高考英语 书面表达（开放式作文）练习讲评四课件.ppt

2012届高考英语书面表达 开放式作文 练习讲评四 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛 请按如下要求完成一篇短文 1 简要描述下图的内容 并点明主题 2 联系实际 谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法 注意 1 词数不少于120个 2 不能使用真实姓名和学校 提示词 蜗牛snail 讲评 从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话 look theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus 可以看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢 由此我们可以推断 交通拥挤问题的严重性 一 简述漫画内容点明主题 fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem inthepicture therearetwosnailsplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads howslowlytheyaremoving thepictureconveysusthemessagethatheavytrafficisaseriousproblem inthepicture twosnailsareplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads theyaremovingsoslowlythatwecan thelpthinkingoftheseriousnessofheavytraffic fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarswhicharemovingveryslowlyonthecrowdedroads thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseusbutactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems thatis heavytrafficisaseriousproblem 分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比较熟悉的几个方面来考虑 随着经济的发展 私家车的增加 随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加 一些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善 行人交通意识的淡薄等等 二 分析现象产生的原因 butwhydoesthishappen ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon firstly withtherapiddevelopmentofourcountry seconomy moreandmorecarsarecomingintocommonfamilies whichcausesserioustrafficjams secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing althoughthegovernmentputsalargeamountofmoneyonbuildingorrepairingroadseveryyear thequalityoftheroadsisnotsatisfactory what sworse somepublictransportationstillremainunimproved thirdly somepeopleareunawareoftheimportanceofobeyingtrafficregulations soit snotuncommontoseeaccidentsblockingtraffic therearemanycausesforthisproblem butthefollowingmaybethemostimportantones thefirstcauseisthegreatincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars carstakeupmorespacebuttheycarryfewerpeople thesecondcauseistheslowandinefficientconstructionandimprovementoftheroadsandstreets withalargepopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved thelastcauseistheinsufficientmanagementofthetrafficsystemandsomepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulations whichisanobstacletotheflowoftraffic firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam 紧紧围绕所分析的原因 不要面面俱到 可以选取其中一两个原因 提出解决问题的看法 personally ithinkthatratherthanpromoteprivatecars it sbettertoimprovethepublictransportationsystemwithscientificroaddesignandpropermanagement moreimportantly nevercantrafficjamsbeeasedwithoutself disciplinedcitizens 三 谈谈解决问题的看法 inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol andatthesametime busesshouldhavetheirownspecialrouteswhichcannotbeusedbyothervehicles besides undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly tosolvetheproblem somepiecesofadviceareputforward isuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsshouldbebuilt besides weshouldtakesomemeasurestolimitthenumberofcars thiscandecreasethetrafficflow inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol meanwhile thegovernmentshouldtakesomemeasurestoimprovesomepublictransportation what smore peoplemustobeytrafficregulationsstrictly forexample pedestriansdon tcrossthestreetsuntilthetrafficlightsareforthem 参考范文 fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem butwhydoesthishappen ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam forexample manypedestrianscrossthestreetwithoutwatchingthewalklights onlywhenourwholesocietyworktogethertosolveallthesesproblemscanwespeeduptheflowoftrafficinthecities 同步练习 2012届江苏无锡市高三期中考试请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 短文应包含以下内容 1 这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么 2 你所理解的导致这一现象产生的原因是什么 3 你觉得怎样做才能解决问题 注意 1 词数150个左右 开头句已经给出 不计入总词数 2 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 theoverexploitationofworldheritagesiteshasraisedpublicconcern 参考范文 theoverexploitationofworldheritagesiteshasraisedpublicconcern asisshowninthecartoon theworldheritagesitesareovercrowdedwithlargegroupsoftouristspushing takingphotos orevenspitting andsmokingeverywhere whichhascausedgreatdamagetothesehistoricbuildings oneofthecontributingfactorsofthisphenomenonisthatthelocalgovernmentispushingtoohardforthedevelopmentoftourism ignoringdamagepreventionandeducationalfunctionofthesites moreover someself centeredtouristsareuncivilizedinpublicplaces ignorantofthehistoricalandculturalvalueofthesites frommypointofview theoriginalpurposeofsettingupworldheritage