托福写作—句子改写—锻造地道英语句子.doc

句子改写托福写作锻造地道英语句子（全） 2002-4-30 13:34:05 BBS 水木清华站 作者:weilee 1.Theartistsworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel. 改进：Artistsworkupgradesourcivilization. 2.Forexample,youworkinabigfactory. 改进:Supposeyouworkinabigfactory. 3.Youllfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmain job. 改进：Youllfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmake ityourcareer. 4.Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck. 改进:Wewillgetnowhereifwerelyonluck. 5.Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel. 改进:Hewillgetahighersalary,thusimprovinghislife. 6.Theirbrainisstillveryyoung. 改进:Theyarestillimmature. 7.Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings. 改进:Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter. 8.Theycantanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong. 改进:Theycannottellrightfromwrong. 9.Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtime. 改进:Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime. 10.Thoughitisnotthebestjob,itaffordtohislife. 改进:Thoughitisnotthebestjob,ajobisajob.Hecanmakeends meetwithit. 11.Sincepeoplearealwaysnotsatisfiedwiththeirpresentsituation, theywantfurtherdevelopment. 改进:Sincepeopleareneversatisfiedwiththeirstatusquo,they wantfurtherdevelopment. 12.Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobwhichcaneasily get bigmoney. 改进:Theonlythingtheyneedtodoistofindajobthatcanbring thembigmoney. 13.Theylikeanactivelifebutnotapeacefullife. 改进:Theylikeanactiveliferatherthanapeacefulone. 14.Somecigarettesmayevencostalargersumofmoney. 改进:Somecigarettesmaycostevenmore. 15.Firstly,dissatisfactionencouragesthediscoveryofnewproducts. 改进:Firstly,dissatisfactionencouragestheinventionofnew products. 16.Inordertosuittheneedsofenteringintowork,studentsmust graspsometechnicalskills. 改进:Inordertomeettheneedsoffuturework,studentsmustlearn somepracticalskills. 17.Itisverynecessarymorequalifiedscientistsandtechnicians. 改进:Qualifiedscientistsandtechniciansareingreatdemand. 18.Thisknowledgewillbecomeapartofyourbody. 改进:Thisknowledgewillbecomepartofyou. 19.Theycannotthinkclearly. 改进:Theycannotthinkstraight. 20.Moneycanimprovetheirlivingstandard. 改进:Moneycanimprovetheirlife. 21.Parentsalwaysthinkthatchildrenwillgetagoodjobandearna lotofmoney. 改进:Parentsalwaysexpecttheirchildrentogetagoodjobandearn alotofmoney. 22.Ifastudentonlycaresaboutmoney,willleadtobeunhappyall his life. 改进:Ifastudentonlycaresaboutmoney,hewillbemisledandwill be unhappyallhislife. 23.Onepurposeofeducationistostudythewayinwhichhestudies later. 改进:Onepurposeofeducationistolearntolearn. 24.Manyparentsarrangetheirchildrengotolearnpiano. 改进:Manyparentssendtheirchildrentopianoclasses. 25.WhenIwanttoabsorbsomebodyelsesopinion,Iwillstudywith others. 改进:WhenIneedsecondopinion,Iwillstudywithothers. 26.Eatingoutsidehasthemostadvantagethatwecangoatanytime whenwefinisheatingwithoutdoinganywashing. 改进:Thebestpartofeatingoutisthatwecanleaveeverything behind aftermeal. 27.Smokingcanhelpyourelaxyourmind. 改进:Cigarettescanhelpyourelax. 28.Whatsaboutnonsmokers? 改进:Whataboutnonsmokers? 29.Whynottobeanon-smoker? 改进:Whynotbeanon-smoker? 30.Everyonewillhavemanyfriendsinhislife. 改进:Everyonehasfriendsinhislife. 31.Iamnotgoodatmaths,butEnglish 改进:IamgoodnotatmathematicsbutatEnglish/Mystrengthisnot mathematicsbutEnglish. 32.Whoistheproperpersontomakeuphismindsaboutchildrens leisuretime? 改进:Whoistheproperpersontoplanchildrensleisuretime? 33.Itischildrenwhoclearabouttheirinterests. 改进:Itischildrenwhoareclearabouttheirowninterests. 34.Iagreethelatteridea. 改进:Iagreewiththelatteridea. 35.Manypeopledissatisfywiththestatusquo. 改进:Manypeoplearedissatisfiedwiththestatusquo. 36.SoIfeelbreathemorecomfortablynow. 改进:SoIfeelmorecomfortablenowwhenIbreathe. 37.Peopleshouldlearnknowledgenomatterhowoldtheyare. 改进：Peopleshouldlearnnomatterhowoldtheyare/Peoplearenever toooldtolearn. 38.Nooneknowsallthethings. 改进:Nooneknowseverything. 39.Iwanttoliveinaquietplacetoadmirepeacefullife. 改进:Iwanttoliveinaquietplacetoenjoypeacefullife. 40.Eachformofhavingfriendshasitsadvantages 改进:Eachwayofchoosingfriendshasitsadvantages. 41.Iwasadmittedtoakeyuniversityforwhichfewdaredtosignup. 改进:Iwasadmittedtoakeyuniversitytowhichfewdaredtoapply 42.Luckily,herecognizedanAmericanprofessor. 改进:Luckily,heknewanAmericanprofessor. 43.Theywilllearnthebadhabits. 改进:Theywilldevelopbadhabits. 44.Inthiscontinuedprocess,peoplemakeprogress. 改进:Inthiscycle,peoplemakeprogress. 45.Lastly,highereducationisequaltohighersalary. 改进:Lastly,highereducationmeanshighersalary. 46.Bymakingfriendswhoaredifferentfromourselves,wecanmakeup fordeficiency. 改进:Bymakingfriendswhoaredifferentfromourselves,wecanmake up forourshortcomings. 47.Awrongdecisionwillbringevenworsefact. 改进:Awrongdecisionwillbringevenworseresult. 48.Youspendallyou