英语基础写作-人物介绍.ppt

基础写作 人物简介专题 人物简介 1 属于记叙文体裁2 基本类型 记人 叙事 写景3 常见高考书面表达题 介绍同学 朋友 老师 父母 名人等等4 记叙方法 顺叙 倒叙 插叙5 注意事项 选材代表性 精炼 感人 不拖泥带水 注意5W1H 人称时态 6 常见段落结构 主题句 发展句 结论句 一 人物简介的写作步骤 1 Birthdayandbirthplace2 Familybackground3 Educationbackground4 Bigeventsinhisorherlife inorderoftime 5 Evaluation 二 人物简介写作常用的词组及句子 1 Birthdayandbirthplace was werebornin on 她与1867年12月7日出生与波兰 eg ShewasborninPolandonNov 7 1867 2 Familybackground was werebornin intoapoor richfamilyhis herfamilywassopoorthat his herfatherwasverystrictwithhim thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy youngasachild asaboyof15duringhis herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin liveahappy hardlife 亚伯拉罕 林肯 一个贫穷家庭的孩子 与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky eg AbrahamLincoln thesonofapoorfamily wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12 1809 查理 狄更斯出生贫穷 只受很少的教育 Bornofapoorclerk sfamily CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling 3 Educationbackground beadmittedto collegegraduatefrom departmentof universitywhenatcollege hemajoredin receiveadoctor sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudies 4 Bigeventsinone slife 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flagtothepeoplewatchingonTVathome 32期报纸读写任务 Thispassagemainlytellsustheimportantroleparentsplaysintheirchildren seducation Parentsshouldalwaysencouragetheirchildrenandhelpthemlearnsomethingfromfailure Inmyopinion parentscanplayaveryimportantrolenotonlyinchildren slifebutalsointheireducation Iftheparentsarestrict theirchildrenwillsurelytaketheirstudymoreseriously Ifachildisoftenencouragedbyhisparents hewillcertainlybemoreconfident Takemyselfasanexample whenIwasinJunior1 IdidverybadlyinanEnglishexamandIfeltverysad IthoughtIwasn tabletolearnEnglishwell Aftermymotherlearntaboutit shetoldmetobepatient ShesaidshebelievedIcoulddobetterifIworkedharderandwasmorecarefulthenexttime HercomfortandencouragementwasofgreathelptomeandnowIdomuchbetteratEnglish Samplewritings 基础写作实例剖析 你是李华 申请到一家外资企业工作 对方要求你用英语写一篇短文 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容 介绍自己的基本情况 短文应包括下表所列全部内容 实例剖析 写作分析 通过认真审题 根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点 文体 记叙文人称 根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称 要点 李华的出生年月及地点 学历 所学主要课程 特长 获奖情况 业余爱好 实例剖析 短语及句型 bebornin afterthat begoodat dowellin 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Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero 2006年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷 国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的 和平 友谊 夏令营活动 要求报名者提交英文个人简历 假设你是王姗 请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历 Onepossibleversion I mWangShan agirlofsixteen presentlyattendingBeijingYangguangMiddle Ilikemusic especiallyclassicalmusicandI malsointerestedinphotographybecauseitallowsmetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylifeandthankstomyhobbies I vemademanyfriends Infact IlikemeetingnewpeopleandenjoytalkingwiththembecauseIbelieveweallneedhelpfromeachother Iappreciatefriends help andIamwilingtohelpanyoneinneed Ilovelife IloveMotherNature alsoIlovepeace onthecontrary Ihateanyformofviolence IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampsincetherewouldbeagreatopportunitytomakefriendswithyoungpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandlearnabouttheircultures 假定你是李华 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办 现在正在招募志愿者 你希望成为其中一员 请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信 内容应包括 1 个人情况 年龄 性别 学历2 个人条件 英语好 爱好体育 善于交往 乐于助人 熟悉本地情况3 承诺 提供最佳服务 2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题全国卷 III DearSir Madam MynameisLiHua IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames Iamaboy girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnowIamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames first IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell second Igetalongwithotherseasily whichisespeciallyusefulforavolunteer third I mreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded MypromiseistoofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames Pleaseconsidermyrequest andI mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply Yoursfaithfully LiHua 2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题湖南卷 请根据下面的英文短诗 展开适当的想象 写一篇短文 标题为 MyTeacherMrMooreThere sateacherMr Moore Whoislovelyandthirty four Alwaysencouragingustotry Heleadsustoaworldof why Wealladmirehimmoreandmore 注意 1 不得照抄短诗原文 2 必须结合短诗的内容 发挥想象 适当展开 3 必须突出短诗的主题 结构完整 语意连贯 4 短文不能写成诗歌形式 5 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容 Onepossibleversion Ofallmyteachers Mr Mooreistheonewhoimpressesmemost thoughheis34 helooksveryyoungforhisage andhe soneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool Comparedwithotherteachers Mr Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting Inhisopinion weshouldnotonlyknow what butalsounderstand why so insteadofgivingusanswersimmediately heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswheneverheputsforwardquestions Besides withhishelp we velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblem whatawonderfulworldof why heleadsusto Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehemverymuch 爱因斯坦于1879年三月十四日生于德国 他小时候喜欢问很多问题 他喜欢数学和科学 但是他比较害羞 不太喜欢学校 17岁到瑞士学习 为了赚足够的钱 他当过教师 后来在政府部门工作 1905年他获得博士学位 1905 1915年 他开始研究工作 这些研究导致了他在物理方面的许多新发现 1918年 他已经世界闻名 1921年 他获得诺贝尔物理奖 并被邀请到许多国家作演讲 爱因斯坦是20世纪最伟大的科学家 他于1955年四月十八日逝世 终年76岁 Samplewriting EinsteinwasborninGermanyonMarch14th 1879 Whenhewasayou