高三英语]How to write a good composition课件.ppt

howtowriteagoodenglishcomposition time april24th 2009teacher yangxuezhongplace cangshan linyi step1 explainthecompositionintheexamonmarch10 2009 saysomethingabouthowtowriteacompositiononletters 高三英语一轮质量检查考试原题假如你的名字是李华 最近你听到有关我国部分地区许多希望学校被荒废的新闻报道后 很是伤心 于是 你决定向一家英文报社写一封信 表达你的看法 内容包括 希望学校对我国教育的贡献 荒废的原因 缺乏规划和预测 社会的发展变化等 如何处理荒废的学校 注意 1 词数120 150 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯充实 3 文章的开头与结尾已给出 不包括在词数内 dearsir madam recentlyihaveheardaboutsomenewsthatmanyhopeschoolsinmanyareashavebeendeserted sincerelyyours lihua onepossibleversion dearsir madam recentlyihaveheardaboutsomenewsthatmanyhopeschoolsinmanyareashavebeendeserted 贡献 atthenewsifeelverysad afterall theseprojecthopeschoolsincreasechildren schancesofgoingtoschoolandplayanimportantpartinimprovingthelocalpeople slevelofeducationandthusfurtherimprovingtheirqualityoflife 原因 whyaretheydeserted ontheonehand beforetheseschoolsbegantobebuilt therewasalackofscientificlong termplanningandpredictionsofthedevelopmentofchineseeducation especiallythatinthelocalareas therefore thedistributionofschoolisn treasonable ontheotherhand owingtothesocialdevelopmentandthedecliningpopulation it sunnecessaryforsomanyschoolstoexist 处理 sowhenwebuildschools wemustbeawareoftheirdevelopmentinthefutureandconsiderwhetherthere salong termneed andforthosedesertedschools theyshouldbemadethebestofandcontinuetoservethelocalareas sincerelyyours lihua anintroductiononhowtowriteagoodcomposition step2writeacompositionaccordingtotheintroduction 2008年高考山东卷书面表达 假设你是新华中学的学生张华 班里从外地转来一名同学李明 他一时无法融入新的班集体中 感到很苦恼 请根据下列要点用英语给他写信 帮他分析原因 给他提出建议 陈述你帮助他的具体打算注意 词数120 150dearliming bestregards zhanghua step3 readandmakecommentsonacompositionwrittenbyoneofthestudents readandmakecommentsonthecompositionontheblackboardreadandmakecommentsonthecompositiononthescreen onpossibleversion dearliming 开首语 i mverygladtobecomeyourclassmates 叙述情况 iknowyouareworriedaboutyourstudyanddon tknowhowtoadaptyourselftothenewenvironment 引出下文 therearesomesuggestionsaboutitandihopetheycanhelpyou 苦恼原因 youknowwealwaysbecomepuzzledwhenwegotoanewenvironmentbecausewedon tknowanythingaboutthepeoplearoundusandevendon tknowwhattodo 具体建议 ithinkyoushouldmakefriendswiththestudentsinourclass 2 thenifyouhaveanyproblemyoucanaskusorourteachersforhelp we lltryourbesttohelpyou 帮助打算 1 afterclass i llshowyouaroundourschoolandtellyousomethingaboutit 2 ifyouhaveanyproblem pleasetellmeandiwillgiveyoumyadvicenotonlyonstudybutalsoonyourlifehere 结尾语 allinall ihopeyoucanadaptyourselftothenewenvironmentandwecanbecomegoodfriends bestregards zhanghua asummary 英语写作六要 审题要准确 要点要全面 句子要正确 行文要连贯 字数合要求 卷面要整洁 step4homework 假如几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品 请同学吃 他们吃后中毒 肚子疼