高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验22.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验221高中生活是人一生中最美好的时光，除了学业之外，我们还经历，感悟了许多。为了在毕业前不留下遗憾，我们搞好备考复习的同时，是不是还该做点什么？请根据提示的要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。1.向老师表示感谢 2.跟对你有误解的同学谈一谈 3.征求同学的宝贵意见 4.再为班级做件有意义的事情注意：1.可适当加入细节，使行文连贯 2.短文的单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数） high school is regarded as the best time of my life. besides classes and homework, theres some thing that i especially treasure. in order to leave school with no regrets _2某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，结果如下。请根据表格1所给信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法.。 注意：1 词数120左右 2 文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。表格一 (网购最吸引用户的方面)40% 商品种类丰富33% 商品价格实惠25% 不受时间地域限制5% 结交新朋友表格二 （网购用户最担心的方面）55% 质量问题27% 售后服务18% 交易安全recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the internet. _4假设你是李华，你刚参加了某培训学校组织的“英语夏令营”活动，请根据以下内容， 写一封投诉信。【写作内容】原来期望提高英语成绩存在问题1一个班60多人，练习机会少2内容简单，话题陈旧，枯燥乏味3无午餐供应，到最近的饭店吃饭要步行30分钟 4仅组织了一次羽毛球比赛，与广告宣传不符描述你参加该活动后的心情和提出你的赔偿要求【写作要求】请用5个句子表达全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总句数）。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。dear sir/madam,i have just returned from the english summer camp at your school of language, and im writing to express my unhappiness with your program._yours,li hua5 近来，中学聘请(employ)外教之风盛行(trend)，对此大家褒贬不一。请你根据下表内容及自己的观点写一篇短文。好处（advantages）弊端（disadvantages）你的观点(my opinion1.to make the school famous；2.to improve ones spoken english；3.to know more about foreign culture1.to be expensive；2.not to get used to ones way of life3.to know little about the way chinese students learn languages.。several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in china, many people would gather round and stare at him or her for a while. nowadays, however, its common to see foreifgers here._参考答案1【解析】写作指导：1.本文以第一人称为主，时态以现在时和将来时为主，主要讲自己的计划2.写作过程中注意上下文的连接、非谓语动词，定语从句，宾语从句，形式主语，连词,对过去事情的推测,动名词作主语和高级结构的运用句型搜索：1. be regarded as.2. there be .3 .in order to .4. make the best of time to do.5. id like to do.6. it is necessary for me to do.7. care about.8. ask sb.for some advice.9. be of +n.10at the same time 11. in addition.12. last but not least2recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the internet. the results are as follows. chart 1 shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. of all the people surveyed, 49%think that there are many varieties of products in online shops. about one third of them say that reasonable price is the most appealing factor. and 25% hold that online shopping is so convinient that consumers can buy what they want anywhere at any time. interestingly, 5%of teh people even mention that they can make new friends through online shopping. however, many consumers also express their concerns about online shopping. among all the concerns in chart 2, the quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention. personally, i agree that what consumers get from online shops sometimes differs from what can be seen in the picture, which can be very disappointing. therefore, we should make sure teh product is of good quality before making a purchase.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，结果如下。请根据表格1所给信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。首先要看懂图表所有表达的意思，需要写的内容已经以表格形式粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。【亮点说明】of all the people surveyed, 49%think that there are many varieties of products in online shops.这里含有一个宾语从句；about one third of them say that reasonable price is the most appealing factor.这里含有一个宾语从句。考点：话题类书面表达3my dream is to become a teacher,and it will be not an easy thing to do. why doi want to be a teacher? first, being a teacher has been one of my dreams since my childhood. when i was a small boy,i saw our village education condition was limited because our village was so poor. it was often dropping from the roof when we had lessons.therefore.when i studied in the primary school, my dream had turned to plant in my heart.at that time, i swealed i would change my life because this dream has been hiding in my inner heart.so i do my efforts to make my dream come true.despite of a lot of difficulty and hardship, i believe my dream will be realized.【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文。这篇开放性作文给出了一个故事，有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】范文中使用了一些词组：do my efforts to努力做，come true.成为现实，turned to 变成，和一些语法知识：my dream is to become a teacher,and it will be not an easy thing to do.这句话用了不定式做表语和定语， being a teacher has been one of my dreams since my childhood. 这句话用了动名词做主语， despite of a lot of difficulty and hardship, i believe my dream will be realized.这句话用despite表示转折，还有文章还使用了 first,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。考点：考查开放式作文4a possible version:dear sir/madam,i have just returned from the english summer camp at your school of language, and im writing to express my unhappiness with your program.i took part in the program in order to improve my english but to my disappointment, there were too many students in a class, in which case students were not able to practise a lot. moreover, the course was simple and the topics were not fresh enough so that students interest in english could not be aroused. worse still, no lunch was provided and therefore i had to go to the nearest restaurant, which was 30 minutes away. it was once said in your ad that students could be provided with many chances to enjoy social practice but badminton was the only activity organized. you can imagine how upset i am to have wasted my time and money and please give half of my money back, or i shall be forced to take the matter further.yours,li huawww.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：i took part in the program in order to improve my english but to my disappointment, there were too many students in a class, in which case students were not able to practise a lot.就包含了几个要点内容。考点：提纲作文。点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。【答案】several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in china, many people would gather round and stare at him or her for a while. nowa