初中英语作文辅导之建议劝告.doc

2012写作话题专练（八） 八、个人观点建议 （提建议、劝告等）（一）例文审题假设你是某中学生英语杂志Voice of Students栏目的编辑Mary, 请你针对Tony 的来信谈谈你的看法并提出建议。 Dear Mary, I am a middle school student. Our teacher always asks us to work in groups. One student in our group always doesnt finish his work on time, though he has promised us that he would. The other three of us feel unhappy about it. What should we do? Shall we go on working with him? 人称：你/你们-第二人称时态：一般现在时内容：3点：回答问题，看法, 建议（二）头脑风暴hear from，job. sometimes，cooperate，team，finish the work， promise, help，problem，serious，Unfortunately，give up，harm，health.， mental ，destroy， blame， offer, refuse，apologize, explain, message,（三）单句翻译/造句成文1、 很高兴收到你的来信。_2、我明白你的感受。 _3、和别人合作不容易。_4 你应继续该和工作，你们是一个组。_5、下面是我的一些建议。 _6、你应该问他为什么不能完成工作？_7、他有困难，你应帮她。8、你应该告诉他你们愿意和他一起工作_9、你可以寻求老师的帮助_10、我希望我的建议对你有帮助。_111.你最好找出他没完成任务的原因。12. 如果他真麻烦，作为组员，分担困难是你的责任。13. 向老师求助是一个很好的主意。14. 老师是一个能帮助你和他更好沟通的人。（四）连句成篇and, also, as well, so, because, for, but, however, while, although, though, therefore, in order to, so that, by, firstly, secondly, as for, first of all, then, next, besides, whats more, not onlybut also, after all, finally, the last but not the least, like, such as, for example/instance, and so on, on one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another thing, in my opinion, in all, in a word, at present, in the past, Im happy to hear from you. I understand what you feel. _ it is not so easy to cooperate with partners. _, you should go on working with him _ you are a team, _. Here is some advice for you._, you should ask him _ he couldnt finish the work. _ he is in trouble, you should help him out. _ you can tell him you are willing to work with him. _, you can ask your teacher for help. I hope _my advice will help you with your problem. （五）提升亮点1. 词组表示合作：cooperate with, go on working with, communicate wit, help out, speak ill / highly of sb, talk about, find out the reason, allow to do, insist on doing,., offer to do, tell to do, express ones idea, write sb.a letter, send a message, blame sb.sth, be weak in, make progress2. 句型从句had better do, Its bad for, make +adj be glad that, the reason why is that, I think that/I believe that, If I were you, I would (do).You are supposed to (do) .3. 非谓语结构：Its +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth is82.句子. You had better find out the reason why he couldnt finish the work. If he is really in trouble, you should help each other as a team. It is a good idea to ask your teacher for help. He is the person who can help you communicate with the students better.（六）主题升华1 I can understand how you feel and that you really hope to do a good job. Although it was wrong for him to break his promise, youd betterIm looking forward to hearing your good news.If he is really in trouble, it is really your duty to share the difficulty with him.（七）习作：2010宣武一模：假如你是李明，你美国的笔友Tony遇到了一个难题，发邮件向你求助。请回封邮件，写出个人看法，并提出解决问题的建议（至少2-3条）。Dear Li Ming, My friend David doesnt do well in English. He often wants to copy my answers. I think its wrong for him to do that. However, his parents will punish him if he cant get a high score. I dont want David to get into trouble. What should I do?Yours,TonyDear Tony,I have received your e-mail recently. I can understand you. You should tell him its wrong to do that because its bad for him. If he forms a habit of copying others answers, he will not work hard at his lessons. Whats more, its not honest to do that. What should you do? Youd better help him to study English hard. For example, you can ask him to listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class, you should make him use his head to do exercises. If he really need help, you can help him. Im sure, with your help, he will get rid of his bad habit and make progress soon. I hope these will help you! Yours, Li Ming 2010丰台一模：假设你叫李琳。你的加拿大网友Elizabeth最近遇到了一些不开心的事情。阅读她发给你的e-mail，然后根据她的问题给她写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么或不应该做什么。 Dear friend, Im really unhappy now because my parents always make me stay at home and study every night during the week. They say that I must study hard for my exams. But in my opinion, I dont have to work so hard all the time. I have problems on weekends, too On weekends I can go out with my friends, but I have to be home before 20:00. Its crazy! They dont want me to go to parties, either. They say it wont do good for my studies. What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions? Elizabeth Dear Elizabeth,Im sorry to hear that youre not happy now. Its very common for us to have such kind of problems. So dont worry. Here I have some suggestions for you.Firstly, youd better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Secondly, you should talk with your parents, telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Please dont be angry with them, which only makes things worse. The last thing is to do what you have promised. When they find you are strong-minded and act properly, they wont be worried about you. Then they wont set so many rules for you.Please have a try. Im looking forward to hearing good news from you. Yours, Li Lin2010通州一模：请你以 “This is what I should do” 为题，为学校英语园地投稿，内容包括：你认为应该在什么情况下帮助别人；你为别人做过什么；你帮助别人后的体会或感受。提示词语：everyone, other(s), important, happy, each otherWhen someone around us is in trouble, we should try to help him out. Because I often get help from others, I am always ready to help others. I do well in all subjects in my class. Id like to help my classmates if they ask me for help with their lessons. I like to do so because helping others makes me happy. It is important to be kind to the people around you. If everyone shows his love to others, our life will become better and better. 2010房山一模：中学生学习时间长、压力(pressure)大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此，不同的同学有不同的放松方式，有的看电视，有的听音乐，有的做运动,请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因，谈谈你的感受。提示词语：relax, TV, music, thinkStudents study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure. In order to relax themselves different students have different ways-Some watch TV, some listen to music But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think its really helpful to both my health and my study. (83)2011朝阳一模：交通安全至关重要。假如你是学校交通安全宣传员。请按以下提示信息写一篇短文，向你校外籍学生宣传交通安全知识并提出自己的建议。red lightstop/ not allowed to do somethinggreen lightsafe to go/ turnorange lightred light will be on, be carefulsuggestionsfollow/ break, better lifeIts very important for students to know about the traffic rules. When the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking. Its safe to cross the road when the light is green. When the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on. Here are some suggestions to protect ourselves. First, we should follow the traffic lights and cant break the traffic rules. Second, wed better look left and right to make sure we are safe when we want to cross the street. Last but not least, dont forget that its very dangerous to play on the street. If everyone follows the traffic rules we will have a happy life.2011朝阳二模：假如你叫Sally, 是Betty的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请你给她写一封回信，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。Dear Sally,Im very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips, but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little lunch and I often feel tired and cant follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible.Yours,BettyDear Betty, I have read your letter. _Yours truly,Dear Betty, Dear Betty, I have read your letter. I can understand your feeling and Im worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. Its not only for yourself, but also for the whole school.Good luck.Yours truly,Sally2011丰台一模：假设你叫杨洋。是加拿大中学生Paula的笔友，下面是你收到的她的电子邮件。请你根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些帮助她解决问题的建议。Dear Yang Yang,Im having troubles these days. Its difficult for me to get down to work, I cant concentrate on studying. At home I spend most of my time playing computer games instead of doing my homework. I go to bed very late, so I feel very tired in class. Sometimes I want to listen to the teachers but I cant stop thinking about the games I played at home. As a result, I can hardly understand the teacher now. Im afraid I cant pass the final exam. What should I do? Can you help me with the problem?Yours, PaulaDear Paula, Im sorry to hear you are in trouble now. I can understand your feeling. But I dont think it is right for you to do things like that. Dont worry. Here are some suggestions for you：As a student, its important for you to study hard to get more knowledge. So I think doing homework is necessary and useful. You should do your homework first. If it is not too late, you can play computer games for a while. Remember to go to bed as early as possible, then you wont feel tired the next day. In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes. Whats more, its important to take part in class activities, try to answer at least two questions each class. If you have any problems, ask your teachers or classmates for help. I m sure youll make great progress and pass the final exam. Good luck! Yours,Yang yang2011一模燕山： 目前，许多同学学会了上网聊天。他们在结识新朋友，学习新东西的同时，也遇到了很多问题。下面是几个同学的困惑，请你针对他们的问题，谈谈你对网上聊天的看法，并给他们提出一些可行性的建议。PeterIf the net-friends want to know my phone number, what should I do? JohnSometimes, I meet some adults. I have nothing to chat with them. What should I do? GeorgeIf they want to visit or invite me, what should I do? Nowadays, more and more students like chatting with friends on line. While chatting, they make new friends and learn new things. But they also meet with some difficulties. Peter says some net-friends want to know his phone number. I dont think we should tell strangers our phone numbers. Knowing our phone numbers, they might call us often. Sometimes we meet adults like John. If you have nothing to chat with them, skip it. You can just look for some information you like. George doesnt know what to do if net-friends want to visit or invite him. In my opinion, if you want to see them, you had better ask your parents to go with you. Inviting them to your house is a good idea. In a word, if you are often on line, be careful. Dont let strangers know you easily. ( 138 words ) 2011一模通州：假如你叫刘风，是美国中学生Mike的朋友，你收到了他的一封电子邮件。请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信，谈谈你对他所提问题的看法、你是怎么做的，并给他提出建议。Dear Liu Feng, I feel sad these days because my parents dont let me watch TV any more. They say I should put my heart into my lessons or do something interesting instead of enjoying music on TV the whole evening. But I like music. I enjoy the pop songs, and I like the pop stars very much. What shall I do? Can you help me? Yours, MikeDear Mike，I think your parents are right. It is not good for us to spend whole nights enjoying music on TV. We have a lot of things to do except homework, such as reading, doing sport, and helping around the house. When I have finished my homework, I usually read magazines, wash my clothes, or watch news on TV. It is all right that you like pop music. You can enjoy it on weekend. I think your parents will be glad to see that. Yours, Liu Feng2011昌平一模：假如你叫Sally，是英国中学生Betty的笔友，你收到了她的来信。请给她写一封回信，回答她的问题，并为她提些建议。Subject: I have a problem. Receiver: sally;Time: 2011. 4. 21 10:25 (Thursday)Sender: betty;Dear Sally,I have a problem now. Next Monday morning, I have to give a short speech at the school meeting and Im very nervous. You know, Im afraid of facing so many people. I have never spoken to so many people. I think Im going to give up. But all my teachers, classmates and my parents say it is a good chance for me to practise. What shall I do if I forget my words? And if my face turns red? Do you have any good ideas? Please, please tell me as soon as possible.Many thanks.Yours, Betty Dear Betty,Thank you for your letter. Im glad you have such a good chance to practise. Congratulations! I think you can practise your speech again and again until you can speak well enough. So youll be sure you can do it well and wont forget the words. When you speak, imagine you were speaking to some trees or couldnt see the people. For the red face, dont you think you will look more beautiful? I hope you will make an excellent speech.Yours, Sally 2012西城期末统练假设你是某中学生英语杂志Voice of Students栏目的编辑Mary, 请你针对Tony 的来信谈谈你的看法并提出建议。Dear Mary, I am a middle school student. Our teacher always asks us to work in groups. One student in our group always doesnt finish his work on time, though he has promised us that he would. The other three of us feel unhappy about it. What should we do? Shall we go on working with him?Yours, Tony Dear Tony,Im happy to hear from you. I can understand how you feel and that you really hope to do a good job. However, sometimes it is not so easy to cooperate with co-workers. In my opinion, you should go on working with him because you are a team after all, although it was wrong for him to break his promise. Here is some advice for you.Firstly, you had better find out the reason why he couldnt finish the work. If he is really in trouble, you should help each other as a team. Secondly, you can tell him you are willing to work with him because many heads are better than one. Last but not least, it is a good idea to ask your teacher for help. Because he/she can help you communicate with the students better. I hope my advice will help you with your problem. Im looking forward to hearing your good news. Yours,Mary2012朝阳期末: 假设你叫张华，是美国中学生鲍勃的朋友。你收到了他的电子邮件，请给他回复，回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。Hi! Zhang Hua,I have a big problem these days. I spend much time watching TV in the evening after doing my homework. So I often stay up and get up late in the morning. As a result, I usually have no time for breakfast and feel tired all day. My parents dont allow me to watch TV now and force me to go to bed before 10:30. That makes me unhappy. I dont think they understand me. Do you have the same problem? What should I do? Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours, BobHi! Bob, Im glad to hear from you.I used to have the same problem. Cheer up! Id like to give you some advice.First, stop watching TV and go to bed earlier. Watching TV too much is bad not only for your eyes but also for your study. Second, youd better get up on time and have breakfast. Breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Finally, you should understand your parents. All parents love their children. If you listen to them, Im sure you will become healthier and wont often feel tired. I think its important for everyone to keep healthy and good living habits help a lot. I hope what I said can help you.2012丰台期末：今天网络对我们生活和学习的影响无处不在。假设你是网名Free Dove网络冲浪手，E是你时常浏览的一个网站。这次你在上面看到这样两份留言，请你选择其中一份留言回复，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出几点建议。 Message 1 Memorizing English words is a big headache to me. I want to learn to use English and I also spend some time learning words by heart. But I find I have forgotten them more quickly than I remember them. Are there any good ways to memorize English words? 48w From LilyMessage 2 In my teachers eyes, I am certainly a good student in English learning. I listen in class and finish homework in time. But Im not happy with the results. I dont know which way is good for me to learn English. Hopefully, someone can tell me. 47w From Betty Hi, _ Im interested in the question y