学人教版必修一Unit4EarthquakesPeriod5Writing课件（17张）.ppt

unit4 earthquakes writing 一 文体感知1 文体特点新闻报道是记叙文的一种 其特点是以事实为依据 对人的经历或事实给予明确的 实事求是的报道 写作过程中要保持事件的真实性 准确性 及时性 语言要准确 简练 通俗易懂 新闻报道 2 亮点句式 1 itisreportedthatanactivitywasorganizedtogetthestudentsclosetonature 2 asisreported accordingtothereport aterribleearthquakehappened 3 theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever 4 whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives 5 apartfromknowledge wealsolearnedtocooperatewitheachotherandcametorealizetheimportanceofteamwork 6 theactivitybenefitedusalot theactivitywasofgreatbenefittous theactivitywasbeneficialtous 3 写作模板 导语 inordertoencouragethestudentsto ourschoolorganizeda on 时间 at 地点 which 正文 itwasa day 介绍天气 first ly firstofall then 介绍活动的过程 finally 评价 benefitedusalot wasofbenefittous notonlydidit italso whata n activity 二 典题演练星光中学 xingguanghighschool 近期举行了一次登山活动 假定你是学校英语报记者 请写一篇短文 报道此次活动 内容包括 1 时间与地点 4月10日 大青山 daqingmountain 2 活动的过程 3 你对于这次活动的评论 注意 1 词数120个左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 1 完成句子 1 为了鼓励同学们参加户外运动 我们学校于4月10日组织了登山活动 ourschoolorganizedamountain climbingactivityonapril10 2 我们几百个人参加了这项活动 hundredsofus thisactivity 3 有些人落后了 some inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise tookpartin fellbehind 4 其他的人愿意来提供帮助 otherswouldcomeand 5 我们沐浴在阳光下 wewere sunshine 6 我们高兴地欢呼跳跃 wejumpedandcheered 7 这不仅让我们接近了大自然 从沉重的学业中得以放松 也增强了我们的友谊 itnotonlygotus natureandgaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus offerhelp bathedin withjoy closeto 2 句式升级 8 用定语从句合并 1 2 句 inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise ourschoolorganizedamountain climbingactivityonapril10 9 用when合并 3 4 句 10 用非谓语动词合并 5 6 句 wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy 11 用倒装句改写第 7 句 usclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus whichhundredsofustookpartin whensomefellbehind otherswouldcomeandofferhelp bathedinsunshine notonlydiditget inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise ourschoolorganizedamountain climbingactivityonapril10 whichhundredsofustookpartin itwasaniceday at8 00a m wegatheredonthefootofdaqingmountainandsetoffforthetopinhighspirits allthewaywewerechatting singingandlaughing enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery whensomefellbehind otherswouldcomeandofferhelp about2hourslater weallreachedthetop bathedinsunshine wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy theactivitybenefitedusalot notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus whatawonderfulactivity 5月1日 高二 3 班的学生志愿者liyue和zhanghua去阳光敬老院 sunshinenursinghome 开展志愿者活动 送水果 打扫 聊天等 假如你是校英语报的记者 请按下列要点用英语写一篇100词左右的新闻报道 内容包括 1 时间 地点 人物 活动 2 老人们的反应 3 简短评论 注意 报道的标题和记者姓名已给出 studentvolunteersbroughtsunshinetotheelderly bychenjie schoolnewspaper 答案 studentvolunteersbroughtsunshinetotheelderlyonmayday liyueandzhanghua studentsfromclassthree gradetwo wenttosunshinenursinghomeanddidsomevoluntarywork upontheirarrival liyueandzhanghuawerewarmlywelcomed andrespectfully theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits then theystartedworkingatonce cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor everythingdone theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness theysaidi