北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲 第19讲 书面表达一（新题）赏析2(1).doc

第19讲 书面表达一2012新题赏析开篇语新题赏析北京卷题一：情景作文（20分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1. 日记的开头已为你写好。2. 词数不少于60。saturday，june2 fine_题二：开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 you are discussing the following picture with your english friend jim. now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so._全国卷ii题一：书面表达 (30分)假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教susan参加，要点包括：1. 时间：周五晚8点至9点2. 地点：学生俱乐部3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4. 要求：备小礼物注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。hi, susan,were throwing a surprise party for xiaomings birthday. _全国卷i和新课标卷题一：书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，从互联网（the internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力）；2. 参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3. 希望获准。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。dear sir or madam,_ regards, li hua广东卷题一：基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分） 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓 名：allan stewart国 籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。硕士学位：masters degree;博士：doctor写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。_题二：读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。my husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. she was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.in the letter she wrote, “you were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. before you came to teach us, i had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that i would be interested in it. to my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. i guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. gradually my interest in it began to grow. thanks to your encouragement, i made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. today i am working as an accountant at valley medical center in california. you played an important part. thank you!” what a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! my husband has received many letters from students over the years. this one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；（2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。 写作要求1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。_第19讲 书面表达一2012新题赏析北京卷题一：saturday, june 2 fine this morning, when i was walking on the street, i saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. it seemed they were lost. i went up to them and asked how i could help. they told me they were looking for the temple of heaven. i led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take bus no. 20, which could take them there directly. they appreciated my help greatly. before long, the bus came. we waved good-bye to each other. seeing them on the bus. i felt a kind of satisfaction. 题二：one possible version i think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying “youre nearing the end!” the black pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. the white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts. he clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. its true that hes approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment. in reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done. 全国卷ii题一：hi, susan,were throwing a surprise party for xiaomings birthday. wed like to invite you to the party. we want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. well gather at the students club at 8 p.m. this friday, after the evening classes. and its going to last about an hour. we each will prepare a little present. when he comes, well light the candles and sing “happy birthday” together for him. then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. itll be nice to see how excited he will be. im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.全国卷i和新课标卷dear sir or madam,im li hua, a middle school student from china. i read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the internet and i am interested in it. i know that you welcome students from different countries and id like to take part in it. ive been learning english for 10 years, and i speak fluent english. what is more, ill be able to tell students from other countries about china and learn about their countries as well. i hope i will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. looking forward to your reply!regards, li hua解析：随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望：希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。考点定位：考查提纲类写作。广东卷possible version 1allan stewart, of australian nationality, was born on march 7th, 1915. he got his first degree in 1936, and then his second degree of doctor of medicine. he believes that one is never too old to challenge himself. therefore, in his eighties, he decided to study law, and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a masters degree. because he was good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher, and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning. possible version 2born on march 7th, 1915, allan stewart, of australian nationality, became the oldest man to obtain a masters degree over the world in 2006. he believes that one is never too old to challenge himself. he got his first degree in 1936 and then his doctors degree in medicine. in his eighties, he decided to study law, after which he obtained his th