高中英语书面表达高三专题.ppt

英语书面表达训练探讨 特点 1 试题呈开放趋势2 试题内容 与时俱进3 试题提示 汉语愈少4 应用文体 没考格式一句话 最易得分 最难抓分 失分原因 1 不会审题 偏离主题2 汉语思维 逐字翻译3 句子逻辑关系混乱4 语法错误 书面表达不同题材分类写作 支持与反对观点陈述类b 数据式图表类c 看图说话类d 应聘类e 提示议论文类f 应用文类g 表示今昔对比类写作套语类h 地图 路线图类i 介绍某人 某物 某地 某计划 某项目类 a 支持与反对观点陈述类 议论文 写作模式1总起 differentpeopleholddifferentopinions opinionsaredivided peoplehavetaken adopteddifferentattitudestowards peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion 表达观点一 someofusthink holdtheview areinfavoroftheideathat thereasonisthat besides someareagainsttheviewthat 表达观点二 however ontheotherhand othershavejusttheoppositeopinion theythinkthat what smore however eachcoinhastwosides 本人观点 asfarasiamconcerned inmyopinion it smyopinionthat foronereason foranotherreason inaword onlythrough canwehaveabrightfuture wehadaheateddiscussionabout on students views ideas opinionsonitvary differfrompersontoperson somestudentssay think believethat however othersholdtheviewthat asfarasiamconcerned iaminfavorofthefirst secondview iwouldliketo thereasonsareasfollows first secondly inconclusion inaword 写作模式2 写作模式3thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat 作文题目 butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson amajorityofpeoplethinkthat观点一 intheirviewstherearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows inthefirstplace 原因一 furthermore inthesecondplace 原因二 soitgoeswithoutsaying不用说that观点一 people however differintheiropinionsonthismatter somepeopleholdtheideathat观点二 intheirpointofview ontheonehand 原因一 ontheotherhand 原因二 therefore thereisnodoubtthat观点二 asfarasiamconcerned ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二 itisnotonlybecause butalsobecause themore themore 最近 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 参考词汇 门票 entrancefee deareditor i mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway whatismore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees theysuggest however feesshouldbechargedlow yourstruly lihua 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影 有人选择看电影 有人则喜欢读原著 请你以 filmorbook whichdoyouprefer 为题 按照下列要点写一篇英语短文 看电影 省时 有趣 易懂 读原著 细节更多 语言优美 我的看法及理由 注意 1 词数 100字左右 文章题目和开头已给出 不计入词数 2 参考词汇 originalwork或bookintheoriginal 原著 filmorbook whichdoyouprefer someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory besides thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal meanwhile thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful personally iagreewiththesecondview actuallyihavemorereasonsforit ithinkicanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown andwhat smore iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor sideas inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit b 数据式图表类 多属议论文 写作实例 根据下面周表 graph 以 firecauses 为题 写一篇议论文 要点包括 1 火灾原因 2 各类火灾的比例 3 火灾给人们的启示 词数 110左右 三个步骤 一 提炼主题二 论证主题三 升华主题 firecausesasweallknow fire oneofthemostterriblekillersinourmodernsocietycanbecausedbymanyfactors first itismainlycausedbysmokers ascanbeseenfromthegraph in2005 thousandsoffireshappenedinchina about50 ofthemwerecausedbysmokerswholeftcigaretteendseverywhere 30 werecausedbydefectiveinsulationand20 bychildrenplayingwithmatches nomatterwhattypeoffireitwas therewasonethingincommon carelessness therefore weshouldwarnchildrenofthedangersofplayingwithmatches atthesametime workersshouldknowtheimportanceofgoodinsulationtopeople slives ofcourse smokingshouldnotbeallowedinpublicplaces 文章结构 part1 generalidea tendency part2 facts tosupporttheidea andreasonspart3 solutionsorpersonalopinions suggestions ifneeded 开头常用套语 thegraph chat picture table aboveshowsthat asisshownbythegraph inthechart fromthegraph chartabove wecansee fromthefiguresgiveninthetable itcanbeseen noticedthat 数据说明常用套语 thenumberof nearlydoubled thenumberwas5timesasmuchasthatof itdecreasedtwicethanthatof2006 thetotalnumberwasloweredby10 comparedwith2006 itfellfrom15 to10 thenumberof amountto addupto sumupto reach 数量总计 increase rise fall drop from to comparedwith makeupabout 原因说明常用套语 thereareseveralreasonsthataccountfor说明 it anumberoffactorsaccountfor thechangein largelyresultsfromthefactthat firstly firstofall tobeginwith secondly besides inaddition furthermore moreover finally lastbutnotleast thisisbecause thatiswhy thereasonfor why isthat 结尾常用套语 wecandrawtheconclusionthat inmyopinion personally asfarasi mconcerned inshort inbrief inaword it sclearfromthechartthat wecanknow learnthat theresultsseemtosuggestthat 日前 针对学生的零用钱 pocketmoney 的消费方向 你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查 得出数据如下表 现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信 反映这一情况 并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观 注意 1 书信中不必一一列举具体数字 只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可 2 字数 100字左右 开头已给出 不计人总词数 deareditor recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney deareditor recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney inthissurvey bothjuniorstudentsandseniorstudentsspendmosttheirmoneyonbooks sacksandplayinggames stillsomemoneygoestoclothes banks sports andsoon thesurveyshowsthatabout44 ofseniorspreferbookstosacks 37 andplayinggames 31 ontheotherhand only32 ofjuniorswillspendtheirpocketmoneybuyingbooks whileoverahalfbuysacksand44 spendonplayinggames bothseniorsandjuniorswouldnotwastetoomuchmoneyinclothesorputitinbanks ithinktoomanysackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth inaddition ifweplaygameswithoutlimit we lllosemuchprecioustime whichresultsinlowgrades furthermore themoneyishard earned ihopewestudentsvalueourmoneyaswellasourtime c 看图说话类文章 多属记叙文 记叙文的写作要素 即篇章结构 1 thebeginning 要交待清楚五要素的内容 即where when what who how 给读者一个内容完整 细节清晰的故事 2 themiddle 事情的叙述可以按时间或空间的顺序叙述 让读者易于把握所叙述内容之间的内在联系 从而轻松理解文章主题 3 theending 根据图片或图表大意进行议论 起到扣题或点题的作用 注意人称 通常使用与过去有关的时态 如一般过去时 某英语报社开展以 parentsandchildren 为题的看图作文征文活动 要求根据以下三幅图用英语写一篇作文 文章的内容应包括 4月9日发生在李华家的事情 你个人的感受 请你写一篇向报社投稿的征文 注意 1 词数100左右 正文题目已给出 不计入总数 2 短文要求观点明确 结构合理 紧凑连贯 parentsandchildrenontheeveningofapril9th lihuawaswatchingtvwhilehismotherwasbusypreparingfordinnerinthekitchen howattentivelyhewaswatchingthetvprogramwhenthetelephonerang itwasfromhisgrandmother whowantedtosayhappybirthdaytohismother todayismymother sbirthday lihuawasalittlepuzzled howcomethatihaveforgottenallaboutit lihuathoughttohimself feelingashamed atthestory igotdeeplyshocked itisnoteasyforparentstobringusup theygiveuslotsofloveandcare whilewedon tcareforthemenough nowit snevertoolatetorealizethisandshowourloveandcareforthem d 应聘类 属说明文类 一 介绍消息来源二 表明求职心愿三 介绍个人简历 摆出求职优势四 请求答复联系五 表明感激之情 写作实例 假设你是新华大学的学生李华 得知某英文报招聘兼职记者 你有意应聘 请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信 1 表示感兴趣 2 说明优势 知识面 英语水平 合作精神 相关经历 3 希望得到回复 注意 1 词数 100左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 dearsirormadam i mastudentfromxinhuauniversity i mgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart timeenglishreporters i mquiteinterestedinit ithinki mfitforthejob asastudent i vereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields i mfondofenglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting besides i measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers aboveall ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation soi msureicandothejobwellificangettheposition i mlookingforwardtoanearlyreplyifpossible andi dappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldcallmeathankyouverymuch yourssincerely lihua e 提示议论文类 1 文章开头 能依据提示确立主题句 topicsentence 阐明观点或看法 2 使用连接词 分层次说明理由 缘由 supportingsentences 3 归纳总结 conclusion 首尾呼应 有些人以为 某些数字 如6 8 9等会带来好运 在选择车牌号 电话号码时 他们不惜花高昂的 择号费 来获得这些数字 你却认为 成功和财富与这些所谓的吉祥数字无关 而是艰苦劳动和不懈努力的结果 请根据以上内容用英语写一篇短文 注意 1 文章的标题已给出 2 词数100左右 do luckynumbers reallybringgoodluck somepeoplethinkcertainnumbersmaybringgoodlucktothem thesenumbersinclude 6 8 9 andsoon therefore whentheywanttochooseacarnumberoraphonenumber theybuythenumberwhichendswiththeseluckynumbersatahighprice inmyopinion successandluckhavenothingtodowithsuchso calledluckynumbers theonlykeytosuccessorwealthliesinhardworkandpersistence ifwearetoodependentontheluckynumbers wemaybecomelazyorevendiscouragedwhentheyprovedtobeuseless weshouldbelieveinourselvesandmakegreateffortstostruggleforsuccessaswellaswealth f 应用文书信 letter 日记 diary 便条 note 通知 notice 请柬 invitationcard 海报 poster 致词 speeches 失物招领 lostandfound 书信祝贺信 感谢信 邀请信 申请信 投诉信 求助信 信件常用句型 开头 thankyoufor i mgladtoreceiveyourletterdatedon i msosorrythaticouldn twriteearlier howareyougettingalongwithyourstudies withgreatpleasureilearnthat i mwritingtoaskif totellyou toapplyforthejob 结尾 i mlookingforwardtoreceiving longingtoreceive yourreply allmybestwishestoyou remembermeto goodlucktoyou thankyouagain 邀请 couldyoucometo wouldyouliketo ishouldverymuchlikeyoutojoinus 委婉拒绝 i dlovetocome butican tbecause i mreallysorrytosay 投诉 i mwritingtocomplain 回复求助 inmyopinion youshould iwouldadviseyouto isuggestyoudo ifiwereyou iwould 求职 ilearnfrom readinthenewspaperthat iwastoldthat beexperiencedin iwouldbegratefulifyoucould 2 口头通知1 称呼语 boysandgirls dearclassmates ladiesandgentlemen等 2 attention please mayihaveyourattentionplease pleasebequiet ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou i vegotsomethingimportanttosay i vegotanannouncementtomake i mgladtotellyouthat 口头通知的常用结束语 that sall that sall thankyou 书面通知 noticeisgivenherethat allofthemarerequired expectedtonotethat areportoncomputerwillbegivenbyprof smith classoneandclasstwo gradeonewillgotothexishanparkto pleasebethereontime everybodyisexpectedtoattend thesportsmeetwillbeputofftill 3 致词 speeches 欢迎词 awelcomeparty 致欢送词 afarewellparty 告别词 afarewellparty 致词套话 dearfriends ladiesandgentlemen welcometoourschool weareverygladtomeet firstofall let sextendourwarmwelcomeandcordialgreetingstoourdistinguishedguest s it smygreathonorto onbehalfof wewishyouapleasantjourneyandgoodhealth mayyouhaveapleasanttime we relookingforwardtoseeinghimagain wewishhim youlotsofluckforthefuture g 表示今昔对比类写作套语1 开头常用句型 1 greatchangeshavetakenplace greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthelastfiveyears quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschoolsinceyouleftchina overthepasttwentyyearsorso greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife 2 thingshavebeguntoimprovesince thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload 2 对比常用句型 1 usedto butnow 过去常 但是现在 2 inthepast butnow 在过去 但是现在 3 once butnow 曾经 但是现在 4 thingsaredifferentnow 情况已大不同了 5 butnow everythinghaschanged 但是现在全变了 假设你是李明 你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习 来信询问有关情况 请你写一封信 谈一谈开展研究性学习前后 你的学习情况的变化 注意 1 用书信格式 2 词数 100左右 3生词 研究性学习exploringstudy 上网surftheinternet dearjack hownicetohearfromyouagain youwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninourschool inshort thingshavebeenimprovingsincetheschoolbegantocarryoutexploringstudy inthepast theteachersalwayskeptonexplainingthepointsinclass westudentsjustlistenedandtooknotes butnowweoftendiscussandtrytosolvetheproblemsraisedbytheteachersorourselves afterclass weenjoyeddifferentkindsofactivitiesinsteadofdoingendlesshomework forexample wecanreadwhatweareinterestedin wecangotothelibraryorsurftheinternetforvariouskindsofinformation inaword wearenowmastersofstudy andwearehappy bestwishes yours liming h 地图 路线图类写作步骤 1 仔细观察图画 图示或图表材料 找出所有内容 在介绍路线或解说实物结构时 在内容上不能遗漏 不则就要点不全 说明不完整 2 根据需要安排适当的说明顺序 通常要按时间或空间顺序来写 3 要注意说明文语言特点 说明文的写作目的是给读者提供知识 传递信息 因此其语言要准确 简明 4 组织要点 写出全文 常用介词及词组 方位介词 beside behind before infrontof in on to thenorth south west east of常用句型 1 therebe句型 2 介词短语 谓语 其它 倒装句 theteacher sdormitorystandsbetweenaandb behindthegardenistheclassroombuilding 3 其它 godownthisstreet andturnrightatthefirstturning pleasegetacrossthebridgeandgoeastward it saboutfiveminutes walk ride itislocated liesin on totheeastofthetown 实例分析 假定你叫张华 你的同学李明即将去上海学习 现由你写一封便函给你们的朋友jim 约他聚会 内容要点如下 1 聚会时间 本星期五下午3点30分 2 聚会地点 东风路225号 李明家 3 按下图所画路线告诉jim怎样去李明家 注意 1 注明便函的时间 2006年4月9日 2 内容包括说明部分和要点 3 字数 100字左右 题解 通过阅读题干 明确本篇书面表达 语体应该是一封便函形式 并有时间 便函内容包含聚会原因 时间 地点以及去李明家的路线 三点 april9th 2006dearjim ourfriendlimingwillleaveforshanghaitostudy sowearegoingtohaveaget togetherat3 30thisfridayafternoon helivesatno 225dongfengstreet itisnotverydifficulttofindyourwaytohishome takeano 2bus thestopofwhichisontheleftofyouruniversity andgetoffatthesecondcrossing thereisacinemaacrossthestreet turnrightatthecorner andyouwillfinddongfengstreet liming shomeis200yardsdownthestreetontheright thereisapostofficeoppositetoliming shome youcan tmissit yours zhanghua i 介绍某人 某物 某地 某计划 某项目类假如你叫李华 学校组织有外籍教师参加的交游活动 你担任临时导游 请根据下面图示 用英语写一篇讲话稿 在活动开始前向外籍教师简要介绍交游活动的安排 goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen mynameislihua ihavethehonorofbeingyourguide i dliketogiveyouabriefintroductiontoourfieldtri