通信作文写作技巧教案.doc

通信作文写作技巧教案 By吴夏雨教学内容: 通信写作技巧.课型: 写作课.课时: 1课时(40分钟).教具: 电脑.教学目标:知识目标: 学生了解书信的类型：事物信和私人信件，如求职信、投诉信、慰问信、建议信、感谢信等；了解高考重点考查的几类书信:建议信、求职信申请信、投诉信；掌握几种书信常用的写作技巧及其表达方式。能力目标：学生懂得准确运用所学通信写作技巧及其表达方式写信。教学重难点：本课重点是介绍建议信和求职信申请信的写作技巧及其表达句式。教学过程：Step1：(3分钟)课堂导入：介绍通信作文写作在英语高考中的重要性。目的：引起学生对本课内容学习的重视。 T:通信作文，即信件写作，是英语高考重点考查的内容，因此写好通信作文十分重要。这节课我们就来学习通信作文的写作技巧。我们首先来了解信件的种类。信件的种类有：事务书信和私人信件 （求职信application letter、投诉抱怨信letter of complaint、慰问信letter of sympathy、建议信letter of suggestions、说明信letter of explanation、感谢信letter of appreciation等）。书信的格式，（展示ppt：）1） 信头(Heading)；2） 称呼(Salutation)；3） 正文(Body of the letter)；4） 结束语(Complimentary close)；5） 签名(signature)。如： May 17th, 2015Dear Professor Thomas Hawking,_ Your sincerely,Li HuaStep 2: （2分钟）T: 高考英语信件作文一般题目已把信件的称呼、署名写好，考生只需要根据题目要求对正文部分（body of the letter）进行写作。这也就是我们本节课学习的重点内容，信件正文部分写作，内容包括：(展示ppt) 引言部分：自我介绍，及表明写信的目的。 主体部分：具体说明写信人的请求或想法。 结束部分：总结信的内容，表明希望对方做些什么；或写出祝愿话语。信件正文包括这三部分，但具体内容还是根据信件的种类而定。由于时间有限，本节课我们先学习建议信和申请信的写作技巧。Step 3:（8分钟）建议信（letter of suggestions）作文写作：一、简介 (1) 写作目的：提出建议或忠告。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。注意：建议信一般采用一般现在时态及第一人称写作。(2) 正文部分写作方法 引言部分：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。 主体部分：提出具体建议；结束部分：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。 (3) 写作流程图提出建议介绍详情、说明原因说明写信的目的 提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复二、结构第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：(1) 来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议 I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。 I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议套语：我建议Id like to suggest that May I suggest thatIn my opinion I would like to make a recommendation that I am writing to advise you of If I were you, I would 第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复套语：(1) 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.三、示例Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write about 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿 建议信模板Dear , I am very _ to know that . 写信的原因 Im looking forward to . 表示欢迎 Im afraid that . 表述建议理由 Id like to suggest that firstthen _ . 提出建议 I believe this kind of arrangement will_ 有说服力 Moreover，if _ , 补充建议 It is necessary for you to . 提出建议 With_you will . 建议理由 Wish_ 祝愿 Yours， A Letter to a SchoolmateJune 23rd, 2001Dear Xiao Wang,I am very glad to know that you are soon coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎I m looking forward to your arrival.If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule 语气亲切，符合说话人身份关系for visiting a number of places of historic interest. Id like to suggest that you first visit some famous 叙述词和副词places that you have the greatest interest in, such as 一目了然the Palace Museum, the Summer Place（颐和园）, the GreatWall; then you can visit those places you think less then使文章结构important. I believe this kind of arrangement will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏） 使自己的安排具有说服力what you really want to see.I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. 表达良好的祝愿，符合文体要求 Best wishes!Yours， EveStep 4: （15分钟）随堂练习.李华准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平。请发e-mail 告知他学英语的方法。提示：1 养成良好的学习习惯（如. ）2多看英语电视和电影；扩大词汇量（enlarge your vocabulary）；3 要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错。（have confidence in yourself）注意：1 词数为100左右；2 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；3 以第一人称写。Dear Li Hua,Im glad to offer you some advice. Yours,DeanneStep 5. (3分钟)评讲练习、给学生展示范文。【参考范文】Dear Xiao Ming,Im glad to offer you some advice.In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English. Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . Also, reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you. In addition, you should have confidence in yourself. Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, you are sure to improve your English.I hope that my advice will be helpful.Yours,DeanneStep 6:（8分）求职信申请信（application letter）写作一：简介：求职信是求职者写给用人单位的信，目的是让对方了解自己、相信自己、录用自己，它是一种私人对公并有求于公的信函。注意：求职信要用一般现在时和第一人称来组织文章。二结构：求职信正文一般分为三部分：第一部分写你得知招聘信息的渠道和你要申请的职位。From your advertisement in the newspaper, I know that you want I am quite interested in it.I have learnt that you are looking for and I would like to apply for the position.I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of I saw your advertisement on the Internet and I am very interested inI am writing in response to your advertisement for a position as a 第二部分写你申请这个职位的原因，陈述你的个人经历及技能，简明扼要地说明你能胜任的理由。The job sounds particularly interesting and it is the kind of work that I have wanted to do for quite a long time. I am a 15-year-old boy/girl called I have a good knowledge of I have an outgoing personality.Im easy to get along with and willing to help others. I have worked on a I am used to working hard.Im sure I will be able to do it well if I get the job/positon.第三部分：表示感激。I would very much appreciate the chance to talk to you.I can be reached on my mobile at 139I look forward to hearing from you soon.Thank you for your consideration. I wish to get your answer soon.I will appreciate it if I am offered the opportunity.三：示例模板.求职信模板：Dear_，I have just read in the n