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书面表达与短文改错 书面表达 Approachestopros cons 10月段考书面表达下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表 请根据下面所给的词汇和短语写一篇英语小短文 70 的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献 帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作 带来很多个人利益 为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验 为自己创造机遇 增强信心 自觉意识 良好的交际能力和领导才能 25 的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬 浪费时间 耽误学习 5 的学生无明确态度漠不关心 我对志愿工作的看法 对立观点展开议论写作 这种题型一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立的观点 要求考生发表自己的看法或见解 这类题型的基本模式可分四段 1 对一个讨论的主题 仁者见仁智者见智2 有人认为 3 有人认为 4 我的看法是 参考模板总 分原则Wehavehadaheateddiscussionabout on Opinionsaredividedonthematter Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsthematter Somestudentsthink believe holdtheviewthat However othersarguethat AsfarasIamconcerned I Thereasonsareasfollows First Secondly Inconclusion Inaword 文章框架结构Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Therestofthestudentsdon thaveaclearattitudetowardit nordotheycareaboutit Iholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous 一些关键词的处理志愿工作voluntarywork对社会做贡献makeacontributiontothesociety一件有意义的工作aworthwhile meaningfuljob个人利益personalbenefits创造机遇openupopportunities增强信心buildupone sconfidence无报酬withoutpayment fornothing Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theyconsiderthatitcanmakeacontributiontosocietyanditisaworthwhilejobtohelpothers Itcanalsobringpersonalbenefitsandwillcontributetotheirfuturebecausetheycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsfortheirfuturecareer Voluntaryworkoftenopensupopportunitiesforthem builduptheirconfidence raisetheirself awareness andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadershipability 25 ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theythinktheworkisdonewithoutpaymentanditisawasteoftime Therestofthestudentsdon thaveclearattitudetowardit nordotheycareaboutit IthinkIholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous Nomatterhowsmallitis itwillhelpmakeadifference Despitenopayment wecanacquirevaluableexperience PossibleVersion Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theyconsiderthatitcanmakeacontributiontosocietyanditisaworthwhilejobtohelpothers Itcanalsobringpersonalbenefitsandwillcontributetotheirfuturebecausetheycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsfortheirfuturecareer Voluntaryworkoftenopensupopportunitiesforthem builduptheirconfidence raisetheirself awareness andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadershipability Readoutthecomposition 25 ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theythinktheworkisdonewithoutpaymentanditisawasteoftime Therestofthestudentsdon thaveaclearattitudetowardit nordotheycareaboutit IthinkIholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous Nomatterhowsmallitis itwillhelpmakeadifference Despitenopayment wecanacquirevaluableexperience 杨洋Thereisaheateddiscussiononvloluntaryworkthesedays Statisticsshowthat70 ofthestudentsarewillingtotakepartinvoluntarywork Theythinkbeingvolunteerscanmakecontributionstothesociety Itisameaningjobforhighschoolstudentstohelpothers What smore doingvoluntaryworkisaneffectivewaytoobtainvaluableskillsandexperiences Itcanhelppeoplegraspopportunitiesandbuilduptheirconfidence Thosestudentsalsoconsiderleadershipandabilitiestocommunicatewithotherstobeimportant andthesecanbeacquiredfromvoluntarywork However 25 ofthestudentshavetheoppositeopinions Theysaystudentswillwastealotoftime whichisbadfortheirhealth Anyway youcan tgetanyrewardfromthesevoluntarywork Besides 5 ofthestudentsdon tcareaboutthevoluntarywork Theyhaven tformedanyclearopinionssofar AsfarasI mconcerned voluntaryworkcanhelpusalot Firstly wecaneasilymakeanynewfriends Secondly studentswillbeabletoachievecourage faithfulnessandotherwonderfulpersonalitiesfromvoluntarywork Thus Ithinkitisgreatforstudentstotakepartinvoluntarywork 储备一些固定句型结构如何多样化表达不同看法1 People doingvoluntarywork 2 People doingvoluntarywork 3 People doingvoluntarywork 4 doingvoluntaryworkisworthwhile doingvoluntaryworkisawasteoftime doingvoluntarywork Everycoinhastwosides have take adopt assume differentattitudestowards havedifferentopinionson takedifferentviewsof on Somepeoplebelievethat Othersarguethat Opinionsaredividedon 如何表示赞成 70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudents voluntarywork 70 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork areinfavorof arefor thinkof positively support 如何表示反对25 ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork 25 ofthestudents doingvoluntarywork areagainst objectto oppose thinkof negatively areopposedto 如何表达个人看法Ithinkeachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety Inmyopinion SofarasIamconcerned Personally Iholdtheviewthat 在写作中除了使用以上谈到的重点句型外 还应该注意文章的逻辑结构和五种过渡词的使用 例如 1 表示举例时使用 forexample suchas take forexample anotherexampleof hereareafewexamples namely等 2 表示列举时使用 first second third finally tobeginwith foronething foranother等 3 表示归纳总结时使用 inaword inall tosumup inbrief inshort等 4 要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用 inaddition what smore furthermore ontopofthat besides moreover等 5 表示转折时使用 however while onthecontrary等 May25 SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly Shedidn tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop ShesaidthatImadeitdirty Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest Igotangry Iquarreledwithher Themanagerturnedup Heaskedwhatwasthematter Heknewallaboutthis heapologizedtomeandcriticized 批评 thesalesgirl Theychangedanothercoatforme Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily However Atthebeginning Inaword sothat Justthen Justatthatmoment After Atlast Intheend So Andthen May25 SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly shedidn tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop ShesaidthatImadeitdirty Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest Iquarreledwithher themanagerturnedup Heaskedwhatwasthematter heknewallaboutthis heapologizedtomeandcriticized 批评 thesalesgirl Theychangedanothercoatforme Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily However Atthebeginning Andthen Inaword Igotsoangrythat Assoonas Themoment Justatthatmoment 1 表列举 forexample suchas namely etc2 表补充 besides inaddition moreover what smore etc3 表对比 inspiteof onthecontrary despite etc4 表原因 becauseof thanksto dueto owingto asaresultof etc5 表结果 therefore thus asaresult so etc6 表结论 onthewhole inaword inbrief tosumup generallyspeaking etc7 表转折 however nevertheless yet etc Differentstudentsassumedifferentattitudestowardsvoluntaryworkaccordingtothesurvey Wearegladtoseethat70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Intheiropinion makingacontributiontosocietyandlendingahelpinghandtoothersisaworthwhilejob Atthesametime itbringsalotofpersonalbenefits Theycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsforfuturecareer What smore voluntaryworkopensupvastquantitiesofopportunitiesforthemtobuildupconfidence raiseself awareness andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadership However 25ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theyconsiderthatworkingwithoutpaymentisawasteoftime 5 ofthestudentschoosetobeneutral Inotherwords theydon tcareaboutitatall Inmyopinion we dbettertakethechancetoparticipateinvoluntarywork nomatterhowsmallitis Differentstudentsassumedifferentattitudestowardsvoluntaryworkaccordingtothesurvey Wearegladtoseethat70 ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Intheiropinion makingacontributiontosocietyandlendingahelpinghandtoothersisaworthwhilejob Atthesametime itbringsalotofpersonalbenefits Theycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsforfuturecareer What smore voluntaryworkopensupvastquantitiesofopportunitiesforthemtobuildconfidence raiseself awareness andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadership However 25ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork Theyconsiderthatworkingwithoutpaymentisawasteoftime 5 ofthestudentschoosetobeneutral Inotherwords theydon tcareaboutitatall Inmyopinion we dbettertakethechancetoparticipateinvoluntarywork nomatterhowsmallitis Thesurveyshowstheopinionsofhighschoolstudentsonvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudentsareinfavorofvoluntarywork Bydoingthework wecanmakecontributionstothesociety Andthereismuchpointinhelpingothers Itcanbringuslotsofpersonalbenefits Wecanalsogainpreciousskillsandexperiencewhichwecanmakeuseofinthefuture What smore takingpartinvoluntaryworkisawaytoopenupopportunities Furthermore ithelpstobuildupourconfidenceandraiseself consciousness Ourabilityofcommunicationandleadershipwillalsobedevelopedbydoingvoluntarywork However 25 ofthestudentsdon tapproveofvoluntarywork Theyconsidervoluntaryworkasawasteoftimebecausetheyworkwithoutpayment Therestofthestudentsdon thaveaclearattitudetowardsvoluntarywork Inmyopinion aswearemembersofthesociety allofusshouldsparenoefforttomakeitbetterandbetter Thesurveyshowstheopinionsofhighschoolstudentsonvoluntarywork 70 ofthestudentsareinfavorofvoluntarywork Bydoingthework wecanmakecontributionstothesociety Andthereismuchpointinhelpingothers Itcanbringuslotsofpersonalbenefits Wecanalsogainpreciousskillsandexperiencewhichwecanmakeuseofinthefuture What smore takingpartinvoluntaryworkisawaytoopenupopportunities Furthermore ithelpstoraiseourconfidenceandbuildupself consciousness Ourabilityofcommunicationandleadershipwillalsobedevelopedbydoingvoluntarywork However 25 ofthestudentsdon tapproveofvoluntarywork Theyconsidervoluntaryworkasawasteoftimebecausetheyworkwithoutpayment Therestofthestudentsdon thaveaclearattitudetowardsvoluntarywork Inmyopinion aswearemembersofthesociety allofusshouldsparenoefforttomakeitbetterandbetter 典型错误70 ofthestudentsareinfavorofjoininginvoluntaryworks 70 ofthestudentsareinfavorofjoininginvoluntarywork workworksworkjob 2 70 ofthestudentsapprovethatdevotethemselvestothesocietyisameaningfulwork 70 ofthestudentsapprovethatdevotingthemselvestothesocietyisameaningfuljob 3 However wehavetoleavetimestudyingandfinishingourhomework However wehavetoleavetimetostudyandfinishourhomework Therearealso5 ofthestudentshavenoclearideaaboutit 5 ofthestudentshavenoclearideaaboutit Therearealso5 ofthestudentshavingnoclearideaaboutit Therearealso5 ofthestudentswhohavenoclearideaaboutit Therearealso5 ofthestudentswithnoclearideaaboutit 5 Thereasonsfortheydon twanttojointhevoluntaryworkareasfollow Thereasonswhytheydon twanttojoininthevoluntaryworkareasfollows 高考链接002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题最近 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表所提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 60 的同学认为 1 不应收门票2 公园是公众休闲的地方3 如收票 需建大门 围墙 会影响城市形象40 的同学认为1 应收门票 但票价不宜高2 支付园林工人工资3 购新花木 I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees Ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged 门票anentrancefee免费freeofcharge城市形象theappearance imageofacity园林工人gardener I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway Whatismore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity Ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees However theysuggestthatfeesshouldbechargedlow DearEditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks Opinionsaredividedonthequsstion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway What smore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity Ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees Theysuggest however feesshoul