高中英语The elements of a paragraph教学课件系列人教版选秀十.ppt

牛津版高三module10unit2 theelementsofaparagraph agriculture2 costofliving3 industrialization4 industrialized5 rural6 urban 农业 生活成本 费用 工业化 工业化的 农村的 城市的 revision 城市化的 迁移模式 现代化 生活水平 7 urbanization8 migrationpattern9 modernization10 livingstandards theelementsofaparagraph 1 topicsentenceeachparagraphshouldhaveapoint thisisusuallyexpressedinatopicsentence whichclearlystateswhatinformationtheparagraphwillgive e g youngadultsgivemanydifferentreasonsformovingtocities mostoftheyoungpeoplewhoheadforbigcitiessaythesamething iwanttohavefun ambitioncandrivesomeyoungpeopletothecitytobe wherethebigcompaniesare notallparagraphshaveatopicsentence thisissometimesthecasewhen forexample aparagraphiscontinuingatopicintroducedinthepreviousparagraph whichcontainedatopicsentence 2 thetopicsentenceisusuallythefirstsentenceofaparagraph however inthefirstparagraphofanessay astoryoranarticle thetopicsentencemayfollowahook tograbtheattentionofreaders wecanuseahook whichisoftenaninterestingfact aquestionoraquotation e g olderamericansareonthemove thiswomanfeelsthatforolderpeople movingsomewherewarmermakessense thecommunityhereunderstandstheneedsofolderpeople saysonemaninflorida readthefollowingpassageandchoosethebesttopicsentencetoaddtoeachparagraph 1 atfirst leavesonthetreesturnyellowandred oneday theyhaveturnedbrownandfallentotheground nightfallsabitearliereachday then onemorning everythingiscoveredbyasoftblanketofsnow a whenpeoplegooutside theirhandsfeelcoldandnumb winterhascome aautumnpassestooquickly bautumnleavesarebeautiful b 2 ifonewishestobecomeascientist suchasaphysicist biologistorchemicalengineer heorshemaystudyphysics botany biochemistryandmathematics however ifastudentonlypaysattentiontothesesubjects heorshewilldevelop analyticalskills butnotcreativeskills manyjobsrequirecreativeskills andartsstudentshavemorecreativeskillsthanthosewhofocusonscience tome thisisevidenceoftheimportanceofteachingtheartsinourschools aschoolshouldteachmathsandscience bartseducationisanecessarypartofschool 2 supportingsentencesthetopicsentenceshouldbefollowedbysentenceswhichhelpexplainorproveitforexample fordecades floridahasbeenattractingolderresidents infact accordingtothenationalpopulationsurveyconductedin2000 floridawashometothelargestpopulationofpeopleaged65andolder thesentencesinaparagraphshouldbelistedinanorderthatmakessense wecanusetransitionstolinkeachsentencestothepreviousorfollowingones transitionswecanuseincludeforexample forinstance furthermore first second ontheotherhand howeverandalso floridaisapopularchoiceforthesepeoplebecauseoftheclimateandthestate srelativelyflatlandscape however asthenumberofolderamericansmovingthereincreases morechangesaremadetocatertothem forexample ambulanceresponsetimehasdecreased andmanyhouseshavebathroomsdesignedforelderlyhomeowners withthingslikewalk inbathtubsthatreducetheriskofslipsandfalls luopingiseditingseveralparagraphshewroteaboutmovingtoanewcity helphimmakehiswritingclearerbyaddingtransitionsfromtheboxbelow mydadisalawyerandhasrecentlyjoinedanotherlawfirm sowemovedtoanewcity whenmymumfirsttoldmethatweweremoving iwassad butihavemadesomeadjustmentandlearnt toloveournewbungalow 1 ispentalotoftimewatchingtvafterwemoved imissedmyoldfriendsanddidnothaveanyonetospendtimewith 2 istartedschoolandmadesomefriends iwentbowlingwithmynewfriends andtheytaughtmehowtorideaskateboard atfirst then goingoutwithmynewfriendswashelpful 3 istilldidnotfeel athome mymumsuggestedthatijoinedsomeclubsatschooltomakefriends ihadalwaysbeeninterestedinstars 4 ijoinedtheyoungastronomersclub atclubmeetings wetalkaboutstarsandlookatthemthroughatelescope but so sharinginterestswithagroupofpeoplereallyhelpedme andistartedtofeellikeournewcitywasreallymyhome 5 whenireade mailsfrommyoldfriends istillfeltverysad 6 dadfoundthesolution hetoldmeicouldinvitetwoofmyoldfriendstovisitduringthewinterholiday 7 they however finally after left ithoughtabouthowmuchihadenjoyeditwhenishowedthemaroundthecity includingmyfavouritebakeryandthebotanicalgardens thismademerealizethatireallyhavelearnttolovemynewcity numbadjphysicistn biologistn botanyn biochemistryn analyticaladj lawyern firmn 麻木的 物理学家 生物学家 植物学 生物化学 分析的 律师 公司 newwordsandphrases 9 lawfirm10 adjustment n 11 bungalown 12 gobowling13 skateboardn 14 astronomern 15 telescopen 16 bakeryn 律师事务所 调整 平房 小屋 打保龄球 滑板 天文学家 望远镜 面包店 3 concludingsentenceaparagraphshouldendwithonesentencethatrepeatsthetopicinanewway wecanalsousetheconcludingsentencetoexpressafinalideaaboutthetopicortohelpintroducethetopicofthenextparagraph acrosstheusa peoplearenoticingthesamething youngpeoplewanttoliveincities consolidation 一 readthefollowingarticle thenwritetheletterofthetopicsentenceforeachparagraphineachblank whilemanypeoplehavepurposelysoughttodarkentheirskinbytanninginthesun mostarenowavoidingsuchsunexposure thisisbecauseweknowthedangersofuvexposureandtheseriousresultsitmaybringalong short termresultsareatanandsunburn bothofwhichaffectfair skinnedpeoplemorethanthosewithdarkerskin long termresults whicharerisksforbothfair skinnedanddarker skinnedpeople includeearlyageingof theskin developingpermanentdarkspotsontheskin graduallossofeye sight problemswiththeimmunesystemandskincancer themostobviouswayistolimitourexposuretothesun whenwegooutside weshouldbecarefultowearprotectiveclothing suchashatsandtightly wovenclothing wearsunglassesandusesunblockonourskin aalthoughtherearemanyrisksassociatedwithuvexposure wecanprotectourselvesinmanyways bformanyyears peoplearoundtheworldthoughtofthesunassomethingthatdarkensourskinandkeepsuslookinghealthy butallofthisisnowchanging ctheresultofuvexposureincludebothshort termandlong termones ridefeelsuggestnumbadjustmentbowling1 myfingerswere withcold 2 thecompanymadean inmysalary n