011陕西卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.【解析】（2012辽宁卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.【2012四川卷】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Mom，Mothers Day is coming.Im sorry that I am abroad66_and cant send your flowers，so Im writing to you.67_Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you68_ before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell69_you loudly：I love you ，Mom! Thank you so much by not70_only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good71_person.Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom，though72_I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your73_part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you.74_Hope you good health and much happiness every day!75_ Your little girl， Jennifer【解析】（2012全国卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear Editor，Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely，Li Hua85. 去掉forwhich指代water，作主语，不需要for。【2011高考真题精选】（2011全国卷）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Dear George，Its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. _we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington DC., 79._where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. _another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. _work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. _was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to 84. _our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. _Yours，Mike（2011全国卷）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76_Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77._I hold my lunchbox in my hand when I was going to 78_school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch 79._bell finally rang，my friends and I met under a tall tree 80_and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used 81_to share her NangNang82._ cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and 83_ I study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84_ during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss 85_ the food and the good time we had together.（2011四川卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行下边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66._morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to 67._fire him if he didnt start coming on time，but he went to 68._the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69._medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70._The man did as told and slept really well，wake up before 71._the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72._breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”he 73._said，“that medicine really works！”“Im pleasing to hear 74._it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75._【答案】Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 72_breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”heto（2011辽宁卷） 第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In early January this year，the rate of UFO reports were steady，around three per weeks.When，however，on Monday，January 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television，there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler，who directly responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article，which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the rate remained above the previous level. （2011全国卷） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily，I had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. friends（2011陕西卷）第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线(_)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didnt have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldnt be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me！I couldnt believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!【答案】（2011重庆卷）以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行下边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行下边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边横线上写出改正后的词。Today is Sunday. Ive been in Canada for two months.This is the first time that Ive been away my family for such a 76. _long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive 77. _soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78. _ many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. _ friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. _is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81._usually talk a lot about our own family. Were both surprised 82._that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. _were planning a small party for the next Sunday. There,