英语作文写作笔记(doc 7页).doc

大作文段落分配：15=4 +（78）+ 4【40字+80字+40字】第一段 （第一句）Describe/depict描述画面（宏观总括）The picture above gives us a vivid description of .(two disabled people,此处不应详细描写)（第二句）just as（画面细节描述）（2）Just as we can see from the picture, （第三句）justgo（谚语举例，可省略）（第四句）aim at图片设计的目的(点题)Obviously/Undoubtely, the picture aims at reminding (/convincing us) of第二段(微观方面+宏观方面/个人+社会/正面论证+反面论证 阐述主题的重要性或深刻含义)（第一大句）主题句（引言铺垫）is extremely important to us, especially to.。The implied meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of (从方面)mutual help and coopration.（第二大句）第一层意思(12)/ （第二大句）第一层意思(13)正面论证As is known to us all,.To begin with ,（第三大句）第二层意思(12)/ （第三大句）第二层意思(13)反面论证Beside,.（第四大句）第三层意思(12)/Last but not least,.（第五大句）收尾再次强调主题词（1）As a result,is essential to bothand第三段（采取措施、提倡主题）(4)（第一句）Form all mentioned above,therefore,we can come to a conclusion that we should put great emphasis on(主题)In my view ,some necessary measures must be taken to make people realize that(主题)Therefore ,we should keep it in mind“名言” (第二句）(行动上怎么做)/（微观总结）First of all,For one thing,.(第三句)（意识怎么做）/（宏观总结）In addition,For another,(第四句)(号召或预测)Only in these ways ,can we (build up a society full of harmony).Only by.,can ,and only in this way ,can小作文(致歉信)段落分配：2+3+3+1第一段（第一句）自报家门（背景）I am Li Ming. . fromwho（第二句）写信目的（目的）Now ,I am writing .to(目的)for(由于)第二段（描述事件过程）（第一句）介绍事件背景During ., .（第二句）介绍事件发生过程（第三句）:略表歉意I feel quite sorry for this.第三段：（解决办法）（第一句）办法一（第二句）让步，办法二第四段：（诚挚歉意）Again，please forgive me for the convenience caused you.写作范例：Dear sir. I am and I intend to because I learned from the newspaper that the children have been deprived of the right to(背景 目的 原因)You need to make two factors into consideration when you are looking for such a candidate. on the one hand ,.on the other hand . the girl student with outstanding academic achievements will be preferred . （要求）I intend to carry out my plan as follows: for one thing for another ,（行动）I am looking forward to .thank you in advance（致谢）英语句法：句前状语+前置定语（主语）+后置定语+状语（谓语）+补语+前置定语（宾语）+后置定语1） 主+动The price is increasing due to .2） 主+动+宾In order to ensure good health ,we should develop good living habits Enhancing the is ,in the long run, benefical to the stability of3） 主+动+主补(很少用)We are eager to turn our dreams into reality.4） 主+动+间宾+直宾The social practice offers us multiple opportunities to apply what we have learn from books to the real practiceTraveling abroad offers us a good chance to have a better understanding of the western cultures , which is benefical to the friendship between the and 5） 主+动+宾+宾补The extensive use of internet has made our daily life more convenient and efficient than ever before .especially in the fields of经典句型：Were it left to me to make a choice between the two points , I would not hasitate for a moment to prefer the former.It is hard to imagine what