高考英语备考精品解析分类汇编 第十期 E单元 短文改错.doc

e单元短文改错目录e单元短文改错1e1 短文改错记叙文1e2 短文改错应用文7e3 短文改错议论文10e4 短文改错说明文13 e1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省德阳市高三“二诊”考试（201503）word版】第二节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题15分，满分15分） 请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 3请在答题卡上指定的地方作答。 it was 7:1 5 in the morning of february 8, 2015 i was walking along park road towards the east while an elderly man came out of the park on other side of the street then i saw a yellow car drive up beijing street and made a right turn into park road the :next moment the car hit the man while he was cross the road he fell off with a cry the car didnt stop and drove off with great speed heading west i noticed that the driver is a young woman and that the plate number was ac864 about two minutes late i stopped a passing car and took the old men to the nearest hospital【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1.inon 具体的某一天的早晨，用介词on。2.whilewhen when后面的从句中可以使用延续性动词也可以使用短暂性动词。while后面的从句只能使用延续性动词。这里的come out of是一个短暂性动词，故使用when。3. 在put on后加the 在马路的另一边 on the other side of the street4.mademake这里的make a right turn与前面的drive up是并列关系。5. crosscrossing 当他正在过马路时，用过去正在进行时。6. 删除off 或者将off改为down fall off强调的是“跌落、从掉下来”，后直接接宾语，本句未出现介词的宾语，故删除介词off。fall down强调的是“滑倒、倒下”， if people run across the road，they may fall down. fall down后接宾语时应加上介词from。the girl is falling down from the bike.7. andbut 前后句意相反，用but。车没有停下来，而是以最快的速度向西驶去。8.iswas 描述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。9. latelater two minutes later两分钟后10.menman 上文提到the man while he，是一个人，故用man。【英语卷(解析)2015届高陕西省西安地区八校高三下学期联考（三）（201504）word版】第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题15介，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（a），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。east summer i learnt to ride a bicycle at first,1 was unable to control its directions sometimes i fall to the right or to the lefti was worrying to ask my father impatiently how i could ride straight, so he didnt answer me directly instead, he took me to side of the street can you find any bike track what is really straight? asked my father1 watched more carefully and shook my head“no, he said, in fact, neither of the tracks is always straight but just by correct the direction every now and then, i have already gone forward”【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。 【答案解析】1. directions改成direction 根据前文的a bicycle，此处应用单数形式，故directions改成direction。2. fall 改成fell 根据语境应用一般过去时，故fall改为fell。3. worrying改成worried 因为i做主语，应是感到焦虑的，故worrying改为worried。4. so 改成but so前后的分句是并列关系，故so改为but。5. side前加the the side of the street街道边上，side应该特指。故side前加the。6. that改成what 此处是宾语从句，从句中不缺少成分，故将that改为what。7. more carefully的more去掉 根据上下文无比较含义，故去掉more。8.neither改成none 根据前文的any bike track判断，neither指“两者都不”，none指“三者以上的都不”。故neither 改成none。9. correct改成correcting by为介词，后跟动词的ing形式作宾语，故correct改成correcting。10. i改成you 根据前文，他是对我说，又是直接引语，故将i改成you。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省郑州市高三第二次质量预测（201503）word版】第一节短文改错（共to小题；每小题1分，满分to分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（n），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear mandy， pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. my dad says i must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. he thinks im lazy，but its not true. i work really hard，often study late into the night！ive tried to talk to my mother，but she always said i have to workas hard like my brother does. my brother doesnt study very hard，and he always gets excellentgrades. its not fair！ the only thing i like it is art. my teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. wheni told my dad，all he said was，“you mustnt waste your time in art. you must focus your mindon your lessons！”pm feeling quite puzzling what to do nowwould you please help me out?thanks a lot！ yours sincerely， lisa【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：especial改为especially，此处是状语应当用副词；第二行：me后加to，want sb to do sth，不定式作宾补；第三行：study改为studying，根据句子结构，此处是状语，故用非谓语动词，又因为是伴随状语，故用现在分词，表示和句子主语是主动关系。said改为says，根据语境用一般现在时态。第四行：like改为as，asas 是固定搭配；and改为but，与上文形成转折关系。第六行：去掉it，i like 是定语从句，不能再加it,省略了引导词that在此代替the only thing 做like的宾语。year改为years，根据句意应当是复数，表示多年。第七行：in改为on/over，在浪费，wasteon/over 。第八行：puzzling改为puzzled，感到困惑的用puzzled；令人困惑的用puzzling；【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省佳木斯一中等重点中学高三第一次模拟考试（201504） (1)】第一节 短文改错 （共10小题； 每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。dear american guests,on behalf for our school, i would like to express our warmly welcome to you. we are lucky to have us here in the middle of our english week activities.as scheduled, we had english talent show today. the purpose of this programme is develop our interest in english learning and practical abilities in listening and spoken. the programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story told and so on. the show will begin at two oclock this afternoon at the student center. dear guests, you are welcome to take a part in our activities. i hope we students will benefit great from your presence.i sincerely hope you a pleasant time with us. thank you.【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. for-of ，on behalf of “代表”是固定搭配 ； 2. warmly-warm，welcome这儿是名词，应当用warm作定语； 3. us-you ，逻辑错误；这儿应当用you代指american guests4. hadhave ，today表示“现在”的时间状语，故应用一般现在时态；5. is后加to ，不定式作表语；不可以用动词原形直接作表语；6. spoken-speaking ，介词后应当用动名词作宾语，speaking与listening并列；7. told-telling ，最简单的办法是，看看前面的word spelling；8. 去掉a ，take part in 参加是固定短语，当part前有定语修饰时，定语前加不定冠词；9. greatgreatly ，greatly做状语，修饰benefit； 10. hopewish，hope不能接双宾语，用wish；【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省康杰中学等四校高三第三次联考（201503）】第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题i分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our english corner. this corner was set up three years before. every sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. gather around here, we practise spoken english by talking about everything we are interested. we also exchange my experience in english study. we all have a good time here. thousand of people have been here when it was set up.we think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. it is a really supplement to our english class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. they all think it is of helpful. if you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here. 【答案】【知识点】e1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. before-ago 三年前three years ago2. took-take every sunday提示我们要用一般现在时。3. gathering 考察非谓语动词，主句的主语we是gather的逻辑主语，且是主谓关系，故用现在分词。4. interest后加in be interested in， in 不能省略。5. my-our 人称保持一致，主语是we，故用our。6. when-since 自从建立起，数千人就来到这。since后的从句用一般过去时，主句用现在完成时。7. activities 要用可数名词activity的复数形式。8. really-real a+adj.+名词9. of去掉 或者helpful-help 用主系表结构，去掉of; 或者be of help有帮助。10. much-more 如果你想了解更多关于英语角的信息，你可以来这和学生们交谈。e2 短文改错应用文【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水中学高三下学期三调（一模）考试（201504）word版】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear mr. green, im very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together. that sounds great and i definitely agree you on that. some of the columns that you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea. cultural express give us a better understanding of the world. since people from different part of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each another. apart from that,。blurt out is pretty good for chinese students to learn english idioms and improving oral english. “entertainment is also cool! the popular singers, actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely cant miss this part. teenagers are to fond of popular things, too. well, i cant list more. i really cant wait to read this magazine. yoursli ming【答案】【知识点】e2 短文改错应用文【文章综述】本文是李华给格林先生的回信，说明自己对创办报纸的意见 【答案解析】1.exciting-excited 考查形容词。句意：我很幸福听说我们要一起创办一份报纸。修饰人一般用excited2.agree-agree with 考查固定短语。句意：就这一点我完全赞同你的观点。agree是不及物动词，后面加with3.mention-mentioned 考查动词的时态。句意：你在信中提到的专栏很适合我。此事已经发生， 故用一般过去时；4.give-gives 考查动词的时态。cultural express做主语谓语动词用第三人称单数，故give-gives。5.part-parts 考查名词的复数。句意：因为人们来自世界不同的地区有不同的价值观。6.another-other 考查代词。each other彼此，固定短语。7.improving-improve 考查非谓语动词。improve 与learn 是并列的，故形式与learn 保持一致；8.or-and 考查连词。流行歌手，演员和名人是并列关系：or 改成and9.attractively-attractive 考查形容词。修饰人，用形容词attractively改成 attractive10.to去掉 考查固定短语。be fond of 喜欢；【英语卷（解析）2015届江西省八所重点中学高三联考（201504）word版】第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题；每小题 l 分满分 10 分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在该词下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。it is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. as to this, we hold a heated discussion. there are two different viewpoints about them. some think it necessarily. firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. however, the others think it otherwise. for one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. for another, students can use cellphones for study.personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more pthan destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.【答案】【知识点】e2 短文改错应用文 【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。【答案解析】it is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the wereexamination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. as to this, we hold a heated discussion. there are two different heldviewpoints about them. itsome think it necessarily. firstly, with cellphones, students would have necessary withoutfocused their attentions on studying instead of wasting their precious their attentionprecious time reading junk message. secondly, the examination will be fair if no messagesone cheats using cellphones. however, the others think it otherwise. for one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. for inanother, students can use cellphones for study.personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, speakingwe should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way. rather1.taken前加were cellphones是take的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故taken前加were。2.holdhelp 根据语境应用过去时，故hold改为held。3.themit 此处代词是代替前文的discussion。故them改为it。4.necessarilynecessary think 后跟形容词做宾补，故necessarily应该为necessary。5.withwithout 根据句意，应是“没有手机，学生将能集中注意力上课”。故with改为without。6.attentionsattention attention是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，故改为attention。7.messagemessages message是可数名词，前没有限定词，应用复数形式，故message改为messages。8.the others前的the去掉 与前文的some对应，用others，故去掉the。9.atin in the age of information在信息时代，故应将at改为in。10.spokenspeaking generally speaking一般来讲。故spoken改为speaking。e3 短文改错议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校高三第五次模拟考试（201503）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。english is now international language. it is used in many aspects. when we do businesses with foreigners, we often speak english. when we want to learn anything about other countries, we read books in english for more and more books are printing in it. but how could we learn from english well? most important of all, i think, is that we should be interested in it, but we should go all out to listen, speak, read and write. beside, we should practice using it whenever possibly. in class you should answer questions actively. after class we should talk with our classmates.【答案】【知识点】e3 短文改错议论文【答案解析】english is now international language. it is used in many aspects. when we do businesses with an businessforeigners, we often speak english. when we want to learn anything about other countries, we read somethingbooks in english for more and more books are printing in it. but how could we learn from english well? most printed canimportant of all, i think, is that we should be interested in it, but we should go all out to listen, speak, read and andwrite. however, we should practice using it whenever possibly. in class you should answer questions furthermore/besides/moreover possible weactively. after class we should talk with our classmates.1. 在international language前加上an language（某国）语言；语言文字是可数名词。2. businesses- business business是不可数名词，无复数形式。3. anything -something 肯定句用something。4. printing-printed books和print构成被动语态。5. could-can 本篇文章用一般现在时。6. 删除from learn from 向学习，而这里指的是学习英语。7. most important 前加the 形容词最高级前加the。8.however - furthermore/besides/moreover 根据句意，这里