高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评四课件.ppt

2012届高考英语书面表达 图画式作文 练习讲评四 请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文 短文内容应包括以下几个要点 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩 儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理 写作时要适当地发挥 语言连贯 要写出妈妈的惊诧 还要写自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点 词数 150左右 第一部分描述漫画 一 确立主题 这是在家庭教育中比较常见的现象 家长用双重标准去教育自己的孩子 根据基本的价值观 我们可以归纳出图画所要表达的主题是 ascanbeseenfromthecartoons itisastoryaboutabadexampleoffamilyeducation 认真看图 结合文字和图画 确立所要表达的主题是什么 二 提炼要点 人物 小男孩 妈妈以及跌倒的小女孩情景和动作 小男孩要去帮助小女孩 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩 并对儿子说 不要扶 否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的 围绕确立的主题 仔细看图和文字 列出图中的要点 人物 小男孩和妈妈情景和动作 妈妈看到儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理 小男孩对妈妈说 我扶了 你会说是我碰倒的 妈妈很是震惊 遣词造句 注意多重表达 aboywastryingtohelpagirlwhofelloverontheground aboywantedtogiveahandtoagirlwhofelloverontheground hismotherpreventedhimfromhelpingthegirl hismotherpersuadedhimnottodoso shesaidtohisson don tdothat otherwiseotherswouldthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherknown shesaidtohisson ifyoudidthat otherswouldthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherknown 注意虚拟语气的运用 momsawthathersonignoredthefallenoilbottleontheground theboywasseensittingleisurelywithanoilbottlelyingonthegroundbesideshisfeet 遣词造句 注意多重表达 theboysaidtohismother ifihadliftedtheoilbottle youwouldthinkthatitwasmewhobroughtitdown theboyexplainedtohismotherthathadheliftedtheoildbottle shewouldthinkthatitwashimwhobroughtitdown 注意虚拟语气的运用 hearinghisson sexplanation momwasshocked astonished surprised 三 描述漫画 连贯成篇ascanbeseenfromthecartoons itisastoryaboutabadexampleoffamilyeducation inthefirstpicture aboywastryingtohelpagirlwhofelloveronthegroundwhilehismompreventedhimfromdoingso saying don tdothat otherwiseotherswouldthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherknown inthesecondpicture theboywasseensittingleisurelywithanoilbottlelyingonthegroundbesideshisfeet whycan tyoustraightenitup sheaskedangrily butshewasgreatlyshockedbytheexplanationfromtheboy ifihadliftedtheoilbottle youwouldthinkthatitwasmewhobroughtitdown 第二部分发表感想 围绕漫画主题自拟感想 我对漫画中母亲的做法看法 不同意 建议 解决的办法 父母是孩子的第一任老师 应该为孩子树立好榜样 父母不仅要关心孩子的身体 还要关心他们的思想 父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事 遣词造句 注意多重表达 idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory inmyopinion themothershouldn teducatehissoninthisway parentsaretheirchildren sfirstteachers sotheyshouldsetagoodexampletothem astheirfirstteachers parentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren ithinkparentsshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds forexample theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble 连贯成篇inmyopinion themothershouldn teducatehissoninthisway asweallknow parentsarethefirstteachers sotheyshouldsetagoodexampletothem ithinkparentsshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds forexample theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowit sapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble 参考范文一 ascanbeseenfromthecartoons itisastoryaboutabadexampleoffamilyeducation inthefirstpicture aboywastryingtohelpagirlwhofelloveronthegroundwhilehismompreventedhimfromdoingso saying don tdothat otherwiseotherswouldthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherknown inthesecondpicture theboywasseensittingleisurelywithanoilbottlelyingonthegroundbesideshisfeet whycan tyoustraightenitup sheaskedangrily butshewasgreatlyshockedbytheexplanationfromtheboy ifihadliftedtheoilbottle youwouldthinkthatitwasmewhobroughtitdown inmyopinion themothershouldn teducatehissoninthisway asweallknow parentsarethefirstteachers sotheyshouldsetagoodexampletothem ithinkparentsshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds forexample theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowit sapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble 参考范文二 ascanbeseenfromthecartoons itisastoryaboutabadexampleoffamilyeducation inthefirstpicture aboywastryingtohelpagirlwhofelloveronthegroundwhilehismompersuadedhimnottodoso saying don tdothat otherwiseotherswouldthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherknown inthesecondpicture theboywasseensittingleisurelywithanoilbottlelyingonthegroundbesideshisfeet momwasgreatlyshockedbytheexplanationfromtheboy ifihadliftedtheoilbottle youwouldthinkthatitwasmewhobroughtitdown idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory asweallknow parentsarethefirstteachers ithinkparentsshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowit sapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble 同步练习 2011南京二模 请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文 短文内容应该包括以下三个方面 1 描述这幅漫画的内容 2 是否同意他们的教育方式 并陈述理由 3 对家庭教育提出建议 注意 1 词数 150左右 开头句已经给出 不计入总词数内 2 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 参考词汇 溺爱spoilvt ascanbeseeninthecartoon theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways 参考范文 ascanbeseeninthecartoon theyoungcoupleeducatetheirchildindifferentways fathereducatestheirchildwitharulerbutmotherwithabarofchocolate whatisillustratedinthepictureisthatfatheristoohardontheirchildwhilemotherspoilshim theyadoptstrikinglyinconsistentmethods whichmakestheirchildconfused isubscribetoneitheroftheireducationmethods ifwealwaysgivechildrenseverepunishment theywillbecomenervousandlackself confidenceorbecomeviolentandaggressive followinginthefather sfootsteps ifwealwayslovechildrentoomuch theywillturnouttobeself centeredanddependent tendingtodowhatevertheywantto sofarasiamconcerned itisbettertouseappropriatemethodsbasedonchildre