四级观点对比型作文.doc

对比题型 1. 定义：对比选择型文章，要求考生就题目中提到的某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点，然后将两种观点进行对比，并表明自己的看法和立场，或做出选择。所提出的两种观点有时并没有对错之分，有时也可以根据常识判断出某一观点错误或者不成立。其常见形式是：一、目前存在某个问题，人们有不同的观点；二两种观点各自的理由；三、我的看法。大家看一下往年的一些考试题目，体会一下该题型的特点。结构公式陈列观点或选择A主题句：提出要讨论的主题，引出两种不同的观点或选择。如：简述要讨论的主题，引出对其的不同观点或选择/When it comes to 谈论主题，there is no complete agreement among people。扩展句一：指出一种观点或选择如：Some people think/ prefer to/ choose 观点或选择A。扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。扩展句三：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。第一段 观点或选择B主题句：转折引出另一个观点或选择。如：However, there are many others who 观点或选择B。扩展句一：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。如：In their opinions/ They maintain/ they point out 观点或选择B的第一点理由。扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。如：Besides, 观点或选择B的第二点理由。第三段“我”的观点或选择主题句：综合两种观点或选择，说明“我”的观点或选择。如：As for me, I agree“我”的观点或选择。/ Weighing up these two arguments/ choices,“我”的观点或选择。扩展句一：阐述“我”的第一点理由。扩展句二：阐述“我”的第二点理由。结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。如：Therefore/ To conclude, 作出总结。例：（2005年12月）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点。2. 校园是否应对旅客开放，人们看法不同。3. 我认为参考范文Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people think that university campus should welcome the visiting of tourists. They say that being closed to tourists may make students isolated from the outside world. Also, they maintain refusing tourists to violate the spirit of openness.However, there are many others who do not favor the university campus being open to tourists. In their opinion, tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students normal study. Besides, they argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university.Weighing up these two arguments, I think a university should be an open place. By visiting the university campus, tourists can feel the rich cultural atmosphere. In addition, college students can have more chance to contact the people and the world outside the campus. Therefore, the university campus should be ready to embrace the tourists all over the world.实例1-1999年6月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:1、有人认为读书要有选择2、有人认为应当博览群书3、我的看法 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? When it comes to the choice between reading selectively or extensively, different people have different opinions. Some argue that we should be careful in choosing reading materials, while others maintain that we can benefit more from reading as many kinds of books as possible. The first group have their arguments as follows. On the one hand, our time is limited, therefore, we have to put our efforts in the most important books. On the other hand, we need specialized knowledge in order to find a good job.However, other people believe we should read extensively. For one thing, extensive reading can broaden our horizon. For another, we need a broad education to better understand the world around us. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to read extensively because I have a wide range of interests, such as in literature, in computer science and so on. As a result, extensive reading may satisfy my need and make me happy. 练习篇 （第一次四级模拟考试）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的2)阐述他们各自的考虑3)表明你的看法【行文思路】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。【背诵范文】High Salaries or Career Development?There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. 1Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. 1Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.2People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. 3With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression 4due to lack of enough money. 2However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. 5It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction 6while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, 7generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will 8give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.【点评】1用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。2用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。3“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。4“因为缺钱”。5强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。6while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。7“一般来说”。8“选择”。 3. 对比选择型作文模版模板一1) When asked about / When it comes to _, different people will offer different opinions. 2) Some people take it for granted that _. 3) In their opinion, _. 4) Besides, _. 5) By contrast, others hold that _. 6) They maintain that _. 7) And _. 8) Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first opinion/choice. 9) For