英语人教版九年级全册how to write an article.ppt

Writing 类别2 咨询建议类这次考试结束以后 你将怎样度过一个有意义的暑假 请用英语写一篇文章给你自己和小伙伴们一些好的建议 内容必须包括以下要点 走亲访友 和家人一起共度美好时光 和好朋友们一起看电影 听音乐 假期我们应该加强体育锻炼 增强体质 你还有什么别的建议 至少两条 要求 1 字数80 100 不要逐条翻译 可适当发挥 2 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名 3 行文连贯 条理清晰 语句通顺 语法正确 书写规范 4 标题和开头已给出 不计入总字数 HowtoTakeaMeaningfulSummerVacationaftertheExamItisnecessarytotakeameaningfulsummervacationaftertheexam Therearekindsofactivitiesforustotakepartin 审题指导 细读所给的文字提示 提取信息 1 本文为 暑期生活的建议 因此文体为说明文 2 写作时必须用到给出的所有提示要点 还要提出至少两条建议 考生应当从自己熟悉的话题入手 合理适当地发挥 3 建议说明类的文章时态主要为一般现在时 也可以穿插使用一般将来时或现在进行时 4 写作时主要使用第一人称 描写他人时使用第三人称 5 词数 80 100 标题和开头已给出 不计入总字数 写作指导 高分范文 HowtoTakeaMeaningfulSummeVacationaftertheExamIt is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam There are kinds of activities for us to take part in First wecanvisitourfriendsandrelativesorspendhappytimewithourfamily Second seeingafilm listeningtomusicorhangingoutwithourfriendswillbealsowonderful Third weshouldtakemoreexercisetokeephealthy What smore wehadbetterreviewwhatwehavelearnedinmiddleschool Finally itisnecessaryforustodosomehousework whichcanhelpourparentsalot Aboveall Ihopeallofuscanhaveapleasantvacation Leavingschool 毕业时分 Growingpainsandgains 成长的烦恼与欢乐 Ihaveadream 我有一个梦想 ThingsIhatetodo 我不喜欢 Lovearoundme 我身边的爱 Iwanttodosomethingformyschool 我为学校做件事 I mproudofmyself 我为自己感到自豪 与生活相关与 我 相关 内容 10分 语言 10分 文采 5分 一 认真审题 结构合理 写什么 题目 参考问题 Whatshouldwewriteabout Whatshouldn twe only writeabout Freetalk 1 Myschoollife 2 Mydreamteacher 3 ThethingIhatetodo 4 Myopinionsofkeepingpetdogs 5 Thebestwaytomakemehappy Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic Thebestwaytomakemehappy Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons Thebestwaytomakemehappyisachievinggoodmarks IthinkthiswayisthebestonetomakemehappybecauseitistheeasiestwaysanditcanimprovemyabilitysoIthinkitisthebestway Inthisway Icangetsomeprizes soIwillfeelhappy what smoreitcanalsomakemyparentshappy Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons 内容不全 therearealotofwaystomakemehappy Thebestwaytomakemehappyistoplaybasketball Toplaycomputergamesisalsoawaytomakemehappy EverydaywehavePElesson Thesearealotofinterestsinit SoIfeelhappyinthisway Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons 内容不全 thebestwaytomakemehappyistohelpanother WhenIfeelsad Icanhelpanother becauseIhopetheothershappy Icanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadandplaywithsmallchildren InthiswayIfeelanotherhappy thenIalsowillhappy Helpothersnotonlymakemehappy butalsomakeothershappy Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons 内容不全 ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle 内容不全 1 Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays 1 2 Givesomedescriptionsaboutit suchaswhere when how who etc 4 3 Whydoyouthinkit sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid 2 Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingholidaysintheyear ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysismakingabirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday Mymotherboughtthethingsweneededfromthesupermarket Wemixedtheflourandeggs thenaddedsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft Finally weputitintotheoven Isharedthecakewithmyfamilymembers Itwasreallydelicious Iwillneverforgetthatday 内容得分5 MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor Itriedtoimproveit butfailed SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish Hesaid ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish themoreprogressyouwillmake ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible Atlast myspokenEnglishimproved Mytrouble Whatismissedinthisarticle Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy 2 Howdidyoufacethetrouble 3 Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit 2 内容得分5 Theenvironmentisimportanttousall Weneedfreshair cleanwaterandsoon Thereusedtobemanytreesaroundus theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean butnowtheydisappearedforonereasonoranotherandwerereplacedbydirtywaterandpollutedair Becauseoftheterriblepollution people shealthisgettingworseandworse What smore thegreenhouseeffectischangingourclimate whichmayleadtoevenmoreserioussituation Environmentaroundus Whatismissedinthisarticle 1 Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus 4 2 Asstudents whatshouldwedo 3 内容得分4 MyspokenEnglishusedtobeverypoor Itriedtoimproveit butfailed SoItoldittomyEnglishteacherandwishedhimtogivemesomeadvice HetoldmethatIcouldimprovemyspokenEnglishbyspeakingmoreEnglish Hesaid ThemoreyoupracticespeakingEnglish themoreprogressyouwillmake ThenIfollowedhisadviceandspokeasmuchEnglishaspossible Atlast myspokenEnglishimproved Mytrouble Whatismissedinthisarticle Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy 2 Howdidyoufacethetrouble 3 Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit 2 内容得分5 Nowadays ourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse Ourbadhabitscausemanyproblemslikeairpollution landpollutionandwaterpollution Tomakeourenvironmentbetter Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector WecanplanttreestomaketheaircleanbecausetreescantakeinCO2andreleaseO2intotheair Weshouldbuyanduseenvironmentallyfriendlygoods Finally wemustn tleavealotofrubbishintotheriver pondorsea Solet sbeenvironmentprotectorsandenjoylivingabetterlifeontheearth Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector Nowadays therearemanyproblemsofourenvironmentsuchasairpollution waterpollutionandlandpollution Peoplecutdownandburntheforest Peopleusethingsonceandthrowthemaway Peopleusechemicalstoproducemanythings Becauseofthesereasons ourearthisingreatdanger Weliveontheearth it sourdutytoprotectit IwilldoalotofthingssothatIcanprotecttheearth Forexample Iwillreusetheplasticbags Therearealotofwaystobegreenconsumers Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector Usethefollowingpointsasaguide 下列要点仅供参考 Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment Everybodyhasmanywaystomakehappy SodoI First Ilistensomefavoritemusic Second Ireadsomebooksandmakesomenotes Ithinkitisgood Third Iplaybasketballwithmyfriends Inmyopinion playingbasketballisthebestwaytomakemehappy becauseIfondofit Becauseofthose Ibecomehappyandstrong 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons 内容 10分 语言 10分 文采 5分 一 认真审题 结构合理 写什么 题目 参考问题 重点写什么 提示问题 时态 参考问题 Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector 保护者 Usethefollowingpointsasaguide 下列要点仅供参考 Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment Mytrouble Whatwasyourtroubleinyourstudy 2 Howdidyoufacethetrouble 3 Howdidyoufeelaftersolvingit 2 ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays 1 Whatwasthethingyoudidinthewinterholidays 1 2 Givesomedescriptionsaboutit suchaswhere when how who etc 4 3 Whydoyouthinkit sthemostunforgettablethingyoudid 2 Environmentaroundus 1 Whatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentaroundus 4 2 Asstudents whatshouldwedo 3 二 理清思路 列出提纲 Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector 保护者 以 Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 Usethefollowingpointsasaguide 下列要点仅供参考 1 Whataretheproblemsofourenvironment 2 Whydoyouwanttobeanenvironmentprotector 3 Whatwillyoudotoprotecttheenvironment Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic Thebestwaytomakemehappy 以 最能使我快乐的方法 为题 写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference 所给提示仅供参考 1 Whatarethewaystomakeyouhappy 2 Whichwaydoyouthinkisthebestonetomakeyouhappy 3 Whydoyoufeelhappyinthisway giveatleasttworeasons 三 连词成句 初步成形 四 检查修改 内容无误 Environmentisveryimportantforus Inourlife theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit I dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful Iwanttobeanenvironmentprotector Thewinterholidaysareoneofthemostexcitingdaysintheyear Ididalotofthingsthiswinterholidays themostunforgetablethingistomakemybirthdaycakewithmymotheronmybirthday Mymotherbuythethingsweneedfromthesupermarket Wemixedthefloorandeggs Thenaddsomespecialthingstomakethecakesoft Finally weputitintotheiron Isharedthecakewithmyfamilynumbers Itwasreallydelicious IwillneverforgetthatdaybecauseIlearnedtomakecakesaswellassharemyhappinesswithothers ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays Whatdoyouthinkofthisarticle 错误太多 10 Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem 1 Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried 2 IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb climbed tired unforgettable somebody 3 Onafridayafternoon Iwentshoppingwithmymother Spelling 拼写 others Friday 4 Ican tforgetthatday Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether Ican tforgetthatdaybecause 5 Whatacrazydayitwas Iwillrememberitforever Capitalletter 大小写 Punctuation 标点符号 6 Iwillrememberedthatdayforever remember 7 Ithoughtitishungry was 8 Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom tidies 9 Howunforgettablethisthingsis thing Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Tense 时态 Verbagreement 主谓一致 Wordform 词形 10 Inmyfather shelp Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore Withmyfather shelp 11 Tocutalongstorytoshort Tocutalongstoryshort 12 IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother bybus 13 Mymothertoldmedon tgiveitup toldmenottogiveitup Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Phrases 短语和固定搭配 14 Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad sawanoldladylying 16 Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse playedwith 15 Isatonaseat listeningmusic listeningto 17 Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow Weallwereafraid wereall Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Missingwords 漏词 18 Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands with thehouse 19 Itistiredwork tiring Words order 词序 Usingwrongword 选词错误 22 Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart carefully 21 OneSundaymorning IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem ChineseEnglish 中式英语 Inmylife manythingshappened 20 Inmylifehavemanythingshappened 1 Environmentisveryimportantforus 2 Inourlife theproblemsofourenvironmentareveryimportant 3 Wehavehurtittoomuchbycuttingdowntreesandpollutewaterandland 4 Iwanttobeaenvironmentprotectorsothatsaveit 5 I dsuggestmyparentstotakebusinsteadofdrivecar 7 Iwillprogressmyhabbitssuchasuseabasketorapaperbag 8 Ifeverybodycandosomethingstoprotecttheearth ourenvironmentwillbemuchbeautiful 6 Iwillpreventpeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere to polluting inordertosaveit sothatIcansaveit takeabusinsteadofdrivingacar fromthrowing developgoodhabits using something muchmorebeautiful serious anenvironment 1 2 3 4 2 5 6 7 1 8 1 4 1 7 2 8 2 1 是否有大小写错误 capitallettersorlowercaseletters 是否有拼写错误 spellingmistakes 是否有标点错误 punctuationmistakes 4 是否有语法错误 grammarmistakes 主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting Duringthewinterholidays Ithappenedalotofthings Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner Weaskedwhathappenedonher Shesaidshecuond tfoundhermother Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother Luckily wefoundhermother theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy too IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays Checkandcorrectthisarticle alotofthingshappened helping I wereshopping crying happenedto couldn t find help her find They couldalso so Duringthewinterholidays Ithappenedalotofthings Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner Weaskedwhathappenedonher S