北师大版英语高二选修6学案 Unit17写作指导.doc

如何介绍名人【写作任务】你校英文报将推出“famous people”专栏，现面向全校学生征文。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍印度民族解放运动的领导人、印度国父莫罕达斯甘地（mohandas gandhi）。生卒年份1869-1948主要经历及贡献出身富贵，19岁时赴英继续求学。完成学业后去往南非做法律顾问（legal advisor），因不满印度人所遭受的种族歧视（racial prejudice）而从事维护公民权利方面的工作。回到印度后，发起非暴力（non-violent）抵抗运动，为印度的独立而战。注意：词数120左右。_【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作要求介绍一位名人，属于记叙文的写作范畴。介绍名人的关键之处在于突出其主要经历和贡献。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总分总”模式，对名人的生平、主要事迹和贡献进行介绍，使读者对其有一个较为清晰和全面的了解。本篇写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：总体介绍；第二部分：列举主要经历及贡献；第三部分：总结全文。三、组织语言第一部分：总体介绍。普通表达高级表达. was born on / in . and died on / in . was called . was the first . to .due to . brave actions against ., . became independent and free., who was born on / in . and died on / in ., was known as / considered as / to be . as . was so brave / outstanding / brilliant / distinguished and played a major role in .第二部分：介绍人物的主要经历及贡献。普通表达高级表达. came from a rich family and travelled to . to continue .after . schooling had ended, . went to . to become a(n) . experienced racial prejudice against . and began . led a lot of protests and fought for . came from an upper-class family and travelled to . to further .when . graduated from school, . moved to . to work as a(n) . wasnt happy about racial prejudice against . and devoted much time to . following non-violent methods, . organised a series of protests and led the fight for .第三部分：总结全文。普通表达高级表达in . life, . fought bravely for the freedom of . and will remain respected forever. will be remembered forever for . achievements in . made great achievements in liberating . and will live on in peoples minds and hearts forever. made great contributions to . set a good example for / to .【范文展示】普通范文mohandas gandhi was born in 1869 and died in 1948. he was called the “father of india”. due to his brave actions against the british, his country became independent and free.gandhi came from a rich family and travelled to england to continue his studies at 19. but after his schooling had ended, he went to south africa to become a legal advisor. gandhi experienced racial prejudice against indians there and began his work in civil rights. once back in india, he led a lot of protests and fought for indian independence through non-violent methods.in his life, gandhi fought bravely for the freedom of his people and will remain respected forever.高级范文mohandas gandhi, who was born in 1869 and died in 1948, was considered to be the“father of india”as he was so brave and played a major role in leading the country to become independent and free of british rule.gandhi came from an upper-class family and travelled to england to further his education at 19. however, when he graduated from school, he moved to south africa to work as a legal advisor. gandhi wasnt happy about racial prejudice against indians there and devoted much time to his work in civil rights. once back in india, following non-violent methods, he organised a series of protests and led the fight for indian independence.gandhi made great achievements in liberating his people and will live on in peoples minds and hearts forever.【实战演练】假定你是李华，你校学生会准备办一期主题为“famous people”的英语墙报。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍美国发明家史蒂夫乔布斯（steve jobs）。内容主要包括：生卒年份1955-2011主要经历及贡献1976年和好友steve wozniak一起创办了苹果公司。1984年推出麦金塔计算机（macintosh）并获得成功。1985年因个人原因离开苹果公司。1997年回归苹果公司，之后推出了imac，ipad，ipod和iphone等产品，均受到消费者的欢迎。2011年8月辞职。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_答案steve jobs, a great american inventor, was born in 1955. in 1976, steve jobs, together with his close friend steve wozniak, established apple to sell personal computers. in 1984, the macintosh was introduced, which was a huge success. however, he left apple in 1985 for personal reasons. fortunately, he returned in 1997, and after that a series of products were created such as imac, ipad, ipod and iphone, all of which were very popular and brou