北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲 第15讲 短文改错（新题）赏析2(1).doc

第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析开篇语新题赏析全国新课标题一：第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i learned early in life that i had to be more patient and little aggressive. from the time i was about four until i was about six, i destroyed each of my toy. i was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, i got angry and broke it. for a while parents bought me new toys. but before long they began to see which was happening. when i tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, thats it. no more toys to you. my punishment lasted a year. meanwhile, i found out that with more patience i must make my toys to last. my attitude changed from then on.全国i卷题一：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)(注意:在试题卷上作答无效)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。every one of us can make a great efforts to 76. _cut off the use of energy in our country. to begin with, all 77. _of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only 78. _when we have a real need. that wont be easy, i know， 79. _but we have to start anywhere. whats more, we can go to 80. _work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy 81. _smaller cars that burn less oil. other way is to watch our 82. _everyday use of water and electric at home. for example, 83. _how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the 84. _lights or television when no one else was there? 85. _ 全国ii卷题一：短文改错 (每小题1. 5分，共15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。先对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1. 原行没有错的不要改；2. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。dear editor,im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 76. _water is important. we, as well as animal, cannot live 77. _without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 78. _without it. yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 79. _many countries in the world find we dont have enough water 80. _to deal with a problem, i think, we should first go all 81. _out to plant trees though trees will help save water. next, no 82. _drinking water should be left running. third, we should find 83. _ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84. _water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 85. _ sincerely, li hua第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析新题赏析全国新课标题一：1. little-less2. toytoys3. didwent或者did 后加go4. itthem5. 在parents前加my parents bought me new toys.此处my和me对应。6. which-what7. tear-tore8. to-for9. mustcould/might10.去掉last前的to全国i卷题一：76. efforts effort 77. off down 78. to 79. 80. anywhere anyhow81. and or82. other another 83. electric electricity84. leave left 85. when on when