英语人教版八年级下册Unit 5 Section B 3a-3b Writing.ppt

Unit5 Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame 湖南省怀化洪江市实验中学 英语人教版八年级下册第五单元 授课教师 李萍 Watchavideo AFreetalk Answerthefollowingquestions WhatisAron 2 Whathappenedtohim 3 Whenandwheredidithappen 4 Howlongdidhestaythere 5 Whatdidhedoafterhiswaterranout 6 Whatcanwelearnfromhim Aronisamountainclimber Heisinterestedinmountainclimbing OnApril26 2003whenhewasclimbinginUtah hisarmwascaughtundera360 kilorock Hestayedthereforfivedays Butwhenhiswaterranout heusedhisknifetocutoffhalfhisrightarm Afterthat heclimbeddownthemountainstofindhelp IthinkAronissogreat Hisstorytellsusthatwhenweareinadifficultsituationweshouldmakeagooddecision Lifeisthemostimportantintheworld Who Whenandwhere How Why What Aronisamountainclimber Hisarmwascaughtundera360 kilorock OnApril26 2003 inUtah Forfivedays Heusedhisknifetocutoffhalfhisrightarm Whenweareinadifficultsituationweshouldmakeagooddecision Doyouhaveanyunforgettable 难忘的 eventsinyourlife Yourparentsboughtyouanewcomputer Youheardthatyougotthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest Yougotaletterfromyourbestfriend Yourclasswoninthesingingcompetition ArtFestival Youhadagreatbirthdayparty Freetalk Askyourfriends What syourunforgettableevent Whendidithappen Whatwereyoudoingatthattime Makeasurvey Asample MyparentsboughtacomputerformeonJuly3 2016 Iwascleaningmyroomwhentheyshowedittome 3aMakeanoteaboutaneventyourememberwell October19 2016 May10 2016 May8 2017 May16 2017 SpeechContest December28 2016 ArtFestival SingingCompetition 3aMakeanoteaboutaneventyourememberwell October15 2003 YangLiwei August21 2016 May12 2008 April4 2017 1 First writeabouttheevent whenandwhereithappened 2 Then writeaboutwhatyouandyourfriendsweredoingwhenthiseventhappened 3 Then writeaboutwhythiseventwasimportant Pre writingWritingguidelines写作方法指导 Pre writingWritingguidelines写作方法指导 1 首段 概括交待事件发生的时间 地点 人物等信息 2 中心段 交待细节 注重在how 交待细节时应注意的事项 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题 因此 在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容 从而点明文章中心 3 结尾段 可适当发表一些评论 Post writing Checkinyourgroupandshow 一 Sswritetheirownarticlesandcheckitcarefullybythemselves 二 Changeyourarticlewithyourpartner 三 Givepointsandcorrectthemistakes 四 Choosesomearticlesandsharethemwiththewholeclass Givepointsandcorrectthemistakes 五 Handinthearticle Peer check 同伴互改 总分 10分 注意使用修改字符 优美句子 漏词 错处 去掉 语法错误G 人称错误P 时态错误T