高考英语 英语漫画作文（议论类）.ppt

高考英语书面表达写作指导 之 漫画作文 议论类 之 英语漫画作文 议论类 攻略 谋篇 3parts 1 describethepicture2 interpretitsmeaning3 giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon part1describethepicture thepictureistalkingabout shows thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon inthepicture thereare is are doing thepictureaboveisabout let slookatthepictureabove first myversion formostoftheparents it snoeasyjobtokeeptheirchildrenawayfromthepcmonitor let slookatthepictureabove twopeoplearestandinginfrontofacomputer whosemonitoriswearingunderwear thewomanisstaringatthecomputer thinkingwhilethemanistellinghimthattherearethreewaystomaketheinternetsaferforherchildren hardware softwareandunderwear let spractise describethepicture thepictureistalkingaboutastoryaboutneighborhood twoladieslivingintheoppositeapartmentssay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachotherinthecorridor oneofthemsays imovedhere5yearsago butinevermetyoubefore couldiaskyournameplease theothersays ihavebeenherefor6years howshouldicallyou let spractise describethepicture wecanseeinthepicturethatachildisburdenedwithheavyschoolbagsaswellashugementalpressure whenhewasakid hewasexpectedtobeabletogotoakeyelementaryschool andlaterakeyhighschool andnowheisexpectedtobeadmittedtoakeyuniversity part2interpretthepicture itseemsveryridiculousthat however thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere thepictureshowsthat itistheexactreflectionof thepictureindicatethatwe nowadays itisacommonphenomenonthat thisisasatirical 讽刺的 cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong let spractise let spractise thepictureshowssomeproblemsinthepresenteducationsysteminchina inthepoorcountryside therearenobuildingsforclassrooms letalonegoodteachers theyaresometimesforcedtoleavetheirstudiesbecausetheirfamiliescannotaffordthenecessaryfees however thesituationistotallydifferentinthecities almostallthechildreninthecitiescanhaveregulareducation buttheyhavetheirownproblems whattheyfaceistheendlesshomework whichputssomuchpressureonthemthatsomestudentsdon twanttocontinuetheirstudies itmayberidiculoustocoverthepcmonitorwithsomeone sunderwear butitdescribesvividlyparents distressandfeelingsofhelplessnesswhentheyarefacedwiththeproblem concernedabouttheirchildren ssecurity someofthemjustcutofftheaccesstotheinternetathome thehardwaresolution somechoosetouseacertainsoftwareprogramtopreventtheirkidsfromgettingonline thesoftwaresolution othersmaymakesomerulestolimitthetimetheirchildrenspendontheinternet theunderwearsolution part3giveyouropinions ithink believethatasfarasi mconcerned inmyopinion frommypointofview shoulditisbetter advisableto iconsideritnecessary onlyinthiswaycan 2 3 musthavetodo don t frommypointofview thisphenomenoncallsfortheattentionofthewholesociety ononehand thegovernmentshouldmakelawstocensortheinternetandblockinappropriatesites makingitasaferplaceforallteenagers ontheotherhand itisbetterforparentstogivetheirchildrenaproperguideinsteadofjustprevention teenagersneedtobetaughthowtotellandresistbadinformationconsciously onlyinthiswaycantheinternetbemadesaferforthechildren enjoythisexcellentending inmyview thisphenomenonisnogoodtous nortooursociety it stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit peoplelivinginthesamezonecanbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether weshouldcallonpeopletobefriendlytoeachother asapopularsongsays ifeverybodygivesalittlelovetoeachother theworldwillbecometheseaoflove enjoythisexcellentending frommypointofview reducingthechildren sheavyburdenrequireseffortsfromtheschools thesocietyaswellastheparents educationthatbreakstherulesofchildren sdevelopmentinbodyandmindisboundtofail thus parentstogetherwithteachersshouldbecomeactivesupportersofall aroundcharactereducationandworkcloselywitheachotheringuidingthestudentstowardsabalanceddevelopment inmyopinion spare timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents theymightdobetterwhentheyshowinterestinwhattheyarelearning pleasedon tforcethesestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingto andwhenlearningisfun surelytheywilldobetterthanweexpect enjoythisexcellentending 1 touselinkingwords 表示平行 对等或选择关系and aswellas togetherwith notonly butalso 表示转折关系but however inspiteof although otherwise while表示对比关系onthecontrary insteadof ononehand ontheotherhand 表示因果关系so therefore asaresult of because owingto dueto thanksto 表示时间 顺序关系first second then next finally foronething foranother intheend 表示递进 强调关系besides what smore inaddition worsestill aboveall表示解释 说明关系suchas forexample forinstance 例如 inotherwords andsoon表示结论inshort inbrief inaword ingeneral onthewhole inconclusion 1 touselinkingwords 五 三 2 tousecomplicatedstructures peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutoftheroom tohissurprise thelittlegirlknewsomanythings whatsurprisedhimwasthatthelittlegirlknewsomanythings 被动语态 非谓语动词 从句 thecouplewassocuriousaboutwildplantsthattheydecidedtotraveltotheforest 倒装 socuriouswasthecoupleaboutwildplantsthattheyd