英语人教版九年级全册unit14 SectionB 3a-self check .ppt

Adviceonmakingyourarticlesperfect Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7SectionB3a SelfCheck Adviceonmakingyourarticlesperfect 中考正向我们款步走来 我们以什么来面对中考 信心和态度决定60 那么剩下的40 是什么 Thatis方法 Goodways halfdone中考写作也是如此 So in这节课 对占中考笔试onesixth总分的作文 给同学们丁点的suggestions和方法的感悟 那 就是我所hope的 一篇优秀作文必须符合下列条件 1 包含所有要点2 围绕内容适当发挥 有新意 亮点 内容具体 丰富 不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译 3 应用丰富的语言结构和词汇 4 用词准确 句子通顺 行文连贯 表达清楚 表达有层次 会用关联词 注意首尾呼应 5 没有语言错误 杜绝任何小错 健康很重要 在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天 会休息的人才会有健康的身体 人们是如何度过假期的呢 国际健康组织对此作了一次调查 右图是他们此次的调查结果 根据你所得的信息 请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告 并提倡大家进行假日休闲 travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work Style 体裁 Person 人称 Tense 时态 调查报告 记叙文 第三人称 一般现在时 1 审 search 据实描写 适当发挥 度假方式 细节及提倡假日休闲 Alotofpeopletravel Somepeoplestayathome Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents Afewpeoplework Enjoyyourvacation stayathome work visitfriendsorparents travel 2 列 list 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 Alotofpeopletravel Somepeoplestayathome TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents Afewpeoplework 3 加 add 加首尾 使结构完整 突出主题 2 Thebody 1 Thebeginning Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport 3 Theending Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 4 美 beautify 选好词句 美化文章 在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底 Writingskills 写 的技巧 方法一 善用词汇 Whichisbetter 我希望你能帮助我 AIwishyoucanhelpme BI mlookingforwardtoyourhelp Whichisbetter 他们很早就到了 BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould ATheyarrivedearly Whichisbetter 最后 他的狗得救了 他感到很惊讶 AHisdogwassavedatlast Hewasverysurprised BTohissurprise hisdogwassavedatlast 方法二 活用多种句型 Writingskills 写 的技巧 她还小 搬不动这么重的箱子 ASheisveryyoung Shecan tcarrytheheavybox BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox CSheissoyoungthatshecan tcarrythe DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe 方法三 妙用关联词 Writingskills 写 的技巧 1 表示并列或递进 and both and what smorenotonly butalso neither nor2 表示转折 but however although though anyway3 表示因果 because so therefore since asaresult4 表示对比 instead not but while ononehand ontheotherhand5 表示解释 forexample suchas thatistosay inotherwords totellthetruth6 表示顺序 firstly first ofall second ly next finally intheend fromthenon7 表示强调 besides especially actually infact8 表示结论 inaword generallyspeaking inshort 关联词 connectionwords Let stry Iamtired Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight Hedidn tgotomovies hewenttotheconcert Welikedoingkindsofsports swimming runningandhiking hestoodup Thenhegotout hewentback hesmiled Though Although instead like First Next Finally Atlast 模考作文 美 beautify 方法四 妙用Proverb 谚语 saying Writingskills 写 的技巧 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于 beginning 和 ending 多用后者 Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell Asthesayinggoes AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 只会用功不玩耍 聪明孩子也变傻 Proverb 谚语 Enjoysomeproverbs 1 Practicemakesperfect 2 Thinktwicebeforeyoudo 4 WheninRome doastheRomansdo 三思而后行 熟能生巧 有志者事竟成 入乡随俗 失败是成功之母 3 Wherethereisawill thereisaway 5 Failureisthemotherofsuccess Enjoysomeproverbs 6 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway 7 AllroadsleadtoRome 8 Nevertoooldtolearn 一天一苹果 医生远离我 条条大路通罗马 活到老 学到老 结尾 提出倡议或号召 Let s Doitnow Don tdoitagain Asstudents weshouldstartfromourselves Don twait Joinusnow Let stakeactionrightnow Don tputitoff Becomeavolunteertoday Saveanimals SaveOurselves Saveourplanet Ifeveryonetriestoprotecttheenvironment theworldwillbeabetterplace 5 Check Spelling 拼写 Tense 时态 Grammar 语法 Handwriting 书写 Punctuationmarks 标点符号 查 通览全文仔细检查 basicrules 写作考试规则 search 审 list 列 add 加 开头和结尾 beautify 美 谚语 例子 check 查 通览全文仔细检查 书写规范 卷面整洁 注意 书写规范 卷面整洁 It syourturn Ifyouwanttowriteaboutaperson 3a Thinkofapersonoraneventfromjuniorhighschoolthatyouwillneverforget Makesomenotesabouthowthispersonoreventchangedyourlifeinsomeway P112 Style 体裁 Person 人称 Tense 时态 记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时 Ifyouwanttowriteaboutaperson Thefirsttimeyoumeet Theperson Appearance personality Thingshappenedtoyou Howhe shehelpedyou Howyou vebeenchanged Whatyouwanttotellhim her 据实描写 适当发挥 Ifyouwanttowriteaboutanevent Whenandwhere Theevent Whathappened Yourfeelings Whathappenedlater Howyou vebeenchanged Whatyouwanttotellhim her 3b Writeapassageaboutthepersonoreventyouthoughtaboutin3a Describetheperson event Explainhowyoufeelaboutthisperson event Describehowthisperson eventhaschangedyourlife SamplewritingThepersonfrommyjuniorhighschooldaysthatIwillneverforgetisMrs Wong myEnglishteacherinGrade7 WhenIfirststartedGrade7 Iwasshyanddidnotdaretospeaktoanyone MyEnglishwasnotverygoodandIfeltnervouswhenIhadtoanswerquestionsinclass IwouldhaveproblemsspeakingeventhoughIknewtheanswer Ifeltquiteunhappywithmyself OnedayMrs Wongspoketomeafterclass Sheencouragedmetospeakslowly ShealsotoldmethatshebelievedIcouldspeakwellifIpracticemore Iwastouchedbywhatshesaidanditmademeworkharderonmyspeakingskills Mrs WongcontinuedtoencouragemeandIbecameevenmoreconfident IimprovedsomuchthatIwonanEnglishspeec