只有政府才能解决住房短缺.doc

反对只有政府才能解决住房短缺：（反对解决问题的最佳性和唯一性）Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe consequence，some people think that only the government can solve the problems. To what extent do you agree or not agree? 有人认为大城市的住房短缺能够引起严重的后果，只有政府才能解决，是否同意？语料库：1. Housing shortage = housing scarcity 2. as the government administrates the lands which are sold to property developers3. real estate developers = property developers 房产开发商4. economically affordable houses 经济适用房范文背诵：Housing scarcity is thorny a social issue every government needs to resolve. After all, over-high housing price exerts a detrimental influence on peoples happiness index. Some people argue that only the government can relieve the pressure of housing because the most supreme governmental administration. Personally speaking, governments do have a vital role to play in stabilizing the housing price, but there are still other means to tackle解决this severe problem. 首段：词汇改写，亮点提前，论证和理由不要在首段展开。Indeed, I have to concede that governments can， in more ways than one， restrain the ever-accelerated cost of new houses . One of the most effective ways to control over the expenditure of the house is to deter the greedy speculators or property developers from flipping homes, more precisely， the vacancy rate could be greatly reduced when governmental interruption works. Moreover, governments are supposed to strength the supervision over real estate developers so that it helps to stop those illicit merchants from disrupting the regular economic orders. However, the effort made by homebuyers and builders is indispensable.总结： to do sth = so that sb could do sth should do sth = is supposed to do sth = ought to do sth = to do sth is highly recommended. 三段：反驳As far as wealthy house purchaser who desires to earn high interests in housing investment concerned, they should learn to eliminate their avarice贪婪for enormous house. The rich had better assume the responsibility to set a fine example for the society. In this way, the public will learn that housing investment is not the only worthwhile way to allocate分配the wealth. In the mean while, ordinary buyers not only ought to work diligently to raise money for future house investment, but also make full use of the government policies and bank loan to promote the standard of living.Furthermore, the builders efforts cannot be ignored. Firstly, they ought to transfer their housing strategy from building luxurious villas to popularizing economically affordable houses. Only when cheaper houses are built by property developer can they meet the demands of common house consumers. Similarly, mass media have the duty to alter peoples mode of thinking in house via encouraging people to rent houses if they cannot own their property in short time. In closing, I reaffirm my conviction that it is rather superficial to simply say that only government can address the housing shortage problem. Concerted efforts should be made by house buyers and builders. 分析你的问题：语法错误：表达不清晰；用词不准确；语言没有变化；不要害怕把句子写长；触类旁通：政府是否应该给教育和医疗买单：（政府的责任，人们的权利） 政府的财政有限，政府还有更紧迫的社会问题有待解决；这样做是费时费力；【例】:Education is the driving force of productivity. Keeping this in mind, numerous countries and governments are putting more stress on the development of education. 教育是生产力发展的驱动力，很多国家重视教育的发展（国家给教育买单）【例】: State officials and general public have been for years pondering the pros and cons of relying solely on the government for the funding of medical care and education without reaching any definite consensus. （政府给教育和医疗买单） 一直在思考的利弊，没有达成一致的观点。【例】: For a start= initially, to popularize free education is one of the most stimulating factors to promote the basic quality of a nations population. 推行免费的义务教育是提高国民基本素质的最有刺激性的因素之一.(支持政府给教育买单)【例】: Jointed efforts should be made by both the government and the students to reduce the financial burden of college education. 政府和学生共同努力来减少财政的负担。(谁为教育买单)Sth is important = sth is of great importance She is beautiful = she is of great beauty. 【例】: What is of ultimate importance is that the government needs to enact制定relevant legislations carefully and ensure that the proportion is appropriate. （政府给教育和医疗买单） 最重要的是，政府应该相关立法去确定这种比例是合适的。（我的观点）【例】: In addition, to get better education could, in a larger sense, help students who come from needy families to keep them from living in poverty. 另外，接受良好教育，在很大程度上，可以帮助来自贫困家庭的孩子们远离贫困。（国家给教育买单的理由）【例】: To make the final point, if most citizens have access to better education, then the development of education will enhance a nations comprehensive national strength in the international political arena. 最后一点，如果大多数公民都接受了很好的教育，教育的发展可以提高一个国家在国际政坛上的综合国力。反对政府的投资政策：1. Being extremely time-consuming and energy-consuming, hosting international sports events sounds more of a huge waste of money and other resources to some people. 非常浪费时间和浪费经历，举办国际体育比赛听起来是金钱和其他资源的浪费。