八下Unit 3 Writing 课件.ppt

人教版八年级下册Unit3 Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom SectionB3a 3b 青泥湾中学刘环 1 Tolearntoexpressyouropinionsabout choresorhousework 2 Toimprovethewritingskills3 Tolearntosharethehouseworkwithourparentsandcommunicatewiththem TeachingAims dothedishes foldtheclothes cleanthelivingroom takeouttherubbish sweepthefloor makethebed Discussion Doyouthinkchildrenshoulddochoresathome Whyorwhynot Ithinkchildrenshoulddochoresbecauseitteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves Ithinkchildrenshouldnotdochoresbecause 1 独立 developchildren sindependence learntobeindependent Ifweoften we lllearntobeindependent 2 照顾自我 3 公平 understandtheideaoffairness itisfairforchildrento everyoneshoulddotheirpartin teachchilrenhowtosolveproblems improvetheabilityofsolvingproblems 4 解决问题 Childrenshoulddochores teachkidshowtolookafterthemselves learntotakecareofthemselves 5 保持健康 keepkidshealthyandstrong 1 压力 haveenoughstressfromshool areundertoomuchpressure shouldhavetheirowntimetorelax 2 时间 awasteoftime shouldspendtimeonschoolwork havenotimetodohousework 3 没必要 thereisnoneedforchildren 4 父母的事 It sparentsjobtoprovide Childrenshouldn tdochores havetoomuchhomework it snotnecessaryforchildren DearSir Ithinkchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome Itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool Doingchoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves Forexample myfriend ssongotintoagooduniversity buthehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself Asaresult heoftenfellillandhisgradesdropped Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent thebetteritisfortheirfuture Allinall it sgoodforchildrentodochoresaroundthehouse Let sdoitfromnowon Yourstruly Helen Opinion 点明观点 结构分析 Reasons 说明原因 Conclusion 提出结论 Beginning Mainbody Ending Framework框架 Beginning Opinion Ending Mainbody conclusion reasons Howtowrite 3 4 DearSir Ithinkchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome Itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool Doingchoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves Forexample myfriend ssongotintoagooduniversity buthehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself Asaresult heoftenfellillandhisgradesdropped Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent thebetteritisfortheirfuture It sgoodforchildrentodochoresaroundthehouse Let sdoitfromnowon Yourstruly Helen Beginning Mainbody Ending DearSir Inmyopinion childrenshoulddosomechoresathome Doingchoresisgoodforchildren Firstly itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool Secondly doingchoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves Forexample myfriend ssongotintoagooduniversity buthehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself Asaresult heoftenfellillandhisgradesdropped Thirdly theearlierkidslearntobeindependent thebetteritisfortheirfuture Allinall it sgoodforchildrentodochoresaroundthehouse Let sdoitfromnowon Yourstruly Helen Beginning Mainbody Ending Tip1 Frameandcontent 结构与内容 Tip2 Goodlanguage 语言 DearSir Inmyopinion childrenshoulddosomechoresathome Doingchoresisgoodforchildren Firstly itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool Secondly dochoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves Forexample myfriend ssongotintoagooduniversity buthehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself Asaresult heoftenfellillandhisgradesdroped Thirdly theearlierkidslearntobeindependent thebetteritisfortheirfuture Allinall it sgoodforchildrentodochoresaroundthehouse Let sdoitfromnowon Yourstruly Helen Beginning Mainbody Ending Tip1 Frameandcontent 结构与内容 Tip2 Goodlanguage 语言 doing 时态 dropped 拼写 Tip3 Correctgrammar 语法 Tip4 Handwriting 书写 Writing Ithinkchildrenshould shouldn tdosomechoresathome Inmyopinion itis Iagree Idisagreethat Ithinkitisfair unfairforchildrento DearSir Yourstruly DearSir Inmyopinion childrenshoulddosomechoresathome Doingchoresisgoodforchildren Firstly itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool Secondly doingchoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves Forexample myfriend ssongotintoagooduniversity buthehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself Asaresult heoftenfellillandhisgradesdropped Thirdly theearlierkidslearntobeindependent thebetteritisfortheirfuture Allinall it sgoodforchildrentodochoresaroundthehouse Let sdoitfromnowon Yourstruly Helen Beginning Mainbody Ending Tip1 Frameandcontent 结构与内容 Tip2 Goodlanguage 语言 Tip3 Correctgrammar 语法 Tip4 Handwriting 书写 Contentandframe 内容和结构 Goodsentences phrases words 好词 好句 Missingwords 漏词 Mistakes 错误 总体评价 Excell