Unit 2 What time do you go to school 写作.doc

Unit 2 What time do you go to school? 写作一、单元写作任务假设你的名字叫李力，下面是你一天的主要活动 ，请以My Day为题，根据提示向大家介绍你的活动，可适当发挥。词数50词左右，要求语句通顺，有条理性。get upgo to schoolhave classesdo homeworkgo to bed7:00 am7:30 am8:30 am6:00 pm8:3o pm老师点拨：1. 作为一篇表格作文，从表格中我们发现，主要活动包括：起床，上学，上课，做作业，睡觉，并明确知道每个活动的时间，我们要做的就是把每个活动和时间对应起来，注意活动的先后顺序，正确运用一般现在时，合理运用频率副词，并且要注意时间的拼写及前面介词的使用。2. 在写作过程中，可适当加入一些活动，丰富作文的内容。3. 写这类作文时，要想使文章更加生动，还要注意开头和结尾的语音组合，使文章前后呼应。 写作提纲提纲（1）开头：My name is Li Li. Im a student. I have a busy day every day.介绍活动：A: I getup at B: I go to school at C: At half past eight we. D: I do my home at E: I go to bed at结尾：This is my day. What about you?提纲（2）开头：Im. Do you want to know about my ? My name is . Let me tell you about my 介绍活动：A: I usually get up at B: Then I and go to school at C: My classes begin at I haveclasses every day D: After school, I and begin toat E: After dinner, Iand then结尾：I have aday, but Im very happy. This is my Can you tell me about your? 参考范文My DayMy name is Li Li. Im a student. I am busy every day.I get up at seven oclock and get dressed at five past seven in the morning. Then I have breakfast. I go to school at seven thirty and I go to school at eight oclock. At half eight we have our classes. Every day we have six classes. After school I go home. Ido my homework at six oclock. I go to bed at eight thirty in the evening.This is my day. What about you?二、写法指导请仔细阅读以下题目，修改习作，学习范文。你是姚明的球迷吗？他是著名的篮球运动员，是中国人的骄傲。你知道他每天上午做什么吗？请你根据表格内容写一篇50词左右的短文介绍他的生活。Activities(活动)Time get up5:oorun5:30take a shower6:30eat breakfast7:00listen to music7:45play basketballfrom 8:00 to 11:00习作修改在错误的词下面画一横线，在下面的横线上写出改正后的词。Yao Ming is a famous basketball player. Many young people like him very much. Now he plays basketball in the USA. Do you want to know about his morning?Yao Ming always gets up at five clock every morning. The he runs at five thirty. After that, he usually takes a shower at half past six and then brush his teeth. He eats breakfast at seven. After breakfast, he usually listens to music at a quarter to seven. Then he begins to play basketball. H e always plays basketball from eight to eleven in the morning.Yao Ming have a busy morning, but he loves it.1. 2 3 4 如何使表格文章生动？1注意文章开头和结尾的语言组合，首尾呼应，注意文章的整体性。如范文中的Do you want to know about his morning?和结尾Yao Ming have a busy morning, but he loves it相呼应。2、不少同学在写表格作文时就是生硬的罗列要点，把每个时间和每个活动塞进一个句子里，不注意句式的变换和意思连贯。要使文章生动，可像上文一样适当加入一些承上启下的词语如after that, and then等。合理使用一些斌率副词如上文usually, always等。有时需要加入一些表达自己感受或看法的句子，如文章结尾的Yao Ming have a busy morning, but he loves it.3、最重要的还是将生动性建立在准确表达上。要写准句子当中的动词形式和时间表达，没有准确度，文章就大打折扣。例如上文就犯一些常见的时间表达错误，把oclock写成clock,把七点四十五写成a quarter to seven. 上文还出现一些动词第三人称单数形式错误，如brushes写成brush, has写成have.三、美文欣赏（1）Gina is my good friend. Do you want to know about her life? She gets up at six thirty. Then she always takes a shower and eats a good breakfast. After that, she goes to school at seven fifty. At twelve, she eats lots of fruit and vegetables for lunch. After lunch, she sometimes plays badminton. She always eats ice cream after dinner. She knows its not good for her, but it takes good. In the evening, she does her homework first and then usually takes a walk. At nine thirty, she goes to bed. She has a healthy life and she is very happy.(2)My eveningMy name is Victor. Im a worker. Let me tell you about my evening. I usually get home from work at 6;00 pm. Then I cook dinner for my family-my parents, my sister and my brother. After dinner, I usually watch TV, Play computer games or play chess. I take a shower at about nine thirty. Sometimes, I read some books because I can learn a lot. I go to bed at about ten thirty. This is my evening.How about your evening?四、巩固练习根据图表信息，请以Pauls Day为题写