2013届作文提纲指导1.doc

1.假如你是某家英语报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信，请根据来信内容和所给要点写封回信。Dear editor, Im a hard-working girl and want to perform well in every exam. But in the exams I always feel anxious and make the mistakes that I should have avoided. I am really worried about it. What can I do to improve my performance in exams? Yours faithfully, Wang Li内容提示：1、正确认识考试的意义； 2、要学会缓解考试焦虑； 3、善于总结以前的错误，不懂的地方可以间老师和同学； 4、考前不要熬夜，要保证充足的睡眠： 5、考试时注意合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟时间检查。采用三段成文法。第一段概括引出话题：第二段根据汉语提示写出建议；第三段总结及发表自己的看法。Dear Wang Li, Its good that you know what prevents you From getting satisfactory scores in exams. I would like to offer you some tips. First and foremost, its important for you to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should also learn to relieve test anxiety by listening to music or taking outdoor exercise. Whats more, learning from the mistakes youve made in the past exams is an effective way to avoid making the same ones next time. If you have problems that you cant solve, youd better tuna to your teachers and classmates for help. Besides, enough sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, you should not stay up too late. Last but not least, when you attend an exam, plan how to distribute your time according to the number of questions. Spare a few minutes to review your paper so that you can spot some silly mistakes. Enjoy the challenge each new exam brings. I believe that a good learning habit wi11 eventually help you gain success. Editor1、经典句子（1）Its good that you know what prevent you from getting satisfactory scores in exams.（2）They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.（3） Whats more, learning from the mistakes youve made in the past exams is an effective way to avoid making the same ones next time.（4） Besides, enough sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in an exam.（5） Therefore, during the period of exams, you should not stay up too late.2、推荐素材假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。 Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?写作要点：1、表明了解她的问题：2、帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3、提出至少两条建议 Hi, Sad Mother, I have learned it that your daughter told lies to you. However, you neednt worry. Its common for teenagers to tell lies. I think the reason why your daughter told lies is that you are strict with her and she is afraid that you will be upset and punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, maybe some of her friends lie to their parents and your daughter follows. Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, you should make her know being honest is more important than scores. Secondly, dont be too strict and allow her to make some minor mistakes. Dont be too nervous. Everything wi11 be OK, isnt it?3.阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life. The letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；（2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。A retired teacher received many letters from his former students, one of which was read as not only a thank-you note for his inspirational teaching in his mathematical class, but a warm comfort for his poor physical condition. Reading the passage, Im touched and link my memory to the most supportive mentor of my own - Mr. Xu, an experienced Chinese teacher, was in charge of my class in Senior Three. As the senior year is characterized by running a tight schedule on everyday basis, we students were loaded with heavy coursework, frequent quiz and exams, and pressured by our parents high expectations. Increasingly, I felt a need to consult with Mr. Xu on reducing the amount of our workload so that we could be given more time to digest what we had learned over the past couple years. Unlike some of the stern supervisors, Mr. Xu was open-minded and patient enough to allow me to raise the above argument. “Besides the study efficiency,” he added with a friendly simile, “I also concern for your morale and well-being. So dont you worry; Ill talk to other teachers and see what we can do to help the class decompress.” Thanks to his approval and consistent support, we systematically adjusted our pacing and st