高三语文高分写作指导 成功在于闪光点课件.ppt

高分作文标志1 高考100词左右 四级120 150字 六级150 180字 2 是否长短句交叉 3 用词是否恰当 准确 形象 尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词 4 关键词是否换用 切勿老用重复词 写好一篇作文的注意事项 1 适当用被动代替主动 这样能更客观的反映事实 句子开头不要总是用we i 比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用attentionshouldbepaidto 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段 itis therefore hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat thus itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively 2 善于使用插入语 比如说把副词 连接词等 作插入语放在中间 一般放在主语 动词或者助动词后 两边分别加上逗号 如however therefore forexample ibelieve做插入语放在中间 一般放在动词 助动词后 两边分别加上逗号 比如说 otherindividuals however taketheattitudethat 3 一定要学会换词 换形象 具体的代替太宽泛的 考试中一般不要出现good bad many thing think people opinion等等 比如上面例子中 applicable代替proper approaches代替ways implement代替carryout sharpenone scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone scompetitiveness 提高某物竞争力 computerandibysimmyineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic thatnightiwassleepless feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome very exciting sb beinterestedinsth search alotof thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem inlargemeasure moreandmorepopular 与 一致with development floodinto swarminto 替换enterinto now sb beinterestedinsth moreandmorepeople thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed精彩句型 用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情 itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的 forastart wecan freely searchdesiredinformationatanymoment littlebylittle ourknowledgewillbewellenriched andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened additionally wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting playinggames ordeliveringemail forastart替换tobeginwith wecan freely search用了插入语的写作手法 ourknowledgewillbewellenriched andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened 用了非常精彩的被动 additionally替换inaddition besides deliver替换send thereisnodenyingthat however computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings inaway especiallythegrowingviolence pornpictures av filmsemergingonthescreen whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying 这个句子有三个精彩之处 首先thereisnodenyingthat这个句型 还有 however作为插入语 functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto emerging代替appearing fading代替disappearing netcitizen网民 属于精彩用词 asaclassicproverbgoes nogardenhasnoweeds computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople lives despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts weshould therefore takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet weshould therefore takeadvantageof 使用插入语fruits 而且fruits用的非常形象 merits virtues 替换advantage defects替换disadvantage everycoinhastwosides important good等 apartof bad effects influences aspect 各位同学 上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点 作文怎么会不得高分呢 1 individuals characters folks代 people persons 2 positive favorable rosy 美好的 promising 有希望的 perfect pleasurable excellent outstanding代替good 3 dreadful unfavorable poor adverse 有害的 代替bad如果bad做表语 可以有belessimpressive代替eg anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames enjoyingromancewithgirls boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms whenitapproachestograduation asaresult theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive 4 anarmyof anoceanof aseaof amultitudeof many ifnotmost 代替many 注 用many ifnotmost一定要小心 many后一定要有词 eg manyindividuals ifnotmost harbortheideathat 同理用most ifnotall 代替most 5 asliceof quietafew several代替some6 harbortheideathat taketheattitudethat holdtheviewthat itiswidelysharedthat itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 替think 因为是书面语 所以要加that asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou askwhatyoucandoforyourcountry 7 affair business matter代替thing 8 shared代common 9 reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit 10 formypart frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion 11 increasing ly growing代替moreandmore 注意没有growingly这种形式 所以当修饰名词时用increasing growing 修饰形容词 副词用increasingly eg sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth 12 littleifanything 或littleornothing代替hardly 13 beneficialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof 14 shopper client consumer purchaser 代替customer 15 exceedingly extremely代替very 16 hardlyunnecessary hardlyinevitable 代替necessary evitable 17 sthappealstosb sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin 18 captureone sattention代替attractone sattention 19 facet demension sphere代aspect 20 beindicativeof besuggestiveof befearfulof代indicate suggest fear 21 giveriseto leadto resultin trigger代替cause 22 thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替 reasonsforsth 23 desire代替want 24 pourattentionto代替payattentionto 25 beari