09高三英语作文训练之五：作文现象解释型模板.ppt

写作指导 现象解释 directions forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic thedaymyclassmatefellill orgotinjured youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinchinese 1 简单叙述一下这位同学生病 或受伤 的情况2 同学 老师和我是如何帮助他 她的3 人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是 topic itsohappenedthat justatthemoment itimpressedmemostbecause whathappenednextwas atfirst almostatthesametime what smore onedaywewere havinganenglishclassinthelanguagelab myclassmatelucynextto mefellunconscioussuddenly herfacewassoredthatitseemedto beburning movingandunforgettable myteacherphonedadoctor agirlstudentwetted herhandkerchiefandputitonlucy shead somestudentsmadeatemporarybed asaresult asiunderstand ontheonehand ontheotherhand therefore forlucybyputtingsomedeskstogether lucysooncametoherself lovemakesabeautifulworld lucyisalwaysreadytohelpothers wewilltryourbesttohelp herwhensheisinneed weshouldloveeachotherandmakethisworldabetterplace 指出事件发生在语音室 引出要叙述的内容 同学lucy突然生病 用red burning形象描述lucy当时的情况 概况事件给我的印象之深 为后文的具体描写作铺垫 老师采取的措施 一位女同学的行动 另外一些同学具体帮助lucy的行动 大家对lucy帮助的结果是使她lucy苏醒 注意cometo的正确使用 我对这件事情的看法 人与人之间的相互关爱使世界更美好 站在lucy的角度上谈自己的感受一 换一个角度谈自己的感受 结论 重申自己的感受 2 现象解释型题二directions forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye witnessaccountofatrafficaccident youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinchinese 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸 就此写一份见证书 见证书须包括以下几点 1 车祸发生的时间及地点2 你所见到的车祸情况3 你对车祸原因的分析aneye witnessaccountofatrafficaccident itsohappenedthat justatthemoment itimpressedmemostbecause whathappenedwas atfirst almostatthesametime what smore asaresult asiunderstand ononehand ontheotherhand therefore onthemorningoflastsudayiwas onthewaytoschool acar wasdrivingoutofastreetcorner thedriverdrovesofast atragedy isawawomanridingabike withhereyeslookingupatthesky shewasknockedoffherbikebythespeedycar thecargotoutofcontrolandranintoatree ontheroadside boththewomanand thedriverwereinjuredseriously boththedriverandthepasser byareresponsiblefortheaccident thedriverwasdrivingtoofast thewomanwassocareless hadbothofthembeencarefulenough thetragedycouldhavebeenavoided 点评 指出车祸发生的时间与地点 描写车祸发生前的情况 继续说明车祸的发生前的情况 为车祸的发生做铺垫 总体概括车祸的严重性 tragedy 描写车祸当时的场景一 一位妇女不专心骑车 描写车祸当时的场景二 被车撞倒 车祸发生当时的场景三 车失去控制 撞在树上 车祸的结果 司机与骑自行者均受伤 我对车祸发生起因的看法 双方都有责任 车祸发生的原因一 司机车速太快 车祸发生的原因二 骑车者不小心 结论 假设二人都小心点 车祸将不会发生 4 现象解释型题四directions forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthefopic harmfulnessoffackecommldities youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline giveninchinese below 1 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品 fakecommodities 为什么会有这种现象 2 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人 社会等的危害 i asisknowntoall seemtogetaccustomedto infact thereasonsof lieinseveralaspects firstly secondly thirdly finally asamatteroffact ontheonehand therearealotoffakecommodities inthemarket people getaccustomedtofakecommoditiesonmarket morekindsandlargerquantitiesof fakecommoditiesareappearingaroundus thisphenomenon fakecommoditiesmay bringgoodprofitsforproducers ourmarketsupervisionisstillnotpowerfulenough manyfakecommoditiesaremuchcheaper thangenuineones manyconsumersfind itdiffculttoidentifyfakecommodities fakecommoditiesdogreatharmtopeople fakecommoditieshaveposedaseverethreatto thehealthydevelopmentofoursocialistmarket ontheotherhand therefore manyfakecommodities suchasfakemedicines mayharmtheconsumers healtheventheirlives somemeasures shouldbetakentoeliminatefakecommoditiesassoonaspossible 点评 摆出现象 引出话题 讲明事实 人们对假货司空见惯 注意onmarket和inthemarket之间的差别 说明假货发展趋势 种类和数量越来越多 inseveralaspects 自然合理地引起下文 说明原因 原因之一 生产商牟取不法利润 原因之二 市场监督力度不够 原因之