英语作文开车接送.ppt

书面表达指导EnglishComposition 视频1 视频2 Howdoyouusuallygotoschool Step1Leadin 1 Whatcanyouseefromthevideo 2 Whatareadvantagesanddisadvantagesofdrivingchildrentoschoolandbackhome Adebate Shouldparentsdrivetheirchildrentoschoolandbackhome 书面表达 目前 家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象 人们对此做法褒贬不一 下面是就这个现象所做问卷调查结果 请根据下面图表提示 描述被访者的看法并发表你的观点 Step2 Writing 一 列题纲 Para4 Myopinion我的观点 Para1 Acommonphenomenon普遍的现象 Para3 Theopponents ideas反对者的观点 Para2 Thesupporters ideas支持者的观点 二 确定时态 调查时间虽然已过去 但结论描述应当用一般现在时而非过去时 三 扩点成句 1 省时2 舒适3 安全4 增加交流 Morevaluabletimecanbesavedforstudents Itcanoffermorechancesforparentstocommunicatewiththeirchildren Itisreasonablejustforthesakeofchildren ssafety Childrencanrestorhavemealscomfortablyintheirowncars 三 扩点成句 5 增加家长负担6 交通拥堵7 依赖性强 Itwillundoubtedlyaddtotheparents burdens Inthelongtermchildrenmaybemoredependentontheirparents Drivingkidstoschoolandbackhomeresultsinmoretrafficjams 四 论文常见开头语 1 不同的人有不同的观点 Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions 2 观点被分成两部份 Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups 3 每个事物都有它的两面性 Eachcoinhastwosides 五 赞成与反对的表达法 1 Someareinfavorof agreewith for support theideathat 2 Somethink believe considerthat 赞成 反对 1 Someareagainst opposedto oppose disagreewiththeideathat 2 Someargue think believe considerthat 六 结束语 Inmyopinion AsfarasI mconcerned Personally Asforme Astome 七 连接词 此外还有aboveall atfirst tostartwith another atlast intheend eventually等 八 其它常用表达法 Accordingtothechart thesurvey Asisknowninthechart Thechart thesurveyshowsthat Ascanbeseenfromthechart thesurvey thefigures 图表表明 八 其它常用表达法 50 ofthepeople50 ofthem50 50 的人怎么表达 九 范文欣赏 Step3 写作注意要点 1 写好字2 开好头3 分好段 多为三段或四段 4 造好句 多套用句型 多用短语 5 不漏要点6 字数 千万不要少 7 写完要检查 有错用一条直线划掉8 卷面要保持整洁 Homework 1 Enjoyagoodwritingonyoursheet 2 FinishofftheEnglishpaperofLiaolingProvince AnExampleofGoodWriting 好文章赏析 AletterwithAmericanstampscametothehouseanditannouncedthearrivalofmyuncle Ididn tknowIhadanuncle WhenFatherandUnclewereyoung theywerealwaystogetherandwereoneanother sbestfriend Whenitcametimetogetmarried Unclerefused HehadtheambitionofleavingChinaandgoingtoAmerica Fatherdisagreedwiththisandonenight Unclewasgone Everyoneaskedwherehewentandsixyearslater theanswercameinaletter HehadbecomeanAmerican Myfatherwasveryangry HebelievedUnclebetrayed 背叛 theancienttraditionofstayinghomeandtakingcareoftheold Altogetherithadbeen25yearssinceUncleleft Althoughithasbeensolong theamountofangerFatherhadonlygrew Amongthefamily onlyFatherrefusedtoseehim Fathersaidaloud OnlyAnimalsleavetheirfamily Accordingtotheletter UnclewasalreadyinChinaandhealsobroughthisfamilyandchildrenalongwithhim IwasworriedFatherwouldnotseehim WhenIwaswalkingalongthestreetwithMother Iasked