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高考写作专题 读写任务写作技巧 Combinewhatisinsidewithwhatisoutside andyouwillgethighermarks 外在 1 卷面 涂改 胶带 黑洞 段首 以下对齐 线的作用 间距 单词 字母 2 字 quality quantity 3 标点 大小写 见基础 FirstImpressions 内在 审题 体裁 时态 人称 要点 提纲 outline 高级语言 单词 用些被动 语篇的连接副词 使要点明确 词组 句型 众所周知 应该 我认为 定从 n从 倒装 强调 非谓语等 谚语 忌重复 基本功 句式多样化 连接副词 1 first second third last2 firstly secondly thirdly finally3 tostartwith tobeginwith firstofall furthermore 4 besides inaddition what smore lastbutnotleast5 ononehand ontheotherhand6 foronething foranother 应该should oughtto 我认为 位置 标点 大小写 众所周知 isknowntousthattheInternet isknowntous isknowntousisthat It As What besupposedtodo 2014年高考考纲新增示例3读写作文 阅读一篇约200词左右的英语文章 以约30词概括英语短文 记叙文 议论文 说明文等 的主要内容 全面地考查学生理解英文篇章 并用英语进行概括 描写与议论的综合语言运用能力 1 命题目的 用120词就某个主题谈自己的看法或想法 并提出三点具体的要求 2 试题要求 Whatisasummary AshortenedversionofthetextMainpointsofthetextWritteninyourownwords Asummaryisabriefaccountofthemainpointsofanarticleinyourownwords Para 1 Howtowriteasummary 概括后的句子意思要通顺 行文要连贯 2 议论文 argumentation 应观点明确 论证严密而有条理 1 记叙文 narration 最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么 1 概括要点 约30字 2 用自己的话来概括 3 关注关键词 中心词 用第三人称 4 要抓住要点 语言精练 不能拖泥带水 而且最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理 25 35个词 Youmaybeginlikethese 1 Accordingtothepassage weknow 2 Thewriterstatesthat 3 Ascanbelearntfromthispassage 4 Asthepassagesays 5 Thepassagemainlytellsus talksabout 6 Wecanknowfromthepassage7 Asfarastheauthorisconcerned 8 Accordingtothepassage theauthorstatesthat 9 Inthepassage theauthorstatesthat Howtosummarizeanarration Skill 要素串联法 Hi IamMike Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife Iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary Thestudent sUnionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings Iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground thesixelementsofanarrativepassage Mike Hisfirstyearofcollege toughest adjustment gotusedtoit lovethecollegelife Gethimselfactiveinthings Asthepassagesays itwastoughforMiketoaccomplishthegeneraladjustmentduringhisfirstyearofcollegebutaftergettingactiveinthingsforonesemester hegotaccustomedandenjoyedhimself 35words 应该用最简练的语言 不需涵盖所有要点 来说明故事讲述了什么 不能拖泥带水 比重最大的是what 但不要把what写得太详细 注意浓缩 记叙文概括注意点 ItookatriptoabiglakeinIndonesiawithmyfamilytwoyearsago Itwasreallyahugelakewithbeautifulsceneryallaround Peoplewereamazedbytheendlessviewinfrontofoureyes Lateron unlikeothergirls Ivolunteeredtogowater skiingalone Iputonthelifejacket gotonthemotorboatimmediatelyandstartedmyengineassoonaspossible Thelakeseemedbroadandendless IwassothrilledtoenjoymytripamongthemountainsandwatersthatIspedmymotorboat Then aftersometime Ifoundmyselfinthemiddleoftheendlesslake Asuddenfearcamearoundme Ididn tknowwhereIwasorevenhowfarIhadgonefromtheshore Whatwasworse itbegantorainanditbecameverycoldandfoggy Irodeeverywherebutfindmywayback Itwasuselessformetocryorshoutforhelp IwassoterrifiedthatIbegantothinkaboutallkindsofhorriblethings Afterfloatingonthewaterhelplesslyandhopelesslyforalongtime suddenlyIheardsomeonecallingmyname Soon abigsteamboatsailedtomeandtheypulledmeuptothedeckandaskedmeifIwashurt Icouldn tsayawordbutcriedoutinmyfather sarms 实战演练 twoyearsago I thewriter atriptoabiglakeinIndonesia Toothrilled Atfirst Then Atlast wenttowater skiingalone gotlost fathercametorescueher Thewriterstatesthatonce shetookatriptoalakewhereshewentwater skiingalone Shewassoexcitedandenjoyedherselfthatshegotlost Fortunately herfathercametorescueher 34words Howtosummarizeanargumentation Skill 议论三步法 Tomanypeopleeventheword work soundsunpleasant notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy Thesameman whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice mayworkhardattheweekend paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden Whatisthereason then Inmostcases itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction Itmaybequiteeasy likemakingupwoodenboxes butitisveryboring Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay Ihavemadesomething Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized Nomatterhowordinaryajobis itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe dullandboring jobs 1 Thispassagemainlytellsusthatmanypeopledisliketheirjobsbecausetheythinktheirjobsaresmallandordinaryjobs 2 Manypeopledisliketheirjobbecausetheythinktheirworkistooboringandtoosmall However nomatterhowordinaryajobis itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect 3 Everyjobisnecessary Weshouldn ttreatthedullandboringjobswithdiscrimination Onlybydoingsocanoursocietyfunctionwell 4 Manypeopledon tliketheirjob Theythinkitisboring Eachjobdeservesrespect 5 Commonjobsalwaysdrivepeoplemad whichcan tsaythemlazy However oursocietycan tlackthesejobs 要点不齐 概括不全 部分引用原文 穷于变化 未能准确理解 脱离短文主题 缺少连接 语言生硬 句子结构混乱 词汇误用 Thepassagestatesthatnowadays alargenumberofpeoplearenotenthusiasticabouttheirworkandattachlittleimportancetoordinaryjobswhicharevitaltooursociety 29words 要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点 找出中心论点以及最后的结论 再补充论据观点需明确 论证严密而有条理 议论文概括注意点 Itwas7 30inthemorning AsusualIwasonthesubwaytoschool Itwassocrowdedwithpeoplethatitfeltliketheairconditionerwasn tworking Iwasstandingtherelookingaround Then Isawanoldladygetonthetrainwitha7 year oldchildwhoseemedtobehergrandson Awarm heartedgentlemangenerouslyofferedhisseattotheoldlady Insteadofsittingdownherself however theoldladycalledhergrandsonoverandtoldhimtosit Soonerorlater childrenmatureandstepintothecomplicatedworld Loveisnecessaryintheearlydevelopmentofchildren yet tothedisappointmentofmany toomuchlovedefinitelypreventschildrenfromlearningtherulesoftherealworld Teachingthechildabouttherulesofsocietywithinthefamilyhelpsthechildtoachievesuccesslater Bygivingupseatstotheirchildren grandparentsmaydestroykids bestchanceforcharacterdevelopment 实战演练 Thepassagemainlytellsustheimportanceofcharacterdevelopmentbygivinganexampleofanoldladywhogivesupherseatofferedbyagentlemantohergrandchild 30words 要想在考场写作的紧张时刻用30词左右概括短文的内容要点 我们需要谨记下面的六种技巧skill1 省略细节Skill2 省略重复了的内容Skill3 省略例子Skill4 用概括性的语言而不是精确的语言Skill5 使用短而精的连词 如but and besides Skill6 用间接引语表达对话内容 概括内容要点不完整 误区警示 原文理解出现偏差 与主题不相关 或表达了自己的意见 使用太多细节内容而不是用概括的语言 东拼西凑 抄袭原文 原句 句子结构混乱 不能用完整的句子来表达 缺少衔接 单词拼写错误频繁 读写任务型写作既然是先 读 后 写 是读后有感而发 那么 读的内容 和 感的内容 要有机地联系起来 即短文概括与发表议论的段落要合理地承接起来才是一篇连贯的文章 记叙文的过渡语 引出类似的经历 Thisstoryremindsmeofanotherstorythathappenedto Thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceof Ialsowentthroughsuchanexperience Ihaveasimilarexperience have hasasimilarexperienceas Para 2概括段与下文的承接 阅读材料如果是议论文 作者已有鲜明的观点 可采用以下的句式承接下文 1 Whatthewritersaidsoundsreasonable 2 Ican tagreemorewithwhatthewritersaid 3 Iquiteagreewiththewriter sidea 4 I mforthewriter sideathat 5 Idon tagreewiththewriter sview 6 I mstronglyagainstthewriter sidea 7 Ipartlyagreewithwhatthewritersaid 实战演练 随堂训练 Everyyear Chinaelectstenpeoplethatinspirethenationwiththeiracts Lastyear ayounggirlnamedMengPeijieinnorthChina sShanxiProvincewasgiventhishonor Shehasbeentakingcareofherparalyzedadoptivemotherformorethantenyearssincetheageofeight Whatshehasdonehasmovedmanypeopleinthecountry AllthatMengPeijiehasishermother InMeng swords mothermeanshomeandthosewhohaveamother arethehappiestintheworld MengPeijieisnowtwenty twoyearsold Bothherbiologicalparentsdiedwhenshewasaboutfiveyearsold Butlifetookacruelturnforher HeradoptivemothergotsickandwasparalyzedwhenMengwaseight Heradoptivefatherleftthehouseandneverreturned Sincethen Mengbegandutifullytakingcareofhermotherallonherown MengPeijie sstoryhastouchedmanyChinesepeople Shenowstandsoutinsocietyforherdevotiontoduty Whenaskedbydifferentmediahowshemanagedtoovercometheoddsagainsther shesaysshejustremainedsimple minded 写作要求 1 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 3 图片仅供参考 你看完上面这则新闻故事后深有感触 决定在班上英语课前活动中做一个英语演讲 演讲的开头和结尾已为你写好 内容包括以下几点 1 以约30个词概括上面新闻故事的主要内容 2 以约120个词发表你的看法 内容包括 1 这则新闻故事带给你的感受 2 你认为主人公感动中国的最重要的原因是什么 为什么 3 受到的启发并进行呼吁 Boysandg