高考英语写作提升.ppt

2011届高考英语二轮书面表达提高 升格及分类训练 ByMsSun 一 快速升格你的作文 使用高级词汇1 常用到的高级词汇例如 此外 what smore 同样地 inthesameway 然而 however 因为 becauseof 虽然 though although 总之 inaword inshort allinall 现今 today now 应该 should Inaddition furthermore likewise similarly equally incomparison incontrast ontheotherhand onthecontrary dueto owingto onaccountof thanksto asaresultof despitethefactthat inspiteofthefactthat inbrief insummary tosumup tosummarize toconclude nowadays currently besupposedto 有时候 sometimes 又如 beinterestedin verygood mostof bemadeupof as solongas tryone sbesttodo growfast 再如 SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy occasionally becrazyabout beabsorbedin perfectlygood themajorityof consistof onconditionthat sparenoefforttodo growrapidly growamazinglyfast Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy 2 用短语代替单词例如 Asaresult theplanwas afailure ShewenttoAustriatostudy music Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable Shecan tcorrectlypronounce theword turnedouttobe forthepurposeofstudying Thankstothegoodweather hastroublepronouncing 使用复杂结构1 改变语态Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff 一般 2 使用不定式Heissokindthathecanhelpme 一般 3 使用过去分词Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 一般 4 使用V ing形式Whenhearrives pleasegivemeane mail 一般 Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff 高级 Heissokindastohelpme 高级 Followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab 高级 Onarriving hisarrival pleasegivemeane mail 5 使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn tturnup 一般 6 使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof Hercompositionwaswellwritten 一般 7 使用强调句 倒装句 感叹句 Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920 一般 ThoughI mweak Iwillmaketheeffort 一般 Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell 一般 Thefactthathedidn tturnupdisappointedeverybody 高级 Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof 高级 Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan 高级 WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort 高级 Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell 高级 二 单句习练 翻译下列句子1 不用说早睡早起是值得的 2 我深信预防胜于治疗 3 在各种运动中 我尤其喜欢慢跑 4 时间最珍贵是很容易证明的 5 就我所知 下列方法对我帮助很大 Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure Amongvariouskindsofsports Iamfondofjogginginparticular Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome 6 毫无疑问 近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题 7 根据我个人经验 微笑已带给我许多好处 8 在我的求学过程中 我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困难 9 随着台湾经济的快速发展 许多社会问题产生了 Thereisnodoubtthatnear sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry Accordingtomypersonalexperience smilehasdonemealotofgood Inthecourseofmyschooling IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwan seconomy largequantitiesofsocialproblemshavecomeout 10 在这信息的年代 计算机扮演非常重要的角色 11 世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴的 12 我们保持公共场所清洁是应当的 13 每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪 我就忍不住感到悲伤 Inthisageofinformationandcommunication thecomputerplaysanextremelyimportantrole Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfast foodrestaurants Itisproperthatwearesupposedtokeepthepublicplacesclean WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome Icannotbutfeelsad 14 一般相信阅读增加我们的知识 扩大我们的心胸 15 青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益败坏 16 俗话说得好 诚实为上策 17 人们学外语有三个理由 18 为了维护健康 我们每天至少可做三件事 Itisgenerallybelieved that readingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourmind Themainreasonwhytheteenagerscommitcrimesisthatsocialenvironmentisbecomingworse Asanoldsayinggoes Honestyisthebestpolicy Peoplelearnaforeignlanguageforthreemajorreasons Inordertokeephealthy thereareatleastthreethingswecandoeveryday 19 相反 多数学生似乎还是对课外活动感兴趣的 20 政府应严格执法 另一方面 大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯 21 换言之 我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标 22 从此之后 我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好办法 Onthecontrary amajorityofstudents itseems arestillkeenonafter classactivities Thegovernmentshouldenforcelawsstrictly Ontheotherhand thepublicalsoshoulddevelopthegoodhabitofreducingpollution Toputitdifferently Iwillsparenoefforttoattain gain liveupto mygoal Eversincethen Ihavefoundsmileisthebestwaytoavoidanypossibleconflictsinourdailylives 23 更严重的是 我们不珍惜野生动物 24 做这些简单之事 我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家 25 唯有通力合作 我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌 26 最后 但并非最不重要 教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因 Whatismoreseriousisthatwedonotcherishthewildlife Bydoingthesesimplethings wesurelycangooutofthedoorhappilyandcomebackhomesafeeveryday OnlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectTaiwantotakeanewfaceinduecourse Lastbutnoleast theshortcomingineducationisthecausecontributingtothecrimeofyoungsters 27 总而言之 好国民应该遵守交通规则 28 因此 我们能下个结论 那就是世上自由最珍贵 29 如果我们能做到如上所述 毫无疑问 我们就能精通英语 30 目前根据一项调查 中国学生半数以上患有近视 位居世界第一 Inconclusion agoodcitizenshouldabidebytrafficregulations Wecan therefore cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld Ifwecandoasmentionedabove therecanbenodoubtthatwecanmasterEnglish Curre