怎样扩展英语句子.ppt

HOWTOENLARGEENGLISHSENTENCES 怎样扩展英语句子 扩句是在基本句型的基础上 添加各种修饰成分 使句子得到扩展 即根据表达的需求增加定语 状语 同位语等成分 或者举例子补充细节内容 或者添加谚语俗语等 1 Marywasa n girl 形容词 2 Shesmiled 副词 3 Tomlikedher 副词 4 Hegaveherapicture 定语从句 5 Sheputthepictureonthewall 状语从句 beautiful happily secretly thathehaddrawnforher sothatshecouldseeitconveniently 方法一添加修饰成分 形容词 副词 不定式短语 分词短语 介词短语 定语从句 状语从句等 Marywasabeautifuland girl Tomand likedherverymuch Theysoonbecamegoodfriends OnMary sbirthday Tomgaveherapictureand Shesmiledhappily themandputthepictureonthewall clever Jack abunchofroses accepted 方法二添加并列成分 Jackwasrich Hehadhisowncompany Hemadeafortune HeboughtMaryadiamondring NeitherJacknorTomknewwhatMarythought DuringthatnightbeforeMary sbirthday JackhadadreaminwhichheaskedMarytomarryhim Duringthesamenight Tomcouldn tgettosleepuntilhefinisheddrawingthepictureofMaryfromhismemory WhatpresentwouldJackgiveMary 方法三构成并列句 用并列连词and so but while for 因为 等 Jackwasrich hehadhisowncompany madeafortune heboughtMaryadiamondring neitherJacknorTomknewwhatMarythought DuringthatnightbeforeMary sbirthday JackhadadreaminwhichheaskedMarytomarryhim Tomcouldn tgettosleepuntilhefinisheddrawingthepictureofMaryfromhismemory for and so but while WhoWouldMaryChoose Afterherbirthdayparty Marycouldn thelp lookingatthepicturenowandthen becauseinhereyes lookingatherselfinthepicture waslike lookingatasuperstaronthescreen Tosee is tobelieve Thepictureproved thatTomhadatalentforpainting and herchoosinghimasherboyfriend wasawisedecision 方法四使用V ing短语 不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语 宾语或表语等 that Summary 扩展句子的方法 方法一 添加修饰成分 方法二 添加并列成分 方法三 构成并列句 方法四 使用V ing短语 不定式短语或名词性从句作主语 宾语或表语等 Practice ItwasobviousthatJackwasunhappy WhatmadehimangrywasthatthediamondringhehadboughtforMary sbirthdaywasrefusedbyher WhenhetoldMarythatnotonlyhewasmorehandsomethanTom butalsohehadacar aflatandmoremoney Marysaidsoftlybutfirmly Iamveryverysorry Jack Youshouldknowthefactthatlikingyoudoesnotmeanlovingyou Tohavemoneyisnottohaveeverything However weremaingoodfriendsasbefore 1 Step1 Finishreadingthefollowingparagraphinoneminutetogetthemainidea Itwasobvious Jackwasunhappy madehimangrywas thediamondringhehadboughtforMary sbirthdaywasrefusedbyher hetoldMarythatnotonlyhewasmorehandsome Tom butalsohehadacar aflatandmoremoney Marysaidsoftly firmly Iamveryverysorry Jack Youshouldknowthefact likingyoudoesnotmeanlovingyou Tohavemoneyisnottohaveeverything weremaingoodfriendsasbefore that What that When than but that However 1 Fillinthemissingwordsaccordingtothecontext 2 扩展以下句子 1 WearrivedinSanya 2 Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates Wewerehappyandreturnedhome 4 Ilikereadingbooks 5 Weshouldstudyhard Ioftenjoininmanyactivities Igotothelibrary 1 WearrivedinSanya WearrivedinSanya happilyandexcitedly 添加副词 2 Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates whohavethesameinterestasmine 添加定语从句 3 Wewerehappyandreturnedhome Wewerehappyandreturnedhomeafterwehadfinishedcollectingalltherubbish 添加状语从句 4 Ilikereadingbooks Ilikereadingbooks suchasnovels shortstories magazinesandnewspapers 通过举例补充细节 5 Weshouldstudyhard Asweallknow Practicemakesperfect Soweshouldstudyhard 添加谚语 6 Ioftenjoininmanyactivities Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordertocommunicatewithotherstudentsandbroadenmymind 添加目的状语 7 Igotothelibrary Afterschool Duringthesummervacation Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks 使用带高级词汇的目的状语 尽量带上状语 Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonsandenrichingmyknowledge afterschool duringthesummervacation Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks newspapersandmagazines 3 扩句与写作 假如你是一名中学生 请以Mycolorfulschoollife为题 写一篇短文 要求100个字左右 开头和结尾已经给出 不计入总数 要点提示 1 上课认真听讲2 课后完成作业3 经常参加体育锻炼4 去图书馆阅读I mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI mstudyingfor Ihavebeenworkinghard Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool 学生的习作 I mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI mstudyingfor Ihavebeenworkinghard Ilistentotheteachercarefully Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass Ioftentakeexercise Ioftenreadintheschoollibrary Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool 点评 该学生能完整的写出各个要点 没有出现太大的语法错误 表达通顺 单词拼写无误 但是很明显字数不够 没有达到100个字左右 字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题 其次 句子的表达过于平淡无奇 没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇 固定搭配 固定短语等使表达地道 而且 没有使用连接词 上下文的连接不够顺畅 改进方法 步骤一 列要点把要写的内容要点化 做到要点齐全 1 Listentotheteachercarefully2 finishmyhomework3 takepartinexercise4 oftenreadinthelibrary步骤二 造简单句充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充 使其变成一个完整的句子 每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性 语法是否正确 说法是否符合英语表达习惯 1 Ilistentotheteachercarefullyintheclass 2 Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass 3 Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates 4 Idosomereadingintheschoollibrary 步骤三 扩展句子1 IlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay 增加目的状语从句 2 Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass whichisapieceofcakeforme 增加定语从句 3 Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates suchasplayingfootball goingswimmingandplayingbadminton 举例说明 4 IoftendosomereadingintheschoollibrarywhenIhavenothingtodoafterclass 增加时间状语从句 步骤四 润色句子比如可以用高级词汇 短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇 增加习惯表达句式 倒装句 it当形式主语和形式宾语 非谓语动词等 使用多种句式 使其多样化 I mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI mstudyingfor Ihavebeenworkinghard 原文已给 Firstofall 过渡词 itisnecessaryformetolistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay What smore 过渡词 Itakehomeworkseriouslyandfinishitintime whichisapieceofcakeforme Inaddition 过渡词 Inordertostrengthenmybody Ioftentake