中考英语 作文复习指导课件.ppt

中考英语书面表达 认真审题 找出文章要表达的中心 写作第一步 审 审 travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work 健康很重要 在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天 会休息的人才会有健康的身体 人们是如何度过假期的呢 国际健康组织对此作了一次调查 上图是他们此次的调查结果 根据你所得的信息 请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告 并提倡大家进行假日休闲 审 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点 列 写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲 stayathome work visitfriendsorparents travel alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework enjoyyourvacation 列 alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell anicehead anicetail anicebody 加 加首尾 使结构完整 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 开头或结尾的句子注意简洁 漂亮 写作第三步 second weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary first wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool thoughmostofusdon tlikethematall everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife what smore weoughttoreturnbooksontime 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andvisitingfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed however afewpeoplehavetowork 美 美 选好词句 美化文章 在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底 写作第五步 skillonemakeyoursentencescorrect goodgoodstudy daydayup weshoulddosportsaweekonce savetheenvironmentisourduty thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday ihopeicancometruemydream onceaweek saving be achieve theteenagerslikethecomputers theteenagersarefondofthecomputers ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy skilltwoexpressindifferentways weshouldn teatjunkfood weshouldkeepawayfromthejunkfood weshouldlearnenglishgrammar it simportanttolearnenglishgrammar skilltwoexpressindifferentways skilltwoexpressindifferentways ifyouuseenglishoften youwilllearnitbetter themoreyouuseenglish thebetteryouwilllearnit 中考作文评分标准 第四档 12 15分 覆盖所有内容要点 准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构 全文结构紧凑 有效地使用了语句间的连接成份 符合英语交际习惯 具备较强的语言运用能力 第三档 8 11分 覆盖所有内容要点 恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构 适当运用了语句间的连接成份 较好地达到了交际的目的 第二档 4 7分 没能覆盖所有内容要点 词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求 文章不够连贯 影响对写作内容的理解 第一档 0 3分 漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关 词汇和语言结构错误较多 内容不连贯 无法传达有效信息 上周三初三年级组的同学进行了一次体检 结果期发现同学们的视力下降了 请你用英语向全班同学报告原因 如图所示 并提出倡议 爱护我们的眼睛 2 3 1 12 1 4 眼睛疲劳看电视玩电脑 眼睛近视躺着看书走路看书 眼睛疼痛强光下看书弱光下看书 writtenwork mostofuspaidlittleattentiontoprotectingoureyes sowiththetimegoesby theeyesightbecomespoorandpoorer twothirdsofstudents eyesalwaysgettiredbecausetheywatchtvorplaycomputergamesforlong andaquarterofstudentsalwayslieinthebedorwalkingwhilereadingbooks sotheyhavebecomeshort sighted theothersalwaysreadinstrongsunlightorpoorlightsotheyhavesoreeyesoften it simportantforustoformagoodreadinghabittotakegoodcareofoureyes solet sdoeverythingwecantoimproveoureyes passageone boysandgirls asweknow ourlifeisbetterthanbefore therearetvsets computersandmanymodernmachines but ourmodernlifeisharmfultooureyestoo becausetwothirdsofstudentsfeeltheireyestired becauseofwatchingtvorplayingcomputergamesforalongtime andaquarterofstudentswalkandlieinthebedwhiletheyreading so theybecomeshort sighted onetwelfthofstudentshavesoreeyes becausetheyreadinstronglightorinpoorlight 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