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写作素能培养 第三部分 第五讲运用高级词汇与句式 打造作文亮点 写作时 高级词汇与高级句式 如能运用贴切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处 也会为你的作文增添色彩 赢得阅卷老师的青睐 一 使用高级词汇高级词汇主要是指 考试大纲 中没有列入的 但在实际运用中使用较频繁的词汇 大纲中较常用词汇通过构词形成的词汇也属于高级词汇 是否使用高级词汇 可以基本判断该考生所掌握的词汇量 1 挖掘纲外词汇有些单词在英语 考试大纲 中确实未曾出现 但在阅读时经常碰到 如 annoyed currently等 Hewas thatshehadforgottenhisbirthday annoyed比angry高级 Chinais intheprimarystageofsocialism currently比now高级 annoyed currently 2 挖掘可替代词汇使用词组 习语来代替简单枯燥的词汇 如 用makefulluseof代替use catchsightof代替see lookforwardto代替hope等 Wehadbetter somethinginexpensive makefulluseof比use高级 Finallyhe theyoungman slightovercoatinthedistance catchsightof比see生动 I m yourvisitnextweek lookforwardto比hope高级 makefulluseof caughtsightof lookingforwardto 3 挖掘 味感 词汇有的单词很常见 且 洋味 十足 表达地道 非常有 味感 这类词也被视为高级词汇 如share view drive等 Weall oneandthesameplanet share比livein更有 味感 Wecan theprobleminmanyways view比lookat更有内涵 Thenoisenexttothedoor memad 用drive而不用make share view drove possess endless putupwith turnedadeafearto promote challenging 二 使用高级句式 让句子靓起来1 恰当使用被动语态 WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020 AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020 I mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas I mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas 2 使用强调句 Asasayinggoes thelittlethingmattersmost Asasayinggoes itisthelittlethingthatmattersmost Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward It sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward 3 使用倒装句 Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy Ididn trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways 4 使用省略句 Ifitisso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Ifso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感叹句 Itisaverysplendidmoment Howsplendidamomentitis Iamveryworriedabouthiscondition HowworriedIamabouthiscondition 6 使用with复合结构 Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim andwecanseesweatonhisface Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim withsweatonhisface Asthesocietydevelopsrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer 7 使用虚拟语气 Itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp Withoutyourhelp Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar Aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 Ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 5 Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 感叹句 6 Becausetherewastoomuchnoise Icouldn tgoonstudying with复合结构 Ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday Withthenoisegoingon Icouldn tgoonstudying 三 如何写好therebe句型1 Therebe句型的基本意义 某地有某物Thereisanincreaseofabout10percent comparedwithlastyear 与去年相比较 大约增加了百分之十 名师点拨由于受汉语影响 有些同学在使用这个句型时常常把be误用成have的某种形式 下午将有一场演讲 Thereisgoingtohavealecturethisafternoon Thereisgoingtobealecturethisafternoon 2 Wheretherebe therebe 哪里有 哪里就有 Asthedetailedanalysesabovehaveshownus wherethereislife thereishope 正如上面详尽的论述所示 活着就有希望 3 Therebe 名词 分词短语Therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows 有三个因素促成了下面的观点 名师点拨在这一句型中 有些同学常常把分词误用成动词原形 有些学生支持这个主意 Therearesomestudentssupporttheidea Therearesomestudentssupportingtheidea Somestudentssupporttheidea 4 Therebe nodoubt nodenying noneed nosense nouse that 毫无疑问 不可否认 没有必要 没有意义 没有用 Thereisnosenseinwaitingherewithoutknowingwhenhewillcomeback 在这里傻等却不知道他什么时候回来 一点意义都没有 5 Therebe的非谓语形式therebeing 动词 ing形式 theretobe 不定式形式 Therebeingnobus wehadtowalkhome 由于没有公交车 我们不得不步行回家 Thereisnodenyingthatthequalityofourenvironmenthasgonefrombadto worse WeexpecttheretobeapartytocelebratethecomingNewYear 四 如何使用其他的一些高级表达形式让文章更精彩1 用such总结全文Suchisourlivelycity whichyouarewelcometovisitwheneveratyourconvenience 这就是我们这座充满活力的城市 只要您方便 随时欢迎来参观 2 使用cannot toomuch表示强调Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过 3 使用比喻等修辞方法Asisknowntousall vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage justlikebricksinabuilding 大家都知道 词汇是语言学习的重要组成部分 就像一座大楼的基石 4 使用not but 句型Somepeopledon tliketheirjobsnotbecausethey relazybutbecausetheirjobsaresmall 一些人不喜欢他们的工作不是因为他们懒 而是因为他们的工作太渺小了 5 使用否定句Thelawisthelaw Nobodyhasanyexcusetobreakit 法律就是法律 任何人没有任何借口违反法律 6 使用双重否定Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle itisnotwithoutitsproblem 尽管自行车有许多明显的优点 它仍然存在一些问题 Nowordcanexpressmywhole heartedthanksforyourtimelyhelp ItisnotahardshipbutapleasuretolearnEnglishwell Wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmenttoomuch Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullybuildaneconomizedsociety Hardlyhadhereachedthestationwhenthetrainleft NotonlycanIkeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilythroughmycell butalsoalmostallinformationcanbegatheredontheInternet 4 Ididn ttakehisadvice soIfailedintheexam 虚拟语气 5 BecauseIwasillthatday Ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虚拟语气 6 Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被动语态 7 Theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒装句 强调句 IfIhadtakenhisadvice Iwouldn thavefailedintheexam Iwasillthatday otherwiseIwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizeth