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分论点常用句型(正面)1. There is no denying that international business has the potential to stimulate local economy to a large extent. (促进经济)stimulate= encourage, promote, boost, accelerate, enhance, strengthen, improve2. It is universally acknowledged that the multitude of languages in use today is a reflection of the distinct cultures that exist within many nations. (语言反映文化)There is no denying that museums and galleries offer many opportunities for children to enjoy their extra curricular activities. (丰富课外娱乐)Furthermore, museums and galleries have the potential to boost the prosperity for the local economy. (促进经济)Given the competitive nature of society, talented individuals with multiple skills are welcomed by the majority of organizations.(将来发展)Teaching practical skill at school has the potential to make children more independent when they grow up. (独立性)It is widely acknowledged that the airline industry contributes a lot to help their customers save time on traveling, especially for the long-distance trips.(时间/金钱) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint.（独立性） First, Individual efficiency in business transaction and banking will be greatly enhanced.（效率-时间/金钱） Furthermore, telecommuting can spare workers the everyday chore of traveling back and forth to work. （效率-时间/金钱） In the first place, it affords tourists opportunities to experience a foreign culture firsthand.（文化） To begin with, English as a global lingual franca facilitates cross-cultural communication. （便利） Granted, global cultural homogeneity has immensely enriched the lives of the denizens in developing countries. (休闲娱乐) Children, if growing up in a multicultural society, are more likely to embrace different cultures and values. (学习促进/阻碍)如何还在在多元文化的社会中成长,他们更容易接受不同的文化和价值观. It is an undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries. (金钱) The ultimate financial value of working at home is that if managing time well, the home worker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace. （效率-时间/金钱） 在家里工作的最大经济价值是：如何时间安排好的话，他/她在家做的工作可以比在单位做的更多 The convenience and widespread availability of cars account for their popularity among todays young people.汽车的便捷性和普遍性使其非常受当今人们的欢迎 One of the most important points is that online shopping enables people to go beyond normal business hours.（效率-时间/金钱） Stress can be destructive but it also can be constructive if handled well. 精神（放松/压力）压力具有破坏性,但若处理得当也可称为动力 Armed police have an essential deterrent effect on potential offenders. (犯罪)警察配枪对潜在犯罪有威慑作用 Advertising has a positive role to play in modern society, helping us choose between competing goods. Many adverts are drawing our attention to products with new features, for example more powerful computers, telephones which are also cameras and music players, or foods with added vitamins. (比功能)Other adverts try to compete on price, helping us seek out the cheapest or best value products. (比价格) (时间/金钱-方便) From a social aspect, current employers show a tendency to recruit youngsters who can do a various array of jobs within a single position rather than job specialists.(将来发展-就业) Having a pet is great for children. It teaches them to take responsibility for something other than themselves. Caring for an animal makes them more thoughtful about the world and others. It also keeps them fitter, and makes them more dependable. (责任/爱心/独立) Routinely arming the police is an effective deterrent to criminal behaviour. A failure to routinely arm the police gives armed criminals a strong advantage in terms of their ability to threaten and commit violence without any corresponding risk to themselves. （犯罪） All forms of sport and entertainment that exploit non-human animals should be banned; animals, like us, can feel fear, stress, exhaustion, and pain. To use animals for our own amusement, whether hunting them for sport or making them perform for us, is demeaning to ourselves as well as to them. Being a species with a great amount of power and control over other species brings with it a responsibility not to abuse that power. Using animals in sports and entertainment is an abuse of our position of responsibility and brutalises society towards animals and nature. （动物权利） People may feel safer when they see armed police, especially if they perceive them as a response to a heightened risk. （安全） The beauty of a fit, healthy, well-proportioned human form is something from which we can all take pleasure, and beauty contests, along with other forms of art, are vehicles which enable us to do so. （休闲娱乐） An argument that highlights the economic costs of banning blood sports is analogous to arguing for the continuation of slavery because slave traders might lose their livelihoods. （金钱）-可以和取消吸烟作比较 Elderly and lonely people can have better mental health if they share their life with a pet. And walking a dog or riding a horse gives healthy exercise to hundreds of millions of people. (健康) Boarding schools allow children a safe space in which to exert greater control and independence over their daily lives. Teachers and staff can supervise and support but they are unlikely to be over-protective. This can be a great preparation for university or work away from home in later life as it provides an intermediate step between childhood and full independence. （独立性） Being in school all the time allows children full access to its facilities. This is good for creating a learning environment as pupils can have access to libraries, computers and teachers while doing their homework. Similarly it is easier to take part in extra-curricular activities such as plays, sports matches and art if they do not have to arrange travel home late at night or after the school buses have left. （方便） Living with peers of their own age, round the clock, teaches children how to get along with each other and compromise. A variety of characters and interests must be accommodated, teaching children tolerance and compromise in a regulated environment. This can be especially helpful for working with university or company colleagues in the future. Furthermore, many boarding schools celebrate diversity as international students with different cultural, religious and ethnic backgrounds frequently make up a significant minority of the student body. （人际关系） The primary purpose of a justice is the prevention of crime and the protection of the innocent. It is to achieve these purposes that children should not be entitled to lenient punishment. The purposes of punishment are proportional retribution, deterrence and prevention of crime. (犯罪-punishments for child offenders) Particularly important is the way a boarding school may provide relief for parents from the day to day strains of dealing with a childs problems, making time spent together more pleasant. Sometimes time away from the home benefits the child whose problems may be caused or exacerbated by troubles at home, for example divorce, bereavement or illness of a parent. On a merely practical level, parents whose work requires them to travel extensively, live in remote areas or abroad may find boarding school a useful way to provide stability and continuity in their childs education. （减轻压力） Why should the taxpayer bear the cost of supporting a murderer for an entire lifetime? (金钱) Boxing is still a sport dominated by the working classes and a ban would rob many people with the potential to become rich and successful boxers of that opportunity. Cassius Clay was a garbage-man and instead became a global legend. When asked in a recent interview, if he would do anything differently or if he had any regrets he answer was a resolute No. Many fighters accept their injuries as just the flip side of the coin of success. （金钱） The principle of capital punishment is that certain murderers deserve nothing less than death as a just, proportionate and effective punishment. Murderers forgo their rights as humans at the moment when they take away the rights of another human. By wielding such a powerful punishment as the response to murder, society is affirming the value that is placed upon the right to life of the innocent person. (权利/平等) Providing condoms to students in public education programs will reduce the incidence of underage pregnancy and the spread of sexually transmitted diseases. If one accepts the premise that condoms are an effective means of prevention, it stands to reason that their distribution could have a significant impact. （健康） Providing condoms to students is a wise investment of government funds. A fortune is spent by world governments each year addressing the public health problems created by risky sexual behaviour. The cost of raising the many children created through unintended pregnancies over a lifetime can be astronomical. The cost of treating a patient with HIV can be enormous. （金钱） Corporal punishment, specifically spanking or similar actions, can be an effective punishment and deterrent for childish misbehaviour. If children do not respond seriously to verbal warnings or light punishment from teachers or parents, then a short, sharp stimulus, which inflicts pain but no lasting damage, is the last resort to cause the child to associate misbehaviour with punishment - a crucial association in child development. （威慑） Language determines the way people express themselves and, arguably, the way they think. For example, Chinese and Japanese have no past, present or future tenses. The existence of a variety of languages results in varying modes of expression and is consequently a stimulus to creativity. This is of benefit to a nation as a whole. (语言) Language is a type of cultural heritage. We already recognise the right of groups to preserve parts of their history by granting money for museums and the restoration of buildings of historic value. There is considerable cultural capital stored in languages. Understanding a language is often the key to appreciating the full meanings and allusions of a groups heritage; for example, Aboriginal history is predominantly oral. Allowing a language like this to die out would cut off a people from their past. (传统) Free nursery provision would enable many women to return to the workforce, which would be good for them and their children, as even a part-time job for a mother can often be enough to lift a family out of poverty, especially if she is a lone parent. (减轻压力/父母) Free nursery provision ensures a good start in education for all children by providing a more stimulating environment than parents can achieve at home, with music, books, and art and craft activities alongside physical play. An early start can be made on educational basics such as literacy and numeracy, allowing every child a greater chance to achieve their full potential. (学习促进) Government funding of nursery places is an investment in the future with long-term economic and social benefits. Children learn to interact well with others of their own age and with different adults, and become used to a structured environment, helping them fit into school better as they get older. It provides opportunities for all that currently only the better-off can afford, and will thus act as a social leveller. (人际交流) An incentive would be an effective way to encourage more widespread use of non-petrol cars. New technologies can be expensive to research and are often prohibitively expensive in their early stages, before there is a critical mass of adoption. This is a vicious circle that means that as the dominant fuel, petrol has an inbuilt defensive advantage against new, possibly competitive rivals. A form of incentivisation would provide an effective method of negating this disadvantage faced by non-petrol cars, even if it was only used during the initial phases before the alternatively fuelled cars were more widely used. (将来发展-Should the government use tax or policy to encourage the use of cars which are not fueled by petrol? ) Humans and some animals can have a special relationship of friendship and care. Keeping a pet adds to the quality of life of both the owner and the animal. The animal receives shelter, is well fed and looked after. It is likely to live much longer than similar wild animals, and will have better health. The owner can enjoy the total love of another creature (with some pets at least). All owners gain from the interest and stimulus which comes from caring for and playing with their pet. (人和宠物的关系) Participation in sport promotes health. Government is, or should be, concerned with the health of its citizens. Encouraging physical activity in the young through compulsory PE fights child obesity and contributes to forming lifelong habits of exercise. This doesnt have to be through traditional team sports; increasingly schools are able to offer exercise in the form of swimming, gymnastics, dance, weight training, use of a multigym, aerobics, etc. (健康) Physical Education is an important part of holistic schooling. PE is an aspect of school being about more than just book learning it is about educating the whole person, a holistic education that betters us in an all-round sense, rather than a merely academic experience. Some aspects of physical education are vital for future wellbeing, e.g. being able to swim, learning to lift heavy weights safely. Sport shouldnt be seen as an alternative to academia, an either/or it should be a part of every students life in addition to their other studies. (将来发展) Sport helps to forge character. Playing team sports builds character and encourages students to work with others. It teaches children how to win and lose with good grace and builds a strong school spirit through competition with other institutions. It is often the experience of playing on a team together which builds the strongest friendships at school, which endure for years afterwards. (团队合作,塑造个性) Tourism vastly increases income to a particular area or country, not only via direct spending but also through taxation and the purchase of luxury goods which creates a larger market than would be possible with purely local spending. In many less developed countries tourism acts as an alternative to cash crops, improving terms of trade and creating a more diversified economic base. Revenue received from tourists can be reinvested in improving otherwise poorly funded infrastructure, both in areas visited and in the rest of the country too. (经济) The multiplier effect of spending works through the economy to sustain levels of employment and increase labour market flexibility. If local people are employed in the industry then they are more likely to accept the demands tourists make. (将来发展-就业) As early childhood is the most formative period of development for a child it is important that a mother has as much time to devote to her children as possible. By staying at home mothers could ensure that the next generation had the best start in life, hopefully averting future problems and providing a benefit to society as a whole. (将来发展) If everyone spoke the same language it would be much easier for people to move and work in different countries or to conduct trade with each other. This could promote trade and re-distribute wealth between countries. This already happens in countries which speak the same languages, for example the outsourcing of call-centre work from the UK and America to India where they have a high level of spoken English (方便) Wikipedias goal is to make all human knowledge freely available to everyone in the world with an internet connection. It already has over 1.5 million articles in English alone. This is more than ten times those of Encyclopedia Britannica, its nearest printed rival. Traditional reference works were incredibly expensive, which meant that knowledge was restricted to the wealthy, or those with access to well-funded public libraries. Wikipedia liberates that knowledge. (金钱/平等) Introducing a cap on working hours would reduce unemployment. Because some workers currently work more than would be allowed after the introduction of such a rule, afterwards there would be a need to recruit new workers to do the work which was formerly done by workers in their “additional” hours. （就业） A maximum working week would be economically beneficial. A maximum working week would improve productivity. Inevitably there are some inefficiencies in any economic process. Although a maximum working week would not remove all these, the event of its introduction and the fact that it would focus peoples minds on tangible achievements within a limited working time would improve productivity. (效率) A maximum working week would improve the quality of work done. If workers worked shorter hours or fewer days, when they did work they would likely be more alert and make fewer mistakes. This would significantly reduce the “Friday afternoon” syndrome of sloppy (and sometimes dangerous) work resulting from workers tiredness. By capping the amount of time they spend in the workplace, workers would be given better opportunities to develop their professional or personal interests outside it. This should result in a better educated, healthier, more rounded and hence more globally competitive workforce.(放松压力) There exists a current problem that many talented athletes cannot devote themselves full time to the extensive training required to compete at Olympic level, instead they often have to work part-time to fund their living and training costs. (金钱) The formative years of children are the best time to expose them to the company of the other gender, in order that they may learn each others behaviour and be better prepared for adul