初中英语写作课　精品.ppt

ParagraphWriting MuZhonghua No 39MiddleSchool LearningTarget 学习目标 Wearelearninghowtowriteaparagraphtoshowideas paragraph 段落 YaoMing thecenteroftheChineseNationalMen sBasketballTeam servedtheHustonRocketsinthe2002NBA The2 26m 120kgcenterbecomesthefirstonetocomefromaforeignteam YaoMingwasborninShanghaiinSeptember 1980 HismotherwasacenterandcaptainoftheChineseNationalWomen sTeam Hisfatherplayedbasketball too SportanalystBillWaltonsaid YaoMinghasthepotentialthecapabilityofchangingthefutureofbasketball SuccessCriteria 目标达成要求 1 Icanwriteastrongtopicsentence 2 Icanwritethreedetailsentences 3 Icanwriteaclosingsentence 4 Icanusewordsorphrasestomaketheideasmoreclear 5 Icancheckmygrammar spellingandpunctuation afterwriting G NG GoodN needsimprovement ParagraphWriting detailsentence1 detailsentence2 detailsentence3 closingsentence topicsentence body beginning ending Groupwork Task1 Underlinethetopicsentence Task2 Addtransitionalwordsorphrasesfordetailsentences 添加过渡语 Writeaclosingsentence Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword Withoutzoos mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers lions elephants zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly zoosprotecttheanimalswell Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein WordWall TransitionalWords 过渡语 表示层次 detail1 detail2 detail3 表示总结 closing first firstly firstofall tobegin start with second secondly then next afterthat besides what smore third thirdly finally lastly atlast intheend inaword inshort asaresult Groupwork Task3 Rereadtheparagraphformistakesandcorrectthem Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword Withoutzoos mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers lions elephants zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly zoosprotecttheanimalswell Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein Writing 请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健康的方式 要求使用过渡语以及topic detail closingsentences ParagraphWriting 请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健康的方式 要求使用过渡语以及topic d