英语《高考专题辅导》专题检测卷(三十四) 短文改错.doc

温馨提示： 此套题为Word版，请按住Ctrl,滑动鼠标滚轴，调节合适的观看比例，答案解析附后。关闭Word文档返回原板块。专题检测卷(三十四) 短文改错(建议用时: 40分钟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(2013吉林模拟)Dear Dad, You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far away from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food. Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving daughter, Mary2(2013大庆模拟)Once a man asked a painter to painting a picture for him. He told the artist he didnt want to any shadows in the picture, just sunshine, but the artist did so. When the man saw the finished picture, he was disappointing. Without shadows, everything in the picture looks flat and unreal. The point of the story is that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to stop and think about that we might learn from the experience. 3(2013玉溪模拟)As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. So dont do anything that will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again. 4(2013天水模拟)Its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter. 答案解析1. 答案：Dear Dad, You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.soI was worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some advices. I hearam advicethat walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far away from home, is it? Why notto walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a leastbasketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too Trylately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is verylate itimportant to have healthy food. Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy! acceptYour loving daughter, Mary1. 【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so. . . that引导结果状语从句。2. 【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。3. 【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。4. 【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。why not+动词原形，表示建议。5. 【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at least至少。6. 【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。7. 【解析】将第十句中的Trying改为Try。此处为祈使句，动词原形开头。8. 【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。9. 【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。10. 【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。2. 答案：Once a man asked a painter to painting a picture for him. He told the artist hepaint didnt want to any shadows in the picture, just sunshine, but the artist did so. Whenandthe man saw the finished picture, he was disappointing. Without shadows, everything disappointedin the picture looks flat and unreal. The point of the story is that we need both lookedshadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun completeto have living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We oftena needlearn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to stoplessonsand think about that we might learn from the experience. what1. 【解析】将第一句中的painting 改成paint。ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事。2. 【解析】将第二句中的to去掉。want后面有名词作宾语。3. 【解析】将第二句中的but 改成and。这里是顺承关系。4. 【解析】将第三句中的disappointing 改成disappointed。主语是人，用disappointed，表示感到失望的。5. 【解析】将第四句中的looks 改成looked。这里是过去时。6. 【解析】将第五句中的completely改成 complete。后面是名词picture，用形容词作定语。7. 【解析】在第五句中的living world 前加 a。泛指一个。8. 【解析】将第六句中的needs 改成need。主语是people，为集合名词。9. 【解析】将第七句中的lesson 改成 lessons。这里指学习各种课程。10. 【解析】将第八句中的that 改成what。what引导宾语从句，作learn的宾语。3. 答案：As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoonTherefore,fromtake a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary.taking classesOtherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minuteandbreak we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have realdo arest, instead of getting even 或 even tiredSo dont do anything that will make you moretoo excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise.pleasingSometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feelSometimesfreshly again. fresh1. 【解析】将第一句中的for改为from。from. . . till固定结构，从到。2. 【解析】将第二句中的take改为taking。构成v. -ing短语作主语。3. 【解析】将第二句中的class改为classes。在两节课之间。4. 【解析】将第三句中的 or改为and。并列关系，与前面的both构成both. . . and. . . 。5. 【解析】将第四句中的did改为do。全文以一般现在时为基础时态。6. 【解析】在第五句中的have后面加a。have a rest休息。7. 【解析】将第五句中的even去掉，或者在even后面加more。even不可以修饰形容词原级，但可以修饰比较级。8. 【解析】将第七句中的pleased改为pleasing。主语是事情，故用v. -ing形式的形容词作表语。9. 【解析】将第九句中的Sometime改为Sometimes。有时。10. 【解析】将第十句中的freshly改为fresh。feel是连系动词，后面用形容词作表语。4. 答案：Its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safetydiehas aroused the widely attention of the public. 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