高中英语写作常见错误句子类型课件.ppt

写作对策 考核目标 1 能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子 2 能根据题意连贯 贴切地进行书面表达 篇章写作要求 统一性 unity 围绕主题 连贯性 coherence 逻辑性 过渡词 一致性 consistency 时态 人称 英语作文要求 内容 观点明确 内容充实 理由充分 10 语言 表达正确 语言流畅 用词恰当 10 句式多样化 组织结构 结构正确 上下文连贯一致5 写作步骤 1 写前准备 看清题意 理清思路 写什么 2 写作过程 提纲 outline 动笔 writing 检查 check 正确连接分句1 thebookwasinteresting ireaditrapidly thebookwasinteresting andireaditrapidly 2 thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs theboysmoppedthefloor thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs andtheboysmoppedthefloor 避免误置修饰语3 attheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeenglish myfatherbegantoteachmeenglishwheniwassix 4 ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject 注意逻辑主语5 tobewell informed readingnewspaperisagoodhabit tobewell informed weshouldreadnewspapereveryday 6 comingoutoftheclassroom myheartwasbeatingveryfast comingoutoftheclassroom ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast 避免指代不清7 sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn tinvitedtotheparty sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn tinvitedtotheparty sheaskedhersister whywasn tiinvitedtotheparty 避免人称代词混淆8 wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong 避免重复9 inmyopinion ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice inmyopinion weshouldaskthemforadvice ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice 尽量避免汉语干扰10 thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger 11 duringstayinginbeijing ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest duringmystayinbeijing i whilestayinginbeijing i 12 thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs 13 iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever iwillneverforgetmydearfriends 14 theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience 注意时态一致15 iwentshoppingyesterday thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts istruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsineed whenifinishedmyshoppingiamsotired 注意时态一致iwentshoppingyesterday thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts istruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsineeded whenifinishedmyshopping iwassotired writeashortparagraphabout lackofsleepwearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexerc