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f单元书面表达目录f单元书面表达1f1书面表达记叙文1f2 书面表达议论文9f3 书面表达说明文12f4 书面表达应用文12f5书面表达夹叙夹议文22f1书面表达记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水中学高三下学期三调（一模）考试（201504）word版】第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是红星中学高-(1)班的学生李华，你的英国笔友chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信。 1多跟同学交流沟通； 2积极参加学校活动； 3向老师寻求帮助。 注意：1.词数：100左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。dear chris,yours ,li hua【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】dear tony, i am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. such problems are quite normal. perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful. first, i think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. in this way, you will get to know each other better. second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions. i sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. if there is anything more i can do to help, please let me know. yours, li hua【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语have trouble doing 做某事有困难；communicate with与。进行交流；get to know逐渐了解；take part in参加；in this way, you will get to know each other better. second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships.在这个句子which 引导非限制性定语从句；lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.这个句子运用非谓语动词faced with .,还运用who引导定语从句。【英语卷（解析）2015届福建省高三毕业班质量检查（201504）word版】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）习近平主席最近在一次讲话中提到年轻人不要熬夜。某英语报以dont stay up late 为题向中学生征文。请你根据以下内容要求用英语写一篇短文应征。内容包括：1. 熬夜的情况；2. 熬夜的负面影响；3. 你的看法。注意：1根据提示内容可适当展开，使行文连贯；2短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；3文中不能出现考生的具体信息；4词数：120左右。*dont stay up lateour school has regular rest hours for students. _ 【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】dont stay up lateour school has regular rest hours for students. however, we can often see many students do their lessons or other things after the bed time. they usually stay up until midnight. teenagers need enough sleep daily. staying up late may do harm to health. it can also make students late for class or sleepy in class. thus, they miss something they should have learned. it is blameless to stay up once in a while if we do have to take up our rest time for some urgent deeds, but dont make it a habit. president xi recently advised young people not to stay up late, which we should bear in mind. early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. we really need to make a change to the unhealthy lifestyle so as to ensure our rest time.【技巧点拨】1. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；2. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；3. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；4. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省郑州市高三第二次质量预测（201503）word版】第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，下面四幅图画描绘了发生在你上学路上的一件事情，请根据图画内容用【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】i was walking to school this morning when i caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground. i quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what was wrong with her. she told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble. i was worried and decided to take her to a hospital. and then i went to a department store near the hospital and contacted her family. soon her son and daughter came to the hospital. they thanked and praised me for my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter. although i was late for school today, i felt very proud of what i had done.【技巧点拨】5. 本文是一篇图画作文，所以一定要特别主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；本文以为主为主。因为谈的是已经发生的情况。6. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；本文中出现的亮点句型如下：i was walking to school this morning when i caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground. although i was late for school today, i felt very proud of what i had done.7. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省佳木斯一中等重点中学高三第一次模拟考试（201504） (1)】第二节 书面表达（满分25分）life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“learn to smile”为题,写一篇100词左右的文章，要点包括：1. 学会对自己微笑； 2. 学会对别人微笑； 3. 微笑的重要性。注意：短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】learn to smilei remember a song by westlife, the first sentence of it is “just a smile and the rain is gone.”do you like smiling? i think you should learn to smile.first, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. if you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, dont be sad. just smile at yourself. smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. and smile can also keep you healthy. second, learn to smile at others. it will make you communicate better with people. smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.in a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. it passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. living with a smile, every day will be shiny.【技巧点拨】8. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；本文以现在时态为主。因为谈的是现在的情况。9. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；本文中出现的亮点句型如下：sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. 定语从句in a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. 非谓语动词10. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；如本文第二段的结构是first；second。这样文章的调理就比较清晰。11. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校高三第五次模拟考试（201503）】第二节：书面表达（满分25分）新学期开学，你校英语报为高三学生开设专栏，讨论高中生的学习问题。假定你是高三学生李华，请你结合自身实际，根据以下提示，用英语为该专栏写一篇稿件。1. 过去的三年中，你在学习上遇到了不少的困难；2. 列举其中的一次困难并阐述你是如何克服的；3. 从此次困难中，你认识到了什么； 4. 谈谈你对解决高中生学习上遇到的困难的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得透露学校名称和个人真实姓名。when we get into high school, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study. _【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】when we get into high school, we are bound to meet with difficulties in our study. a difficulty i encountered was that i had strong chinese accent while communicating with others in english, making everyone laugh at me. faced with the difficulty, i bought lots of cds of native speakers public speaking and tried to imitate every day. besides, i often turned to the teacher for help, who always helped correct my pronunciation. as a result, i made great progress. we do meet some difficulties in our study, but each man is the architect of his own fate and success always grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties, due to which we become tougher. to cope with our difficulties in study, we are supposed to find out the reasons first and then take effective measures. whats more, consulting our teachers can contribute a lot to solving the problems. only in this way can we perform well and gain success.【思路点拨】范文要点齐全、表达准确，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。如：第一段第二句使用了一个省略that的定语从句和表语从句a difficulty i encountered was that i had strong chinese accent while communicating with others in english, making everyone laugh at me.；第二段使用了who引导的非限定性定语从句；第三段的overcome difficulties, due to which we become tougher同时，使用了一些非谓语动词和短语，如第一段的while communicating with others in english, making everyone laugh at me.；第二段的faced with the difficulty, i; are bound to（注定要），laugh at, communicate with, turn to sb. for help等等，这为文章增色不少。特别是最后一段使用first, then, whats more, 来谈论自己的建议，条理清晰。【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省康杰中学等四校高三第三次联考（201503）】第一节 完形填空（共20小题；每小题2分，满分40分）阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项(a、b、c和d)中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。 as a child, i started learning to play the piano, my favorite musical 41 ,but i was forced to give up when i started my middle school 42 i could concentrate more on my studies. its one of my biggest 43 to stop practicing the piano when i recall sadly today. during the following years, i kept telling my piano teacher that i would 44 . however, i didnt keep my promise because i was 45 with my study. 46 i lost touch with my teacher. some years later, my teacher died. i was very sad because i lost such a good teacher. she was a very warm and gentle person. it hurts me to think she may have been 47 that i never returned. i havent taken lessons since then but to be honest, i 48 to. sitting at the piano, i couldnt help recalling many 49 - times of my practising at home and playing before my teacher and one time my teacher 50 me after i played entire pieces of music wrong in front of her colleagues. i was so 51 that i could hardly say anything. but her 52 helped ease my shame. these memories, 53 , good or bad, never caused my 54 for playing the piano again. this thought then led me to think that 55 is like music, and that we all try to play different 56 in the instrument of our life. sometimes the pitch(音高) is 57 when we play it well, but sometimes we are out of tone. however, we all continue to create our own 58 style of music. no matter what style our music is, it is 59 that we sing the songs of joy, quietness and love. though i may never make it back to piano lessons, it doesnt 60 that ive stopped making music.41.a. instrumentb. performancec. roomd. stage42.a. becauseb. so thatc. now thatd. for43.a. successesb. regretsc. decisionsd. hobbies44.a. playb. graduatec. leaved. return45.a. occupiedb. angryc. satisfiedd. patient46.a. actuallyb. constantlyc. suddenlyd. gradually47.a. astonishedb. gladc. disappointedd. amazed48.a. likedb. neededc. wantedd. decided49.a. dreamsb. expressionsc. wordsd. memories50.a. instructedb. hurtc. punishedd. respected51.a. frightenedb. movedc. embarrassedd. excited52.a. happinessb. satisfactionc. comfortd. sigh53.a. insteadb. meanwhilec. therefored. however54.a. hopeb. couragec. feelingd. effort55.a. lifeb. learningc. attituded. enjoyment56.a. cardsb. sportsc. rolesd. games57.a. hardb. wonderfulc. surprisingd. complex58.a. uniqueb. boringc. commond. similar59a. necessaryb. strangec. possibled. important60a. matterb. meanc. reportd. appear【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【文章综述】文章主要讲述了作者上中学后忙于学习，放弃了自己最喜欢的钢琴。在回忆以前弹钢琴时，引发作者感慨，人生就像音乐，弹奏的是快乐、宁静和爱。【答案解析】41.a 根据句意：钢琴我最喜爱的乐器。42.b 前后句子为因果关系。我上中学后被迫放弃了弹钢琴，因为这样我可以更专注于我的学习。43.b 现在想起来，我最遗憾的事就是放弃弹钢琴。44.d 下文重复出现47 that i never returned。上中学后没有再弹钢琴，我不断告诉钢琴老师我会回来的。45.a be occupied with=be busy with 忙于46.d 慢慢地我和老师失去了联系。47.c 我伤心地想，我没有回去上钢琴课，老师一定很失望。48.c 老实说，我想去上钢琴课。49.d 下文重复出现these memories。50.a 在我弹完整首曲子后，老师当着同事的面指导我弹错的地方。51.c 由在同事前指导我弹错的地方可知，我是很尴尬的。也可根据下文的helped ease my shame，shame,羞愧。52.c 老师的安慰帮我减轻了羞愧感。53.d 这些回忆，无论是好的还是坏的。54.b 再次弹钢琴的勇气。55.a根据下文in the instrument of our life.，我们的生活就和音乐一样。56.c play cards 打牌；playt sports做运动； play roles扮演不同的角色； play games玩游戏；在我们的人生中，我们扮演着不同的角色。57.b 根据后半句when we play it well,，可知选b。58.a 然而，我们继续创造自己独一无二的音乐风格。59.d无论我们的音乐风格是什么,重要的是,我们歌唱欢乐、安静和爱。60.b 尽管我再也没有去上钢琴课，但是这并不意味着我已经停止了创造音乐。f2 书面表达议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆市巴蜀中学高三下学期第二次模拟考试（201504）】写作二（满分20分）假如你是高中三年级的学生李华，你在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如下图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。注意：1信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计人总词数 2词数为80左右。dear editor, i am a senior three student. recently we have carried out a survey-to whom do you go when in trouble? the results are as follows. yours sincerely, li hua【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】dear editor, i am a senior three student. recently we have carried out a survey-“to whom do you go when in trouble?” the results are as follows.61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. they suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. nevertheless, there are also 17% who dont share their troubles at all. they say that their troubles are none of others business. they find it hard to get along with others. it is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example. however, some general comments can be made. it seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives. yours sincerely, li hua【思路点拨】这是一篇给调查报告的作文，也是提纲类作文，主要内容已经给出，就是让我们有烦恼都向谁来诉说。给材料作文的写作首先要做到的就是不遗漏要点，如是反映要点内容。范文中提到一些很不错的短语have a better understanding of对。有更好的理解； play a more important role in在。起重要作用；61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other.在这个句子the reason of which引导定语从句；it is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example.这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式。 【英语卷（解析）2015届重庆市巴蜀中学高三下学期第二次模拟考试（201504）】写作一（满分15分）dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning and night, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial(引起争议的) because of the noise pollution it creates. guangzhou is the first city in china to have drafted a rule on the creation of silent zones in areas of parks that are close to schools, hospitals, offices and residential quarters.请就此内容写一篇短文并发表自己的看法。要求：(1) 就此材料发表你的感想；(2) 应紧扣材料、有明确观点；(3) 词数不少于60字(4) 在答题卡上作答。_【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial because of the noise pollution it creates.some citizens hold the view that the loud noise is unbearable, thus disturbing the normal life of the people living near the squares and they also hope that the groups can keep the volume down to create a quiet environment. however, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring. besides they have their own right to dance on the square as it is also one of the recreational activities like playing chess or playing cards.in my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social(make more new friends who share the same hobby with them, and build up their body as well). however, whatever their choice of entertainment, its important not to neglect the public order and affect other peoples lives. so its time for the government to draft regulations which include details such as the restrictions on the volume, the areas and musical equipment. only in this way can we see harmonious scene.【思路点拨】范文中运用一些常见的短语dozens of 很多；turn on 打开；because of 因为；in ones opinion 在某人看来；however, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring.这个句子中without which引导定语从句；in my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social这个句子用到固定句型there is no denying that 不可否认；only in this way can we see harmonious scene这个句子only+状语+部分倒装；f3 书面表达说明文f4 书面表达应用文【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省德阳市高三“二诊”考试（201503）word版】第二节 书面表达（满分35分） 假设你是李军，请你就学生打车时如何避免发生失联等安全问题给某英文报社编辑写一封信，提供一些建议，内容包括： 1上车前应该：选正规出租车；记住车牌号。2上车后应该：坐最安全位置；不玩手机，留意行车路线。注意：1词数120左右；2开头语和结尾语已为你写好；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：正规出租车：licensedtaxi 黑车：unlicensed taxi 车牌号：plate numberdear editor,i am sorry to learn that some students, especially girls, have been reported to have disconnected or been killed after taking a taxi yours ,li jun【答案】【知识点】f4 书面表达应用文【范文】【思路点拨】范文是一封信，且开头结尾已给出，并且列出写作要点。范文围绕要点展开，第二段恰当地使用连接过渡词firstly, then, thirdly, finally以使行文连贯、层次清晰。行文语言结构富于变化，错落有致，尤其是第一段最后一句的非谓语动词，第二段before引导的状语从句、whether引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句等为文章增色不少。总体来说范文要点齐全、条理清晰、突出重点。【英语卷（解析）2015届湖南省高三十三校联考第二次考试（201504）word版】 请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题，写一篇不少于120词的读后感。内容包括： 1简要概括这则寓言； 2谈谈你的理解或感受； 3以你或你身边的人或事加以论证。 【注意】 1不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，否则记“零”分。【答案】【知识点】f4 书面表达应用文【范文】 【思路点拨】本文是应用文。要求学生写出寓言读后感。故应用一般现在时和第一人称。该文章完全完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，条理清楚。所用语法和词汇满足了任务要求，应用得体。who引导定语从句；after与现在分词连用作状语；if引导条件状语从句；what引导宾语从句；who引导的