英语-2-写作范文.docx

英语2：写作范文How to be a Good Learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Its good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help.I hope all these will be helpful to us.点评：句子较完整，能简单介绍学习方法，但方法过于简单，缺乏自己的独特的学习方法。语法上无大错，仅有个别小错误。*Dear Tony: Im glad to know that you are going to learn Chinese. I will give some advice. Learning Chinese can be really fan. First, you should write the new words in groups and read them every day. You can remember all the words by doing this. Second, its a good way to improve your listening. Third, do you like reading? If you like, try to read Chinese newspaper and magazines and pay attention to the sentences. Or you can just read for fun. Last, what about going to the Chinese Corner in your school? Its very interesting to talk to Chinese people. If you do that, youll be able to learn Chinese well. I think this is helpful for you. E-mail me if you have any other questions.点评：层次较清晰，语言流畅，但学习方法过于老套，有所重复。& Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinner, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. Thats really the problems was should solve immediately.点评：切题。论证充分，有说服力；论证手段丰富（举证、正反）表达思想清楚语言流畅，词汇丰富，连贯性好。其本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “The Advantage and Disadvantage of the Internet.” You should base your composition on the following outline:（1） 互联网的好处（2） 互联网产生的问题（3） 我的看法The Advantage and Disadvantage of the InternetInternet plays an important role in life. When you surf the net, the world become a smaller place. People can discuss about different topics and make friends with others. Whats more, they can work, play, and even have meetings on the net. Internet is indeed one of the most wonderful things man has ever invented.But just like most other inventions, the Internet has its problems. Some people are just over-enthusiastic to offer worthless information. Official also find it hard to prevent invasion of criminals online. And sometimes bad information on the net does great harm to teenagers.There is no doubt that the internet has changed our lives. However, we should use it properly and scientifically. Also, the Internet will serve us better if strict administration is applied.范文点评：此文紧紧围绕提纲中的关键词-好处和问题-对互联网的利弊进行了讨论。三段文字分别对应了提纲中的三个要点，并且每段的首句明确点明了该段的主题，中心明确，结构紧凑。文中句式有变化，显得活泼生动。$Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “Wealth and Health” You should have your composition on the following outlines.（1） 有人认为财富意味着一切。（2） 实际上健康比财富更重要。（3） 是比较说明。 Wealth and Health When asked what the aim of their life is, the vast majority of people say “making money”. For one thing, wealth can ensure them comfortable life.However, as far as I am concerned, if I had to choose wealth and health, I would prefer health. On the one hand, rich people can afford everything they dream of. But sometimes wealth cannot buy health. On the other hand, people who are healthy but not wealthy can make money through their own efforts and can enjoy the fruit of their labor.In conclusion, health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but are not healthy, are actually suffering.点评： 本文紧扣提纲展开论述。观点明确，条例清晰，用词较准确。Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “What Does Friendship mean？” You should have your composition on the following outlines.（1） 友谊是人生永恒的主题。（2） 友谊到底意味着什么。（3） 友谊的重要性。What Does Friendship Mean?What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. As on eternal theme in literature, friendship is indispensable to daily life.Friendship is as important to our life as what salt is to dasher. When you are happy, friendship is like adding flowers to carpet; when you are sad, having friends are a consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you are facing difficulties, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, Which drew them together and pushed them on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism. Friendship is not almighty, but no one can live happily without it.点评：本文类似抒情式的议论文，第二段中运用了排比句，并巧妙地运用恩格斯和马克思的例子来证明友谊的重要性。+ A Person I Will Never Forget The person I will never forget is Miss Wang, my junior English teacher. She was tall and nice with long hair. She is also active because she is fond of playing tennis, traveling and listening to music. In addition, Miss Wang is kind and responsibility. At first, no matter how hard I tried, I couldnt do well in English. It was Miss Wang who gave me a hand in time. And my English has improved a lot now.How lucky, I am to be a student of Miss Wang.点评：文章开门见山，点奔主题，利用题目，完成主题的导入。文中使用了定语从句、原因状语从句和强调句等复合句使文章更显其魅力。最后作者用感叹句总结，给全文划上了一个圆满的句号。本文作者采用了“总-分总”的写作方法，层次清晰，要点全面，发挥的合情合理。As is known to everyone, health is very important to us. All of us realize we should keep health and we will live longer and better. The following tips will help you a lot. First, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. You should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. Dont stay up!Second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. It is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. My idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food.Third, start doing some exercise every day. Im sure physical exercise does a lot for a persons health. And the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and dont lose your temper at any time.点评： 本文是一个常谈话题，讲到保持健康的重要性和方法，作者从自身的角度给大家一些保持健康的建议。 名词性的从句和定语从句的恰当运用让整篇文章如行云流水般流畅自如。一些词汇、短语的运用也非常到位，整篇文章能很好地围绕中心思想，条理清楚，行文流畅，紧扣主题。Writing1) As is known to everyone, health is very important to us. All of us realize we should keep healthy and we will live longer and better. The following tips will help you a lot.First, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. You should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. Dont stay up!Second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. It is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. My idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food.Third, start doing some exercise every day. Im sure physical exercise does a lot for a persons health.And the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and dont lose your temper at any time.2) Mr. Black will go to Beijing by plane at ten thirty on Monday morning. Then he will visit the Great Wall and go to Wang Fujing to do some shopping from Tuesday to Wednesday. He is going to fly to Hainan Island at eight forty on Thursday morning. He will go to visit “Tianya Hiajiao” and go scuba diving in Sanya from Friday to Saturday morning. At 4:50 on Saturday afternoon, he will fly back to Beijing. Then he will fly back home at about 3:20 on Sunday afternoon.3) I Love My HometownXuzhou City is my hometown. It lies in the north of Jiangsu with a popular of over 5 million. In the past, it was poor and dirty. Most of the people here lived a hard life. But great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. It has wide roads. On both sides are many tall buildings. You can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The peoples living conditions have improved a lot. Im sure it will get richer and more beautiful. I love my hometown.4) No breakfast, No GoodNow a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.And at our age, it is time for us to grow up. So our bodies are in great need of energy. If we dont have breakfast, there will be not enough energy. This may affect our growth.Whats more, it is a long time between breakfast and lunch. Breakfast provides us with the energy our body needs. Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. So, we must have breakfast.5) ComputersComputers are wonderful machines. They can store large amounts of information and never forget it. They can process problems quickly and also provide information quickly. Computers cant think, but they can do things that human beings cannot do. It is very important tool in every office and in every home, so they are very useful. More and more people are getting interested in them these years. We should learn how to use computers now. Then we will get ready for the future.6) Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. Secondly it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find want you are looking for.There are some disadvantages, too. You cannot see the products or check their quality. Besides you cannot enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.7)HR ManagerSimson Company120 Lingling RoadShanghai 200040 10 March 2008 Dear Sir, I would like to apply for the position advertised in yesterdays China Daily. I was born in 1987 and graduated from the college with a B. A in general business. I have been handling most of the bookkeeping for the past three years and I trust I am qualified to fill your position. I am enclosing a brief resume of my life history as