高三英语Skills of writing good sentences课件人教版.ppt

basicwriting 基础写作 考生按所给的内容及要求 用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容 并组成连贯的短文 简而言之 考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力 基础写作的命题特点 评分标准 1 句子内容的完整性 completeness 2 句子结构的正确性 correctness 3 句子结构的复杂性 variety 4 句子内容的连贯性 coherence waysofwritinggoodsentences 我更喜欢生活在乡村 ilikelivinginthecountrysidebetter iprefertoliveinthecountryside 2 如果你想了解更多的信息 请拨打0203321456 ifyouwanttoknowmoreaboutit pleasecall0203321456 ifyou dliketoknowmoreaboutit pleasecall0203321456 方法一 一句多译 3 这本书花了我300元 ispent300yuanonthebook ipaid300yuanforthebook thepriceofthebookis300yuan itcostme300yuantobuythebook thebookcostme300yuan 4 昨天下午他才来 hecamehereyesterdayafternoon hedidn tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere 5 我们一到达村庄就受到了村民的热情欢迎 assoonaswearrivedatthevillage wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers onarrivingatthevillage wewerewarmly themomentwearrivedatthevillage wewere wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe面对困难时 他从不放弃hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe 方法二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 听到这个消息 他们变的很激动 whentheyheardthenews theygotexcited hearingthenews theygotexcited 2 除非被邀请发言 你应该在会议上保持沉默 unlessyouareinvitedtospeak youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting unlessinvitedtospeak youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting 3 面对困难时 他从不放弃 whenhefacesdifficulties henevergivesup facingdifficulties henevergivesup 4 从银行出来后 他发现他的车子不见了 afterhecameoutofthebank hefoundhiscarmissing comingoutofthebank hefoundhiscarmissing 5 我同意作者的观点 认为多做运动对青少年的身心健康都有好处 iagreewiththewriter andithinkdoingmoreexerciseisgoodfortheteenagersbothphysicallyandmentally iagreewiththewriter thinking 6 smith教授给我们作了演讲 他告诉了我们他的学习经验和他是怎样取得研究成功的 professorsmithmadeaspeechforus hetoldushislearningexperienceandhowhehadachievedsuccessinhisresearchwork professorsmithmadeaspeechforus telling 方法三 丰富的句式 我考试没及格 我很失望 ifailedtheexam iwasdisappointed ifailedtheexam whichmademedisappointed whatmademedisappointedwasthatifailedtheexam 2 我首先建议你们去参观长城 first iwillsuggestthatyoushouldvisitthegreatwall thefirstplacethati llsuggestyouvisitisthegreatwall whatiwillsuggestfirstisthatyoushouldvisitthegreatwall 3 直到我在报纸上看到这个消息才知道发生了什么事 ididnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilireadthenewsinthenewspaper itwasnotuntilireadthenewsinthenewspaperthatiknewthenews 4 沉迷于电子游戏不仅对学生的身体有害 还对学生的学习有害 beingaddictedtovideogamesisnotonlybadforthestudents health butitisalsobadfortheirstudies notonlyisbeingaddictedtovideogamesbadforthestudents health butitisalsobadfortheirstudies 5 中国是一个大国 它有大约5000年的历史 chinaisalargecountry ithasahistoryofabout5 000years chinaisalargecountrywithahistoryofabout5 000years 6 她是一个漂亮的女孩 有一双明亮的眼睛 sheisabeautifulgirl shehasbrighteyes sheisabeautifulgirlwithbrighteyes waysofwritinggoodsentences 一句多译2 非谓语动词3 丰富的句式倒装句 强调句复合句 定语从句 状语从句 名词性从句with 宾语 宾语补足语 summary 1 标题 it snogoodusingmobileforstudents2 必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容 3 将五个句子组织成连贯的短文 学生不宜使用手机的理由 手机并不能带来更多的方便 而且加重经济负担 若课堂接听手机会影响听课 也会影响老师和其他同学 学生玩手机游戏或接发短信 将无法集中精力学习 手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比 带来不好的影响 homework 1 itcannotbringconveniencebutaddstothestudents burdeninfinance 2 somestudentsmakeacallwiththeirmobilephonesintheclassroom 3 itstopstheotherclassmatesfromfixingontheirstudy 4 theycan tpayattentiontotheirteacher steachinginclassbysendingmessagestoothersorplayingthemobilephonegames 5 itmayleadtostudents showingoffthemselvesbyowningniceandexpensivemobilephones theanswerto isitgoodusingmobilephoneforstudents is no forthefollowingreasons firstly itaddstothestudents burdeninfinancetogetherwithitssideeffects suchastheirnotpayingattentiontotheirteacher steachinginclassbysendingmessagestoothers itmayleadtostudents showingoffthemselvesbyowningniceandexpensivemobilephones somestudentsmakeacallwiththeirmobilephonesintheclassroom which