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THE MAGAZINE OF GROUP SIX MATH TEEN1 Japans nuclear burst2 Stress and relaxation in life3My plan to exercise4The college English5Gratitude6A letter of Application7On water shortage8A low-carbon lifestyleMEMBER:王扬 王丹丹 苏华丹 秦超 刘青山1Japans nuclear burstRecently Japan is suffering from earthquake and nuclear burst, which has caused great losses in both lives and properities. As we all known, Japan is a small island country, it has no natural resources. So no wonder its a big hurt for Japan.And as we all known, nuclear burst would badly damage peoples life. It would make people suffer illness. And several reasons should be considered to bring about this disaster. Firstly, there is no wonder that the earthquake cause the nuclear burst. Second abnormal weather should be to blame. But after that we need to see what has made the weather in such condition. Obviously, it is the nature has been disturbed and the environment has been damaged.All in all, immediate and effective measures should be taken to deal with such situation. Firstly , we should try our best to help Japanese. Second, scientists should do as possible as they could to reduce the damage of the nuclear burst. And they should work out some ways to improve weather forecast, which could prevent some unnecessary losses. Finally, I think we human being should find a balance between economic and environment protection.（苏华丹）刘青山: The damage of nuclear station attracted all around the worlds attention again. So, a constructive proposal should be given as su huadan said.王扬：层次清晰， 条理清楚！秦超：选词合理，结构整齐！王丹丹：本文主题不很明确，应突出主体部分。但语句通顺。The future of nuclear energyIt is often claimed that nuclear energy is something we cannot do without .This type of energy can be created through nuclear fission and nuclear fusion. Nuclear fission is the splitting of a heavy atom into two or more parts, releasing huge amounts of energy. The release of energy can be controlled and captured for generating electricity. Nuclear fusion involves bombarding hydrogen atoms together to form helium. In the long run, nuclear fusion has greater potential than fission. We live in a consumer society where there is an enormous demand for commercial products of all kinds. Moreover, an increase in industrial production is considered to be one solution to the problem of mass unemployment. Many people believe that nuclear energy provides an inexhaustible and economical source of power and that it is therefore essential for an industrially developing society. There are a number of other advantages in the use of nuclear energy. Firstly, nuclear power, except for accidents, is clean. A further advantage is that a nuclear power station can be run and maintained by relatively few technical and administrative staff. The nuclear reactor represents an enormous step in our scientific evolution and ,whatever the anti-nuclear group says, it is wrong to expect a return to more primitive sources of fuel. However, opponents of nuclear energy point out that nuclear power stations bring a direct threat not only to the environment but also to civil liberties. Furthermore, it is questionable whether ultimately nuclear power is a cheap source of energy. There have ,for example, been very costly accidents in America, in Britain and, of course, in Russia.The possibility of increases in the cost of uranium in addition to the cost of greater safety provisions could price nuclear power out of the market. In the long run, environmentalists argue, nuclear energy wastes valuable resources and disturbs the ecology to an extent which could bring about the destruction of the human race. Thus if we wish to survive, we cannot afford nuclear energy. In spite of the case against nuclear energy outlined above, nuclear energy programmes are expanding. Such an expansion assumes a continual growth in industrial production and consumer demands. However, it is doubtful whether this growth will or can continue.In conclusion, nuclear fusion has much more potential for long term use than the current fission reactors, even though in the short term it may cost a little more to develop. The small price to pay for development of fusion technology seems trivial in comparison to the price of the planet. (秦超) 王扬：文章最后给出了对核利用的一些看法，很有道理。王丹丹：本文结构清晰，分析了核能的未来。但专业词汇太多，有些看不懂。苏华丹：本文语句通顺，结构清晰。而且文末再次点题，很不错。刘青山：The future of nuclear energy is hopeful. I think this energy will be safer and cleaner in short future. So, what we need to do is given scientist more time. Nuclear Technology-Good or Bad?It shorked all of the world that four nuclear power plant had been damaged in Japan. And lots of people worries about the bad influence of it. Recently, many people are afraid of nuclear technology because of the dangers associated with its use. some people voied that nuclear should be baned!On one hand, It is right. But In my opinion, I think It not accuracy. although it is true that nuclear weapons pose the greatest threat to life, the use of nuclear technology for peaceful purposes also carries some serious risks.Nuclear power stations provide an important source of cheap power for many industrialized nations and some developing countries. However, there is always the danger of radiation leaking from these plants.The most worrying aspect of nuclear technology, however, is its use for military purposes. Enough atomic bombs have already been built to completely destroy the planet.In conclusion, nuclear technology certainly has positive uses and is nonetheless dangerous, and, it would have been better if it had never been used to create nuclear weapons. If life on Earth is to continues, all the nuclear nations of the world should agree to disarm as soon as possible. And all we could do is to develop our science and technology of nuclear. Then we could use It safely.(刘青山)王扬：对核技术的利用做出了客观评论。秦超:关于核总有很多评论，本文就这一论题叙述合理，不失为一佳作。王丹丹：本文结构清晰，分析了核能的优点与不足。指出了和核能在今天的巨大作用，很好。苏华丹:本文就自己的观点对核的利用做出了很好的评价。NUCLEAR At present,the topic which people talk most still is nuclear issue.I only know that nuclear is a kind of potential,huge and clean energy,and if nuclear leaked, the damage to the people is huge. Even so, many countries remains committed to extract from the nuclear energy, Japan also is such.But Japan did not think of this earthquake have damaged four nuclear power plants, divulge nuclear alarming number. As we all know,Japan is an island country.It is surrounded by water,so divulge nuclear may spread to other countries by water.China is one of them.This potential problem made China a panic. Many people went to supermarket tobuy salt for a preparation of avoiding diseases. Although my hometown is in the countryside, and is away from Japan, but there are still many people are to buy salt eagerly so that the price of salt was up to 15 yuan even more！Even so,my grandfather also failed to buy salt.So my grandfather said,no salt means no appetite,but salt means gold! But after a few days, salt price tumbled, returned to the original price, everybody panic buying salt,flower bought in high salt is put in the home is the accumulation.So now everyone say,salt is more expensive than pork! Eating it likes to eat money! By this,I know that we cant follow something which doesnt have science evidence!Blind conformity is not necessarily good!（王扬）刘青山：The influence of nuclears damage not only polluted the enviroment.It also appeared peoples heart. Doesnt it good to live with others harmonious? If people learned that, I think the world will be better. 苏华丹：文章有些句子写得很好，思路清晰。但文章有点偏了。秦超：有点偏题了。王丹丹：如秦超所说，本文有点偏离主题。刘青山：文章是有点偏，但有自己的特色。2Stress and relaxation in lifeIn the modern world, as the pace of our life speed up, we are hurrying to go and back from work, competing for well-paid jobs, striving to make more money, and trying hard to be promoted. And then we are losing the art of enjoying leisure and relaxation.We get used to stress that we often take it for granted. And it seems to be a part of our daily life. Without stress, we may find we dont have any motivation in work and study. And life will be very boring. So no wonder if there is no stress in our life , some people will feel unhappy. So I think a proper of stress is good for us.However, if we cant treat stress well, it will become a problem. Thats the reason why some people cant eat and sleep well. In my opinion, the best way to solve these problems is to set up a right attitude towards the pressures in work and life. I think we should find a good chance to relax ourselves when we feel there is too much stress. I think we can go for a walk with our friends, go to see a movie and so on. If we follow all of these, we will enjoy a good life.（苏华丹）刘青山：Modern days, It is true that more and more people faced with enormous pressure. A good sense of pressure appears more important. 王扬：写出了善对压力的好处。秦超:有几个句子不完整，整体不错。王丹丹：本文条理清晰，分析了压力的来源。STRESSI think proper stress is best.Now, I have no stress. In study, I become lazy and always want to delay an like to depend on others! Before I went to college, I didnt like that. Though I know that if I go on like these, my study will fall, and its hard to keep up with the pace of the teachers. My families dont give me stress, they all think it is no need to do that.In my high school, my family also didnt give me stress, but what they did for me let me fell stressful. Especially, my grandfather accompanied me studying. So I gave myself stress, I only wanted to let them happy and let them in my house. When I wanted to give up, I thought of them, I didnt dare to do that! I knew I was their hope. If I gave up, they would be very sad. So I went on studying. Finally, I came here to make my dream come true. They were very happy! At the same time, one of my classmates who was under a lot of pressure, didnt have a good mark. Before College entrance examination, she didnt have a good sleep every day, and she had to sleep in classes. Her spirit was very terrible. We all worried about her, but we didnt know how to help her. Now, Im writing this article, the pictures of my grandparents are appearing in my brain, I ask myself,” Do you want to let them sad?” The answer is “ No”, so from now on, I must give myself properly stress, and let my life become well.Cheer up, yangyang!（王杨）刘青山：This article is full of love. It refects the Chinese studentsspecial pressure. I think we need to care more about our heart.Thenwe could feel happier.苏华丹：本文以自己为例，写出适度的压力对自己是有利的。秦超：距离能跟好的论述主题，不错。王丹丹： 本文很有感情色彩，由此可见，你是一个细于观察生活的人。How to deal with pressureAs we all know, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. Especially as the pace of modern life is getting faster and faster, we seem to have endless work to do and rush for it through day and night. Only death can be completely out of the troubled psychological pressure. Psychologists said In fact, a little bit of stress can give us motivation and excitement to achieve goals successfully. However , according to the scientific research, if one continue exposed to stress, his health is more likely being endangered. On the one hand, it is easier to get the heart disease and high blood pressure, on the other hand, it is more possible to become depressed and anxious. Therefore, as we cant avoid the stress, for the sake of our mental and physical health, we should learn to deal with stress, fight with stress and defeat stress. But how to conquer it?As far as Im concerned, the following steps maybe can be used to fight with stress from difficulties and problem. Firstly, Change Your Mindset. If you walk around all day saying Im so stressed, you will be. Positive thinking is crucial to relieving the mental stress. Our minds are so powerful that we can actually increase our stress by the way we think and the things we speak. If you develop a new mindset that is positive in nature and optimistic, studies have shown this to be a reliever of stress. Meditation is a prime way to change your mindset and refocus on the positives and what is really important. Try yoga or visualization imagery to assist. Secondly,connect with others. Being by yourself is fine, but being lonely is different. A good way to combat sadness, boredom and loneliness is to seek out activities involving others. Consider being a participant! There are lists of organizations available in the front of the campus directory. Or you may choose to offer your services to neighborhood or volunteer organizations. Help yourself by helping other people. You can contact the Campus and Community Involvement office at 471-3065 to learn more about these opportunities. Thirdly,know your limits. A major source of stress is peoples efforts to control events or other people over whom they have little or no power. When confronted with a stressful situation, ask yourself: is this my problem? If it isnt, leave it alone. If it is, can you resolve it now? Once the problem is settled, leave it alone. Dont agonize over the decision, and try to accept situations you cannot change. There are many circumstances in life beyond your control, starting with the weather and including in particular the behavior of others. Consider the fact that we live in an imperfect world. Know your limits. If a problem is beyond your control and cannot be changed at the moment, dont fight the situation. Learn to accept what is, for now, until such time when you can change things.Whats more, Having a good living habit is also important .Dont forget to keep balance in diet and continue exercising. Physical Fitness is a good basis to overcome psychological pressure. Sports may be another feasible measure to relieve pressure. Routine exercises make us vigorous to settle down difficulties, while we can meet new sporting friends whose interest are similar to us.At last, if you have try your best, just let it go. Sometimes the stress is unnecessary especially when you have done all you can. Of course,these are not necessarily the only ways to solve the problem, different people may have different ways to reduce stress . Stress is just a part of our daily life. Life is always wonderful and there are many other activities that can make our life rich and full.（秦超）刘青山：It is true that only death could clear the psychological pressure。“Only death can be completely out of the troubled psychological pressure” sometimes， we neednt to pay too much of attention on it.王扬：条理清晰写出了多种解决问题的方法。王丹丹：本文的观点与建议太棒了，我举双手赞成。苏华丹;本文写出了对压力的客观评论，而且建议很不错。3My plan to exerciseI like running, playing basketball and playing badmiton. I also like dancing, including ballet, HipHop. However what I like most is yoga.Actually, I have started to exercise since this semester began. I run four rings everyday at about 10 oclock p.m, now has increased to six. After that, I will take a shower. Fially, I will do some yoga. Then, sweat lies on my face. But I feel relaxed and comfortable. Besides, I will play basketball and badminton duing weekends. I might as well tell you: the original purpose for me to do exercise is to lose weight. But now, I put my health at the first place. I think spring is the reason during which time we grow taller easily. Doing exercise also contribute to our height. So I will insist on my plan to keep fit and live a healthy life. My dear friends! If you havent started to do exerise. I feel pitiable for you. If you have started, go on! Come on! Everyone of us can live a healthy life. (王丹丹)刘青山：I also have a great interest on yoga. And I think the author is a strong purpose girl. So I think she will live her goal!苏华丹：文章写得很好。计划也非常诱人。希望你能坚持你的目标，加油！秦超：Yoga is a interesting way of exercise. Your plan is so short and the reason is too long.王扬：我们一起努力吧！ My plan of doing exercisesI think do exercises everyday is very imporant, so make a good plan is very necessary. In the college, except studing, we could spend our free time doing what I like. But every week, the number of classes is around 40. Compared with other students, we are very busy and tired. In the free time, we have to do our homework. Though everyday wo go to bed very late, we still have no time to do exercises. If we go on this for 4 years, our health will be bitted. So from now on, we shoud make a good plan to keep healthy. Now I can tell you something about my plan. And please give some advice to me. Firstly, get up before 7:00 a.m, then go to playground to run rings. By doing this I can concertrate on my study easily and can keep me from sleeping in class. Afer this, I will go to have a breakfast,then go to classroom. A new day is coming! Secondly, I should regard walk on the road as an exercise. At daynight, when I walk on he road, I should walk slowly and look up at the sky and see the new leaves of trees becoure these can make me happy and forget the tiredness.Finally, at night, after I finish my homework, I can go to a walk to relax myself in campuls. And tring to find the beauty of surroundings. Its useful to my sleep. A days exercises are over. What about you? And how do you think about my plan?(王扬)苏华丹：Your plan is very good. I hope you can continue.刘青山：The plan seems attractive and since we get to univercity. We exercise little. So keeping a exercise plan is very important. I hope you can make it.王丹丹：I think your plan is very detiled. Everyone want to livea healthy life. Insist on your plan, you will healthier.秦超：your reason is too long. The planis pretty good.My plan of exercise Nowadays, less and less people likes to take exercises. As for me, I dont like to take exercise. Because Im too lazy and I dont have tim