【原创】考研作文范文梳理总结(一).doc

（一）范文：Have you ever noticed the “great changes” of your hometown? If you have, you may sense the same regret and sorrow as the retired man does in the pictures. A newly-built bridge over the river attracts the attention of him and spurs his excitement. However, leaning against the bridge, he finds no water flowing in the river.The author of the cartoon, through the sight of the aged man, is imparting us the notion that never sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits. Admittedly, economic development labels the advancement of society! However, never place too much emphasis on it, or we may go to an extreme! Any cases? Sure! Havent you ever noticed that chimneys brought big bucks to enterprises but big troubles to the general public, foggy air for one? Havent you ever found that urbanization offers people more houses but less comfort? Why are we so zealous of “destroying our surroundings”? Arent we doing so to exhibit our “achievements” of civil construction?At the end of the day, we have to find a way out! Only with the combination of transforming of economic planning, guiding from experts, and supervising from the general public, can the situation turn optimistic! Currently, department concerned, aided by experts, are working forcefully to boost the green-economy. However, if there were also effective supervision from the general public, which requires assistance from the mass media, economic construction would go green and reasonable.（二）范文解读：Have you ever noticed the “great changes” of your hometown? If you have, you may sense（闪光词汇，可以用来替换find） the same regret and sorrow （这种列举能力是我们大多数考生很欠缺的，这需要我们平时细致的收集、积累。）as the retired man does in the pictures. A newly-built bridge （很闪光却很简单的语法结构A newlybuilt+名词）over the river attracts（也可以换成draws） the attention of him and spurs（词典中背了那么久，现在知道它的其中一种表达了吧：spur ones excitement） his excitement. However, leaning against the bridge(两个句子主语相同，省去主语，用现在分词做状语), he finds no water flowing in the river.The author of the cartoon, through the sight of the aged man（主谓断开的插入语表达）, is imparting （闪光词汇，可替换tell等）the notion that never sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits（背：规范表达）. Admittedly（高级连接词，相当于there is no doubt that）, economic development labels(超闪光词汇) the advancement of society! However, never place too much emphasis on it, or we may go to an extreme! Any cases? Sure! Havent you ever noticed that chimneys brought big bucks to enterprises but big troubles to the general public, foggy air for one? Havent you ever found that urbanization offers people more houses but less comfort? Why are we so zealous of “destroying our surroundings”? Arent we doing so to exhibit our “achievements” of civil construction?At the end of the day, we have to find a way out! Only with the combination of transforming of economic planning, guiding from experts, and supervising from the general public, can the situation turn optimistic! Currently, department concerned, aided by experts, are working forcefully to boost the green-economy. However, if there were also effective supervision from the general public, which requires assistance from the mass media, economic construction would go green and reasonable.（三）仿写练习：1.senseHave you ever noticed the “great changes” of your hometown? If you have, you may sense（闪光词汇，可以用来替换find） the same regret and sorrow （这种列举能力是我们大多数考生很欠缺的，这需要我们平时细致的收集、积累。）as the retired man does in the pictures.（1） Have you ever noticed the “great change” of our daily life? If you have ,you may sense the same worry and sorrow as the mother does in the picture.（2） Have you ever noticed the “great change” of tourist attractions? If you have ,you may sense the same sorrowandregret（痛心遗憾）as the old people does in the picture.（3） Have you ever noticed the growing tendency for people to work at home in stead of in offices? If you have, you may sense the same convenience and comfort as the people dose in the picture.2. A newlybuilt+名词; spur ones excitementA newly-built bridge （很闪光却很简单的语法结构A newlybuilt+名词）over the river attracts（也可以换成draws） the attention of him and spurs（词典中背了那么久，现在知道它的其中一种表达了吧：spur ones excitement）(1)A newly-built school in the city draws the attention of him and spurs his excitement.(2)A newly-invented machine draws the attention of him and spurs his excitement.(3)A newly-developed alternative energy draws scientists attention and spurs their excitement.3. Admittedly公认地; label标志; Admittedly（高级连接词，相当于there is no doubt that）, economic development labels(超闪光词汇) the advancement of society!（1）Admittedly , the rapid development of internet labels the advancement of the society.（2）Admittedly , the rapid development of cultural exchange labels the growing communication between two countries.(3)Admittedly, the wide use of Internet in our daily life labels the advancement of the society.4. The author of the cartoon, through the sight of the aged man（主谓断开的插入语表达）, is imparting （闪光词汇，可替换tell等）the notion that never sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits（背：规范表达）.(1)The author of the picture, through the sight of the men ,is imparting the notion that we should always hold an optimistic attitude towards our lives. (2)The author of the picture, through the sight of the girl, is imparting the notion that cultural exchange is of significance in this constantly changing world.(3)The author of the picture, through the sight of the tourists, is imparting the notion that environmental protection is urgently needed.5. sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits. 牺牲环境换取经济利益(1)We should always bear it in mind;” never sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits.”(2)Nowadays, there is a general debate on whether we should continue to sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits.6.However, never place too much emphasis on it, or we may go to an extreme!经典转折衔接句7.chimneys brought big bucks to enterprises but big troubles to the general public, foggy air for one? Havent you ever found that urbanization offers people